Reviews For Mercy
Title: Bullet Proof

You just about gave me a heart attack with this chapter!

Reviewer: OMG Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2010 07:19 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

Awesome!

Reviewer: OMG! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2010 06:15 am

Title: Character List

Please don't kill off Jackie.. I boo hoo'd when he died in the movie.. It would be nice if he survives in your short..

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: I cried also... we'll have to wait and see how it plays out. I honestly don't know if I'm gonna kill him or not. It may be him... or it may be someone else. You never know with me.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2010 05:33 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

Great update.  This is good and there so much to uncover.  I think bABY MIGHT need reinforcement.

Author's Response: lol You're probably right.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2010 01:08 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

I haven't read it yet but I'm so excited too. I know it's going to be good...I have been waiting for this chapter.

Author's Response: Well, I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2010 06:13 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

I know Sweet didn't think Bobby was gonna walk in to a trap. Come on now! Super chapter!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2010 05:09 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

Yay an update! Terrance Terrance Terrance, got to wonder if he is one the cops Victor was talking about. hope Baby will be able to find out, without blowing her cover.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 05:30 pm

Title: Boss,of Bosses

Love the long chapters... Sweet was put in check. lol Paster piece!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 08:29 am

Title: Wingin' It

Bobby stole my heart in this chapter. looking forward to the meeting.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 07:13 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

Karina is a fille chanceuse. (Lucky girl.) lol if it was me, I would've gotten caught ASAP. xD 

Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 07:13 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

Wow! I've got to catch up. This was a powerful chapter. Karina's a strong woman.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 06:11 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

this was awesome! So far the best chapter and that really means something cause they're all great. I don't even know what else to say! Add soon!

Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2010 06:08 am

Title: Wingin' It

Bobby's doing the right thing by not letting losing his daughter cloud his judment. This meeting with Victor Sweet should be fun. I wonder if Bobby will be able to keep his cool tho?

Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 05:04 am

Title: Character List

Your story is so good it made me sign up. I had been lurking for the longest just reading but I had to sign-up to give you a review. Wonderful story so far...I love it. I can't wait to read what is next.



Author's Response: Wow! Really? It's great you joined, this is a realy cool site. Thank you so much for taking the time to do that and leave a review.

Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2010 11:26 am

Title: Wingin' It

OMG! I thought I was seeing stuff when I saw that this story was updated, I couldn't click on it fast enough LOL! LOVE LOVE the update and Can't Wait to see how Karina and Sofia get out of this.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 11:46 pm

Title: Character List

love it.....but please dont kill jack like in the movie. please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 



Author's Response: lol I promise to keep that in mind.

Reviewer: neechi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 07:13 am

Title: Wingin' It

glad you added. add again when you can. Love the story. mark wahlberg is my favorite actor.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 06:44 am

Title: Wingin' It

Thanks for the update thanks for taking the time to add this. Bless wishes to you and your family.  Both Karina and Bobby trying to protect eachother that sweet but they are doing it alone. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That really means alot.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 06:41 am

Title: Wingin' It

What's Angel got planned? He better be smart about whatever he's gonna do. I really love this story!

Reviewer: OMG! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 06:24 am

Title: Wingin' It

I'm dieing to hear from Victor Sweet! Please don't keep me awaiting!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 06:08 am

Title: Wingin' It

OMG! OMG! A new chapter! Yes! Going to read right now!

Reviewer: OMG! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2010 05:54 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

still waiting for an update please

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2010 03:21 pm

Title: Plan 2 Fail

So,so sad! Karina's been through so much. Bobby's got his work cut out for him.

Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2010 07:55 pm

Title: Plan 2 Fail

please give another chapter

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2010 05:11 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

am at the edge of my seat will she be caught .she should have given him a chance to explain

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 20 2010 06:49 am



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