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Title: Chapter 1

Hot dog, I have got to try that.  But I'll use chocolate.

 Reviewer: pmgayes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 02 2010 08:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

Welllll, cheerio mate...jolly good job!! lol

 Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2010 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like when a story ends with hotness.  So was this a oneshot deal or will we get more?  I want more!!!!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2010 12:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Me likey.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 23 2009 10:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is simply lovely, hot, sexy and sweet all at the same time. Excellent job.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2009 04:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

It's amazing what a spoon of peanut butter can lead to these days. I liked the soccer game scene. I thought it was sexy that he explained the game to her, instead getting upset becuase she's asking questions.

 Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2009 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow...peanut butter will never be the same with Peter. LOL. So glad Damien didn't forget something and have to run back home!

 Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2009 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwwww that was adorable!!!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 11:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwwww that was adorable!!!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 11:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Lovely story. Hell I'm in love with Peter.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 08:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!! Is this a one-shot? I'd love to see how the relationship progresses.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 03:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was pretty hot! Great one shot! And what I also really loved is the physical pairing of these two, it's a great match!!

Have added you to my faves and am looking forward to reading way more from you! 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 02:38 pm


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