Title: Chapter 4

This was a great update.  I really like them and I can't wait to read how their first date goes. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2010 08:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

I like Ethan and the way he came to Keisha's rescue.  Her blond friend is so jealous and I can see that she is going to be a problem. Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2010 08:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

I believe that I commented on this story before but if I did sorry for the double post.  Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2010 08:28 am

Title: Chapter 6

OOOh ,I'm just loving this story especially Keisha and Ethan as a couple.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2010 08:24 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

HOPE YOUR VISIT WENT WELL.  WHAT AN AMAZING STORY YOU HAVE PENNED.  i LOVE ETHAN AND KEISHA CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF THEIR STORY.

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2010 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

I really love this story. i'm with Ethan I do not like Brandi. I think she is going to cause problems between Ethan and Keisha.

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2010 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Great update! Happy New Year! Congratulations on the birth of your nephew!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2009 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for their date!  Congrats to your daughter!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2009 08:55 pm

Title: Chapter 3

It's official, Brandi is definitely a bitch! Loving the story!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2009 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Brandi seems to be a bitch! I like how Ethan stepped in!  Great start!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2009 08:38 pm

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Thanks, this was a great update.  I like...and Keisha has some fire in her.  Yes.

Best wishes to your sister.

Congrats with the win your daughters' soccer team had. Travel safely.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2009 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Congrats to your growing family.

Reviewer: jw2jp95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2009 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: jw2jp95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2009 01:57 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Awesome update. I love how they make a sweet couple. Look forward to the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2009 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Thank you, thank you for the Christmas update!!! I love this story!!!

Keisha And Ethan are really sweet together. Ethan is obviously a man of action. He doesn't sit and talk about himself or write big checks. He gets out there and acts according to his generous heart. He is as down to earth as he is sophisticated... without all the b.s. and pretense.

Keisha seems to have been waiting a long time for someone exactly like him. She is as smitten, too. They seem very compatible together.

They should get to know each other really well before they start meeting family, etc. I can guess that just as Ethan that quickly sized up Keisha's friend, Brandi, Keisha may soon enough find out that there are people who wish you to do well but not too well and certainly not better than them.

Congratulations on the expected new arrival and addition to the family!!! My only brother's b. day is the 28th, his daughter the 29th. Have a great trip and visit, auntie. ;)

Looking forward to an update when you return.

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Loving this story.

I admire the way Ethan choose to help out his friend mother when he didn't have to, just shows what type of a man he is.

Where can I find me a Ethan?

Enjoy the New Year when it comes.

Reviewer: Janetbd Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 02:33 pm

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Thank you for the very sweet update. Hope you have an enjoyable New Year with your family.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

cute!

Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Well you know you did great with this story. So Have a super New Year and a hooray for babies that are not yours!

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

I love me some Ethan!!!  THis story is the bomb and I looking forward to the next update.  Congratulations on the new member of the family.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Thank you for a wonderful update I am so happy that you were about to squeeze one in during the Holiday season.

I love Keisha and Ethan and they have so much chemistry together and I hope they end of making love because Ethan is already whipped he just needs the actually action to seal the deal.  Keisha is also heads over heels.

Thank you for the update.  Congrats on the new member of the fam.  Enjoy the rest of your holiday.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Wonderful update. Have a safe trip! Congratulations on the new baby :D

Reviewer: LIL HELPER Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

I'm loving these two, Ethan and Keisha are too adorable. I can't wait to see what happens to them in your next update.

 

Reviewer: NubianOki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 05:16 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Loved the update. It was great!! Etgan and Keisha are moving along nicley.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

I like the way Ethan showed her the casual, sexy cool side before going on to the elegant dinner at his place. It was a wonderful date all the way around.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2009 04:23 am



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