All this deep, eye opening fantastic stuff happened in this update but I can't stop giggle at Angel saying, "I heard him say ya momma." I LMFAO!! Cheezing pretty hard from that one!!
Author's Response: lol that was pretty funny! Thanks for commenting! Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2011 01:30 am
So much emotion. This chapter was slamed full of every damn thing. Action! Comedy! Love! Romance! Sex! I'm really excited that you're back. of course this chapter was worth the wait.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 04:36 pm
I've been meaning to tell you how sorry I am about your grandfather passing. My prays are with you and your family.
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 09:28 am
Awesome!
This was way intense. I take my hat off to you.
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 09:26 am
Sorry
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 04 2011 07:58 am
My condolenses and best wishes to you and your family during this time.
Reviewer: XxemoRunnerxX Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2010 09:20 pm
Take all the time you need.My prayers are with you ,and thank you agin for sharing your gift .
Reviewer: Diarylover Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 17 2010 03:38 am
Sorry for your lost.
S
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 14 2010 02:07 am
I am sorry for your loss.
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 13 2010 08:07 pm
Take all the time you need. This is the first time I am replying but I want you to know I have truly enjoyed your version of the story. I am looking forward to the Bobby/Baby interaction.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: November 13 2010 07:27 pm
Sorry for your loss take as much time you need.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: November 13 2010 04:07 pm
Please Please Please finish this story I didn't know you hadn't updated since 10/21/10 or I would have never started it for fear you wouldn't finish but now it is so greeaatt i can't put it down. Did I mention that I really really want you to finish?
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 12 2010 09:22 pm
I recently found this story and it's WONDERFUL!! I love the movie so I was really excited to see this. Please continue this story. you're doing an awesome job. I'm totally invested and how could you leave us hanging like that??? LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: CapitalPeach Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2010 02:41 pm
great chapter. is bobby going to even have time to be mad that baby stayed the night with terrence? ooh intrigue. i dig it.
* update soon. update soon. *
Reviewer: beatrix kiddo Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 09 2010 04:59 pm
Banging @$$ chapter. BTW: "guttersnipe" comment was hilarious.
Love the way you incorporate scenes from the movie that mke us THINK we know what's going to happen and then switches it up on us.
No delay on the next chapter. I'm excited. This is THEE best story on this site.
Reviewer: spoogie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2010 09:19 pm
please don't kill jackie off let him live please i hated that he was killed in the movie.
Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 23 2010 09:54 am
How could you LOL! OMG my face was glued to the screen and then you leave us hanging like this. But to the story I feel sorry for Terrance he really had feelings for Baby I didn't want him to die, just stop taking his jealousy out on Bobby, oh and I wish Baby would have stayed at the scene because i know someone's gonna find some evidence or a witness that would let them she was with Terrance at that time. uh this story so good please... update soon.
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 23 2010 12:26 am
I hope you don't kill Jack in this story. I know he dies in the movie, but come on.
Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 07:40 pm
I still think Terrence was involve eventhough he said he wasn't. It seems it an all out war and somebody wants to keep something from coming out so elimate the threat. I am glad Karina made it out alive now its time for her and Bobby to work together. Great update.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 11:51 am
well I have to admit this has to one of my favorites stories. I can't wait till you update again. I need some bobby/baby interaction. I'm happy that you didn't kill jackie off. I hope baby tell bobby the whole truth so that they can help each other. Bobby needs to treat sophie better. He is so rude sometimes.. but i still like him(love the bad boys)
Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 10:21 am
So good! I was not expecting Terrence to die at all...great twist. Poor Karina...things just keep on getting more interesting. I was hoping as I was scrolling down I would get to see Bobby's reaction to Karina. I know that is going to be good. I can't wait to read it. Love this story so much and all the different twists and turns. Great cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. I'm glad that Karina doesn't have to pretend to love Terrence in order to help Bobby. So Bobby is a killer? I knew he was doing some shady stuff while working for Sweet but I didn't think he was in that deep. I've been dying for some Bobby/Baby interaction...can't wait for the next installment.
Reviewer: lostalongtheway Signed [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 08:59 am
OMG!!! This chapter was Crazy!! LOL!! I can't to find out what happens next. I wonder what was Terrace 'really' sorry about. Great Story!! Please post again soon :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 08:29 am
I bet bobby's gonna want to kill terrence all over again once he finds out what he did to Karaina.
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 08:22 am
Karina's been through so much. She must truely love Bobby and his family to put her life on the line for them like that. I enjoyed how you blended the scene with Jack from the movie. I have to admit a though he was going to die for a second there. You were trying to fool us weren't you? Grand chapter!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 07:44 am
Speechless
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 22 2010 07:27 am