Title: Chapter 78 Happy Birthday David! We love you!

So glad to see you posted an update!
I cannot stand those scheming girls and I cannot stand how Larissa hasn't figured Gabby out yet

Reviewer: Paisley Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2025 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 78 Happy Birthday David! We love you!

Oh man! The situation is emotional, complicated and messy for David. He's trying to manage what's expected of him on all fronts. And he's getting lost in it all. The one person who presumably is there to help relieve some of the pressure - Larissa, brings her own insecure BS to pile on for David to forever defend himself against. If he tells her about all the crap Gabby pulls, she trips; if he doesn't, she trips. He's always in a no-win here. 

Ironically, if things fell apart, I think she would probaly lose him to that more than anything else because he truly loves her and is trying to stick with her. She has to recognize what's happening here and make up her mind to believe in him or not. Larissa's not making herself a safe place for David and he needs that. All the reassurance comes from him to ease her mind when she spirals. That's exhausting and unsustainable. At least he has his boys.

And while Larissa wasn't wrong, it wasn't her place to blurt that stuff out to Ms. Gloria like that. That's something David is going to have to talk to his mother about. I think she feels she needs him more than she wants to admit, even though its not fair to him; and being rather possessive of him at the same time. Its also probably best for her to stop her low key manipulation where Gabby is concerned because that girl is a special kind of headcase she really doesn't want her son invloved with.

Can I express any more how much I loathe the likes of Valentina! That what makes her worse than Gabby; she thinks this is fun and games to do this type of crap but you reap what you sow; and there is gonna come a situation of her own to give her something to do.

This was soooo good!! 

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Date: June 16 2025 09:12 pm

Title: Chapter 78 Happy Birthday David! We love you!

I don't know who is making me want to smack them harder, Gabby, David's mom or Valentina the Enabler, if she was any kinda friend(which she is not) she would be completley honest with Gabby and tell her that there are plenty of other boys around and to leave David alone. and drop Valentina as a friend.

As for David's mother, she needs top see that Davis is not the parent to those kids, and that he's just a young adult himself and  learn to stand on her own.

Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 12 2025 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 77 After Thanksgiving

Jason is doing well by just keeping calm and cautious. These fools want him in some trouble for their stupid behavior and attitudes.

I think he'll keep letting her know. If David wanted Gabby, he could have had her a million different ways by now. She's constantly offering herself up to him on a silver platter. Too easy. All the while not realizing she's showing him what type of woman she really is. And that's one who can't be trusted. If she's disrespecting him and the woman he's seeing right in both of their faces, imagine what she'd get up to behind his back if some rando caught her eye? And the kind of lies she'd tell behind it. Nothing but trouble. 

I honestly feel things will come to a head at some point because she doesn't know when to quit. Also, he definitely needs to keep all those texts/emails in case he needs them down the road. 

Larissa needed that time to cool out and get herself together. David needs a rock to back him up and help him handle the situation, not another crazy woman to deal with.

 

Soooo excited for this update! Thank you!!

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Date: April 29 2025 10:50 pm

Title: Chapter 76 Thanksgiving Day Part 3

Welcome back!

Nice family get together. But Colton. Wow what a jerk. I think he may be the type to try to put the moves on Kendra then do something stupid when she rejects him. He might get another beatdown

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Date: March 26 2025 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 76 Thanksgiving Day Part 3

Colton is asking for a BEATDOWN so badly, he is a first class Jackass... and I so hope that someone calls out his crappy disrespectful behavior, and please let it be Bradley.

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2025 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 76 Thanksgiving Day Part 3

I liked the family meet and greet. Everyone except that jerk Colton was cool. And I think Kendra made a sweet impression on the family.

Colton is a snake. I keep getting dangerous vibes off him. He's the type to take Kendra's innocent comment about coming over to try some cooking as an invitation for sex and do something awful to her. Keep a careful eye on that one.

Colton is gonna be the winner for the villain here!

Glad you survived that lifin' and thanks for the great update!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2025 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 75 Thanksgiving Day Part 2

I am not surprised Kendra was the one to ask the question. In a way, she's usually the one to bring up uncomfortable or more intimate subjects with him.

