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Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

I love this story, please update.

 Reviewer: Kristi Sandberg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 06:52 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

Guuuurrrrrrrllllllll, I don' tknow where you went, but you need to come back and finish this story...this chapter was THE BOMB!  On the edge of my seat, riveting!! Great job with the emotional scenes...really great!

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 11:28 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

This is my favorite story! You make me want to go out & find a Bobby Mercer of my own! Please post some new chapters soon. I'm going through withdrawl!

 Reviewer: Paisley Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 06:22 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

OMG!!!!!!!!  WHAT DID YOU JUST DO TO ME???? MY HEART OH MY I CANT EVEN... THIS WAS CRAZY ASS GOOD....

Seriously I thought the last chapter was great but this just took that one over wow I'm in shock right now I'm scurred Girrrllll I'm scurred I was pissed at Bobby the way he was talking to her but she laid it into him and now she's oh she's please tell me they aren't hurt I couldn't go on.....I'd be so depressed...

great chapter love can't wait for that update



Author's Response:

you had me laughing my ass off at work! 

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 09:59 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

Absolutely freaking amazing!!!!!!! The scene is the car was heat griping I hope she forgives him but she's right she needs time now he's gonna put her on a plane? I don't think so Karinas not going to have that....

love,love this story!!!! 

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 09:16 am
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

I've been reading this religiously for the past days and I can't even begin to say how great it's been. Welcome back and it's so great that you're bringing closure to Baby and Bobby (love the leads- you did such a great job writing them so fleshy and sinewy).
The only thing I have to criticize is the sad face the lack of the "next" button caused me to feel inside lol. Even the bad guys are great, more Sweeting the room and can't wait for fowler and Terrance ('specially that Tee) to get the "shit storm" coming to then.
Keep up the fantastic work as I'm more that loving the ride you're taking us on. Thank you.

 Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 05:02 am
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

Was right the rewrite was better lovEd how she forgave him

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 02 2014 12:36 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

No story better 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

This one was just as powerful as the first but I liked the lovin' in this one it made it hotter. Anyway,  I love them both. 

 Reviewer: vmck Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Kristi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

Speechless 

 Reviewer: Kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 10:14 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

This story rocks, please keep it coming.

 Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 07:25 pm
Title: Chapter 14 Rewrite - (Unchained)

I felt so much this time round. The first time was great. This time was perfect 

 Reviewer: Me been Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2014 07:24 pm
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

WOW!!! What a powerful,  awesome, amazing chapter.   I didn't realize it until after I finished but I was holding my breath the entire fight scene in the car. I felt like I was there....

 

Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing talents with us. I can't wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: vmck Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 04:37 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

What in the world did Angel find and why does karina have to be dropped off at the airport??? add more when you can.

 Reviewer: tiffany37 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 04:08 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

Mmhm.  Mmhm.. Yes to this whole chapter. 

 Reviewer: FriendSisForwardCupola Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 02:42 am
Title: Follow My Lead

Incredible. I'm happy. 

 Reviewer: FriendSisForwardCupola Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 02:24 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

I love how your writing this just as I loved the movie keep on can't wait for the blow out Over the fire to their moms house & for Kat & Bobby to have their talk

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 09:37 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

I don't like ol' lawyer chick, but I am glad that she got them out of the police station.  It was time for Bobby acknowledges how detrimental his actions were to he and Karina's relationship and that forgiveness was needed on both sides in order for them to move on.  I hope its Karina not Bobby who gets to kick Terrance's ass for being a psycho.  

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 09:09 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

The burned miss eves house down,

 Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 04:16 am
Title: Follow My Lead

He's got a lot to make up for

 Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 04:15 am
Title: Trojan Horse

Thanks for not giving up on this one.

 Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 04:14 am
Title: Are U Mine

I'm back! I loved it the second time around!

 Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 04:12 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

What just happened?

 Reviewer: Me been Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 04:07 am
Title: Chained to Your Side (Alternate)

This is my favorite story on here, I love it.

 Reviewer: Kristi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 02:12 am


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