Title: Meet the team.

i miss this story and I am waiting patiently for an update.

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: darlenei433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2010 04:58 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Please update the wonderful story!!!

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2010 06:27 pm

Title: Meet the team.

Ok missy it time another update it has been awhile so get right on it. Sara and Rina needs to be dealt with

 



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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2010 08:00 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Please update this story I love it so.

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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2010 10:30 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

please update. i am missing this story

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 16 2010 04:27 am

Title: Meet the team.

Sade, I want to two people to die in a horrible accident.  The first one who should be killed is Sara just on gp.   Rina, should fall into coma, then the doctors take the baby by c-section and then she should die.  Only then would everything be right in this story world.

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lol

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Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 15 2010 11:53 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Kevn will have fire Sara, that heifer needs help. THe help that I am refering to is an ass whopping.  Rina the ho is crazy!!!  Both of those ho's bear watching.

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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2010 04:24 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Okay Sade???? You have 6 unfinished stories, girlfriend!!!! LOL  You have to FINISH at least one of them...but who am I to talk??? I got one unfinished one myself...but FINISH the stories, ma'am.

Author's Response:

LOL Im sorry. I will do my best to finsih them.

Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 04:17 am

Title: Meet the team.

Great story!!  You have the right amount of drama, suspense, and romance.  You developed your characters very well.  If I had one piece of advice to give you, it would be to update your story sooner rather than later so your readers won't bail on your story.

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 04:11 am

Title: Meeting Rina

UH-OH!!! DING-DING!! You should have titled this chapter, "Rina kisses her meal ticket buh-bye!"  ROFLOL



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Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 03:58 am

Title: S.O.B

See...that ugly mess called racism is already starting!!! How are going to treat that man's wife like that??? I KNOW Kevin is about to HANDLE this...let me go on to find out what happened.

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Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 03:43 am

Title: Kevin and Grace's time.

What do you mean review??? This is GOOD!!! Ol' girl, Rina, was too hot about Grace, wasn't she?!  LOL

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 03:34 am

Title: Meet the Family

AWWWWW...HECK NAW!!! Ol' girl trying to beaugarde her way because Kevin's married now!!!

Anyway, this is tooo juicy...a sexy white NFL ball player and a THICK sista'??? LOVE IT!!!



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lol

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Reviewer: dlastqueen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 03:26 am

Title: Meet the team.

Thank you for updating! I can't wait to hear what Sara has to say and what Rina will try when Grace goes to Atlanta!

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2010 06:02 am

Title: Meet the team.

I really like this story, I hope you update soon

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: :-) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2010 03:09 pm

Title: Meet the team.

Loved the update. What's wrong now, bad news from Sara? She's his wife so she should be allowed to hear whatever it is.

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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 04:33 pm

Title: What happens in Vegas!

ahh please update again soo :)

 

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Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy this update.

Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 04:48 am

Title: Meet the team.

Man none of these people really know who they are messing with.  He finally has a good thing and I don't think he is willing to give that up.

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 03:19 am

Title: Meet the team.

aww that so cute kevin getting jeasouly but he doesnt' have to worry his woman love him. why must all these hoes trying to get into kevin pants lol dont the know he has a woman lol. thanks for the updated and hope things well for you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 02:45 am

Title: Meet the team.

Kevin can't seems to get away from these users.

Rina and Sara are both cut from the same cloth.

I hope that Grace will go toe-to-toe with these hoes.



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Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 02:33 am

Title: Meet the team.

I really love this story...I love Ms. Grace and Kevin's relationship and how it has grown!! They are both handling this complication like two adults not spoiled kids...I love that!!

I thiink if that skank thinks she is going to get Grace's man ..she is in for a rude awakening!!

Great updt sweetie!!



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Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 01:49 am

Title: Meet the team.

OK I don't know who I want to BEATDOWN first Sara or Rina, both of these heifffers make me ILL... I know whatever CRAP they plan will not work.

I did like how Kevin's teammates took to Grace, they saw that she is a Real Lady.



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Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 01:39 am

Title: Meet the team.

I think it is time to take out the trash.  Who does Sara think she not.  Yes she is not his anything and Grace need to handle that.  Great update

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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 01:31 am

Title: Meet the team.

Loved the update! I hope he doesn't "talk alone" with Sara. She's not to be trusted. Please, please oh PLEASE let Rina be BUSTED. She's such a golddigger!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 01:21 am

Title: Meet the team.

the story is perfect. i love reading about kevin and grace. thank you for the update. i hope that grace beats the hell out of that lowlife rina and sara.



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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 01:11 am



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