Kendra is better than me because there's no way I could keep letting AJ have "a word" with my boyfriend. AJ is exactly the guy he doesn't want for his sister and he needs to sit down somewhere

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Date: February 07 2025 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 75 Thanksgiving Day Part 2

Ya know, AJ is really getting on my last nerve. He has said his peace and made his feelings known on the matter already. Why does he feel he needs to keep sticking his nose in this? He's not her parent and has zero authority here. What's all these threats about anyway? Their mother is doing fine with it. No one is asking him. Again, he should focus on his own daughters to raise. Would he feel better if it was a black dude taking advantage of her instead?

I think her asking that question was going to come up at some point. Jason was cool about it.

I wonder though if it was something similar from Jason, would Kendra feel some type of way that he asked or be cool about it as well.

 

So glad for the update. Thank you. I was really beginning to stalk it more than I already do...lol!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2025 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 75 Thanksgiving Day Part 2

Nice chapter, love the interaction with Jason and Kendra's family especially Grandma Rose... as for AJ, I know that he's being over protective of Kendra, buit I wonder if Jason was a "Brother" wouild he have been as intense.

Oh and I can't wait for Jason's uncle to meet Kendra, and I hope is Big Mouth cousin behaves.

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2025 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 75 Thanksgiving Day Part 2

Double standards, 3 kids not married. Take a seat AJ.

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Date: February 03 2025 12:01 pm

Title: Chapter 74 Thanksgiving Day Part 1

AJ. Oh Lord! Here we go...

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Date: January 13 2025 11:07 pm

Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

OMG Ho 1 and Ho 2 are up to no good, and I hope that whatever they are planning will blow up in their faces. And Valentina is no friend whatsoever, b/c if she was she would be telling Gabby that there are plenty of boys out there and stop chasing one that has shown that He's Just No that into You.

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 04 2025 12:03 pm

Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

So wait. We don't get to see what happened when Jason went home? But I still love this story. Happy holidays!

Author's Response:

He got home pretty late, after midnight. The family does tend to sweep things under the rug and move on, so that's why I didn't go into what happened. Plus I feel like every time I try to move on to other character storyline I end up prolonging chapters for other characters lol, so I cut it short.  But I wish I would've written a scene on that. I can make a flashback scene to explain what happened. 

Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2024 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 73 Caramel Dreams and Competitive Schemes

This chick don't learn! Is she really trying to land in the ICU?! And Valentina really is the worst kind of woman. Despite all her talk, I bet if another woman took some dude she feeling for real away from her, she'd go all Fatal Attraction about it! Ughh!

As for the fellas, the talk was all in fun, but I'm glad Jason is keeping what he and Kendra discussed and agreed to top of mind.

Nice!



Author's Response:

Lol yes I agree especially Gabby, she would go nuts jf someone tried to take her man...Valentina is treacherous for sure. 

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Date: December 21 2024 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 72 Breaking the Cycle

Whew that was a deep chapter, and I can see that Jason was wilkling to let Kendra go, but she was having no of that, However IMHO is best that they part ways for now until Jason ca get his head together.

I'm seeing that Jason feels that he could not save his mother from his father when he was a boy, and thats too much pressure for someone that age, his mother was tryoing to "fix" thier father and that can't happen, he needed to get better for himself... and IMO Jason's father is kinda selfish wanting his forgiviness and for them to have a relationship like nothing ever happend... that's Jason's decision when he is ready, he can't make it happen.

That whole family needs theraphy.

Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2024 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 72 Breaking the Cycle

That tore my heart out! I feel for Jason. This kid is in pain and he and his mom need to really talk. I hate that he feels like he doesn't even have her to turn to right now.

As for the conversation, I loved it. Jason needed to hear that he had worth and value from the girl he loves. And I love that they confessed their love to each other that freely.

I also noticed he didn't tempt fate anymore by staying the night. Good for him.

