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Title: Chapter 4

I thought the conversation was charming; and Ethan was charming! Very smooth and approachable he is.

I cant wait for their date!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 12:22 am
Title: Chapter 4

Good for her!

 

Look forward to the  next update.

 Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 12:22 am
Title: Chapter 4

I enjoyed the chapter.  I look forward to the frist date. Congrats to your daughter on advancing to the semi-finals!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2009 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 4

congrats to your daughter! and absolutely fabulous update!

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 11:27 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Congrats to your daughter.

I love the chap as always.

I still want to know what is going on with Brandi. I have a feeling the green eyed monster is going to be coming out strong soon.

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 10:09 pm
Title: Chapter 4

wanted to say wtg for your daughter teaming winning their games. now ok this hold time i 'm just laughing and smiling as they talked on the phone with each other so sweeet and cute how they was getting to know each other. i can't wait to hear about the dated. i know how she feels second guessing herself i do that all the time. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 09:45 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Awesome update. I'm really lovingme some Keisha and Ethan. They would make a cute couple. Hope things work out for them as he really seems into her.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 09:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Ok I just happened on this sweet very cute story..what a gem!

I love that keisha's mystery man shut Brandi down..she was sickening!!

I love Keisha.s reaction and her girls reaction!

I cannot wait for hem to go out and see where all of this leads!!

Funny, sweet and sexy start sweetie...can hardly wait for more..good job!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2009 01:32 am
Title: Chapter 3

Love it please keep it coming....

That was so smooth how Ethan came in as the Prince in shining armor and saved the day.

I can see right now that Brandi is going to be a pain in my beehive. Let me guess she is the one out of the 2 marriages that's divorced and green is definitely not her color.  :D

Please update soon

Thank you.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2009 03:27 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh I love it! I love it! I want more lots and lots more.

I like how Ethan finds Keisha attractive and not for the superficial reason but for her smile which is true because it reaches her eyes but she is sweet as well.  I to don't too much care for Brandi at this moment...but there is always one out of the bunch.

I wonder what cutie is about to do.

Thanks for sharing....More please.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2009 03:11 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Why does that never happen to me in restaurants?  Great beginning.  I can't wait to find out more about Ethan and Keisha.

 Reviewer: YHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2009 01:47 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving the beginning of this story!  I've always rooted for the "underdog" and I love stories with the "ugly duckling becomes the swan" tone.  Please update when you can.

Sho

 Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2009 06:55 am
Title: Chapter 3

Loved this chapter!! This story is coming a long really good. What Ethan did was awesome!! Already dont like Brandi :o)  Cant wait for the next update

 Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2009 03:33 am
Title: Chapter 3

That was great, I love how Ethan came to Keisha's aid, and the best was Brandi sitting there looking that the twit that she is, I love how she was trying to get Ethan's attention and he only had eyes for Keisha.

I hope Keisha not only calls Ethan and gets to know him, but takes him to that wedding.

Looking forward to the next update.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter 3

 have a good weekend and please continue this story. i'm loving it!

 Reviewer: Latise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter 3

That was just wonderful!!! I loved it!!! Wowee, wow, wow....Keisha has her hands full. Can't wait to see how they pull this off.Looking forward to the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 07:18 pm
Title: Chapter 3

ok hope your daughter kick but in soccer and wow i'm in love with ethan myself lol. he smooth sexy sweet sexy kind hearted and did i mention sexy lol. i hated her friend how dare she flirt with him right in front of her tacky. love how he pay for the lunch for her and there for her when she need the most thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I am so loving this and Hating Brandi at the same time..I will wait for monday but this story is great

 Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 01:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3

love it love it. I can see that brandi is going to be a thorn in keisha's side.

can't wait for more

 Reviewer: janet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 01:49 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

 Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter 3

That was fun to read how he came to her rescue.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 11:51 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  I like Ethan's style and I agree with him about the blond one. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 3

I love this story!  And like Ethan I didn't like Brandi from the moment she opened her mouth!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 07:57 am
Title: Chapter 3

yay! i think i have a new favorite story.  I still feel like stomping brandi's face in though. And i have the feeling that that inclination is going to get stronger as the stories moves along.

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 06:39 am
Title: Chapter 3

You good LOL! I really like the story, I look forward to Monday.

 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2009 06:34 am


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