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Title: Chapter 10

Really love this story, thanks for sharing.

 

Alison

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 08:17 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Excellent

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2013 07:06 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Really enjoying Ethan and Keisha. Would love to see how things end up b/t them. Will there be an update for this story?

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 02:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

i hope we can get an update soon!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 10:22 pm
Title: Chapter 10

UPDATED SOON

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

please updae soon!

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2012 04:42 pm
Title: Chapter 10

ooooohhhh, Keisha is about to get her back blown out!  I am so happy for her!  I know Marisol is happy, but that damn Brandi is going to be a problem and she needs to get rid of her before she tries to sleep with her man, and cause a bunch of drama for Keisha and Ethan.  I know Randy feels like a true Ass for inviting his ex best friend Darrin, now that he knows he cheated on his baby sis!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 9

I love me a good black brotha, but could someone please tell me why, must he show out on a sista once she has moved on? Especially when he moved on first?  It is time for Ethan to show the family what type of man he is an put Darrin in his place.....Just like the can he came out of.....TRASH!!!!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 07:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

I love this story. Looking forward to more.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24 2012 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 10

Great update! That ex-boyfriend is such a loser!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 23 2012 01:32 am
Title: Chapter 10

That was a wonderful update.  Someone should have punched Randy in the nose to just because he would still invite him to a family gathering knowing KeKe would be there.

So Ethan has the benefits of getting the cookie without marriage.  I am glad she made Darrin trick ass wait.  Cause his mess came to light,

Thank you for sharing. 

Happy writing

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:34 pm
Title: Chapter 10

This was so good, I read it again.  LOL  I'm so glad that Keisha didn't waste herself on Darrin and saved the prize for Ethan.  Knowing that he's going to be her first and only will send him into overdrive.  I see a possessive man who'll go out and buy a ring and claim her as his bride!  LOL.  

I hope Keisha watch out for her jealous so called friend!  

 

More please!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 10:52 am
Title: Chapter 10

LOVE IT, LOVE IT!  Please update soon, this is a wonderful story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 10

It's totally on! Nice update! I love how Ethan is standing up for Keisha! :)

 Reviewer: MeganRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 08:27 am
Title: Chapter 10

Its been awhile. I caught up with all the chapters and was blown away. Ethan really has my support. I may be premature but I see wedding belks in the future.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:51 am
Title: Chapter 9

Okay. You sure know how to bring on the drama. Is it just me or does anyone else get a funny feeling about Brandi? Stick girl thinks the world revolves around her. Ethan wants Keisha because she is pretty, smart znd a down-home girl. He can be himself with her. With the runway model type its all about image. What makes him repond to Keisha is her inner kindness and sweet personality.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:43 am
Title: Chapter 7

Penny sounds like a mess. I would'nt be surprise if she does something to Ethan and Keisha.

Futhermore Ethan is really charmer. I like how he is taking his time to get to know Keisha. I just wish Keisha could see her worth. She is too hung up on being a thick girl. If she owns it, she would see the power she has over Ethan.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:28 am
Title: Chapter 4

I really digging this story. Keep up the good work.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 07:14 am
Title: Chapter 10

So happy the family really likes Ethan. Her ex-fiance had a lot of nerve showing up at the engagment party. What a jackass! Love the chapter!

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Date: August 22 2012 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 10

I am still trying to figure why Darrin's simple ass would show at families home where only one person likes your simple self and except to be welcomed?  Was he high?  I am so glad that Ethan told it and finally Randy sees the truth of simple Darrin.  Ethan is the man!!!!  Keisha you quite simple yourself, you should have listened to your family.  Dumb, dumb ditty!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 10

Why would Randy invite this dude? Even if he didn't know the reason for Darrin and Keisha's breakup, why would he think Keisha would be comfortable with her ex at the party like that. I mean, that's just basic respect and common sense. Idiot!

Ethan and Keisha getting fresh in the bathroom...hehe!

Nice!!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 10

Girl it going to be a fire in Keisha house tonight ok and looks like Ethan has a huge hoes to put it out for her. Glad he punch that bitch in the face and hope he broke his nose again. Love the story and thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 10

Darrin disgusts me. How he had the audacity to show his face at that family get together and then refuse to leave is beyond me. And the fact that Randy would invite him! Even if he didn't know the circumstances behind his sister's breakup, he was a prick for asking her douche ex to show his face. Ethan breaking his nose was the best part of this update for me...well, the next best part. The bathroom scene was steamy and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Isn't it funny how she was saving herself with Darrin but it's all bets off with Ethan? Shows who's the right man for the job.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:37 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

Love it - Love it - Love it! Can't wait until the next update.

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2012 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 10

Good for Ethan breaking Darrin's nose!

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Date: August 22 2012 03:53 am


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