Emotional chapter!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2024 09:47 pm

Title: Chapter 71 The Cycle of Violence

Wow! In my head it was Kendra's family that had this reaction, not Jason's. And I feel so bad for him. He's dealing with childhood trauma and no one in his family has a clue that they all need therapy. As for Kendra, life is about to start life-ing for her big time (poor thing). Keep Grandma on speed dial

Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2024 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 71 The Cycle of Violence

Hi. Great update. I don't know where to begin. Jason was raised in an abusive household and as someone who grew up in that environment it can take a lot to start rebuilding your life and trusting others. My father was a police officer and his colleagues knew that he was abusing his wife and children, yet did nothing but looked the other way. My mother stayed for 15 years. When she remarried, our step father had quite a challenge with damaged children and a damaged wife. Jason needs professional help to deal with his anger effectively. Mr. James and the rest of the family should seek professional help as well. They may learn that it will take Jason years to not get over, but come to terms with his damaged childhood. My step father has been married to my mother for twenty years and out of the six of us only two of us call him dad. It isn’t that he is not loved or seen as one, we don’t call our biological father, dad or any name for that matter; that’s just the way it is. Screaming and shouting at Jason will not get through to him. It never does. I only wish that my mother had gotten us help and herself as well.

Sorry for the long post. I like this story. Good writing.

I hope this isn’t used as an excuse not to like Kendra by his family.

Have a wonderful weekend.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and thank you for sharing your story. I'm so sorry you had to go through that and I pray that you heal. <3 you are so right about people from these abusive backgrounds needing professional help. Childhood trauma does impact people in so many different ways but there us hope. Thanks for continuing to read and support this story. 

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2024 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 71 The Cycle of Violence

Wow I mean, I don't know what else to say... Jason needs help so badly and NOW, adn and as much as I love them together, IMHO kendra needs to distance herself from Jason until he can gbet his head on straight.



Author's Response:

I know :( he definitely does need the help. And I agree if he doesn't get the help it may become too much for Kendra. 

Reviewer: libertylady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2024 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 71 The Cycle of Violence

Wow! I don't even know what to say! That took an unexpected turn.



Author's Response:

Yes I know, sorry if I took you guys by surprise too much. And thank you for contuing to read and support the story <3

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2024 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 70 Brotherhood

I'm with Jason on Brian; he'll have to learn the hard way because he obviously wont listen to reason. So that said, I think Reese should stay out of it. That's a hard call, but again, he won't listen anyway.

Hmm...I kind of always felt they were headed for another fight because I knew Eric wasn't gonna let that beatdown go. And now I think Jason didn't really mind it either. However, I think Eric is done now. He got boys, and Jason got boys; so how many more beatdown must he have to finally go on about his business already. Kendra didn't mean anything to him. Its about his pride and nothing else.

I commend Jason because I thought he was gonna hulk out on them all! Instead, it went the other direction. Lucky for Eric!

 

Great chapter!

 

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2024 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 69 Boundaries

Yeah. I mentioned the previous review that communication about this is important. If they can maintain this level of communication, they might reach their goals together. Kendra has to remember that Jason is a virgin as well. He's dealing with the same temptations and emotions, too. 

I think they both set reasonable boundaries. So just take it slowly and easy with the sexual teasing like that. 

I think Jason is proving he'll respect her. He asked what her boundaries were to get a clear and spoken understanding of what they are, and told her his feelings on the matter. And reminded her if they're abstaining, then lets stick to the plan and no playing around about it. He's made up his mind to do what she wants about it. I think his future endgame is more permanent in nature anyway.

I'm guessing either his brother or David.

Great chapter.

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Date: October 13 2024 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 68 Hold Me Close

Yes! Josh knew the situation, so why go there? At least give him a heads up! Colton is skeezy and I don't trust him at all. He'd try to make a play for Kendra just to hurt Jason; and could try to go too far because he thinks no woman should ever turn him down. Yeah. He gives me those vibes.

I really liked that scene. I think Jason and Kendra will be able to manage intimacy if they keep communication about it and their feelings open. I liked that they had that talk because it was important to say those things and to keep saying them.  

I think he will talk in his own time. I still stand by some therapy though. Its trauma and abuse he needs professional help with.

No! Like Kendra said, who knows what's in lakes and such these days! Ughh!!

 

Nice!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2024 04:59 pm



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