Yay I can't believe he punched him! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: August 22 2012 03:25 am
Ok this is good. My question though is Keisha still a virgin? Was there anyone after the asshole cheated on her? I look forward to the update!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 02:56 am
Love it! No drama and much love! Bring it on!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 12:59 am
Ahh, did I ever tell you how much i love you for writing this story! LOVE IT!!! I want them to walk out hand in hand looking all proud and shizz! By the way if you're not British you got the whole "jack arse" thing down to a T. that is totally how i say it ahaha
Author's Response:
Awww! Thanks chatty. I am not British but my daighter is obsessed with English Premier Leauge soccer. We watch it religiously every weekend. We love everything British! :)
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 12:53 am
I am glad Ethan punched the idiot Ethan should have punched Randy. I loved how Ethan had his woman's back. Please update ASAP
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2012 12:38 am
Loving this story!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 07:21 am
I really like this story. I hadn't seen it before, but I'm really glad I found it. Keisha and Ethan are just too cute.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 02:35 am
Welcome back!! This was one of my favorite stories a couple of years ago. Well it continues to be one of my favorties. I was so disappointed because I thought I would never get to read this amazing story or get a chance to read the end of this story. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait for you to finish so I can read this story over and over again.
You just picked up right where you left off like you had never been away for awhile. I love Keshia in this story maybe because that is my name. lol I love how Ethan is so passionate about her and I know he would die for this woman. He not only swept her off her feet, I think she did the same for him...
PLease continue I come back everyday again to check and see if you have updated.....
Reviewer: keshah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 01:50 am
amazing as usual. can't wait to see whats about to happen. Oh I don't ike Brandi and her jealousy.
Reviewer: LatashaNicole Signed
[Report This]Date: August 17 2012 05:09 am
Just caught up with this story and it's awesome! Can'y wait for more!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 02:23 am
What in blazes is with the "Damn this, damn that?". Do educated, high class British guys speak like this?. I think not. Please, do some research and make the language more reflective of his stature and culture.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you don't like the language. But in my mind one of Ethan's best friends, Thomas, Miss Sadie's son was African American. He does business in America as well as volunteers in an inner city program. So his vernacular isn't as British as you may want it to be.
Reviewer: foosrule Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 04:58 pm
Yes, it is about to go down not only does Keisha have her new man present there are her brothers, uncles and let's not forget about daddy.
Who invited the scrum r is he a party crasher that's come to have his ass whipped british style.
Wonderful updates.
Thank you for sharing,
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 03:56 pm
During your busy schedule please sneak another update in i have got read about this ass whupping Darwin is going to get. I hope Brandi didn't have anything to do with Darwin showing up but I get the feeling she did. She was never Keisha best friend
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 03:48 pm
Beat his ass Ethan.
Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 02:56 pm
Yeah! I think Daddy and Brothers ought to give the ex the beatdown! LOL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 11:50 am
the more I read, the more I love this story. please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 09:51 am
Oh. shit just got real!!!!!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 06:25 am
Keisha's ex sure got some nerve coming in her family home and making a scene!! Who invited him? Hope it wasn't Brandi. Loved the update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 05:45 am
OMG MORE MORE PLEASE I LOOOOVVEEE IT :)
Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 04:49 am
Oh snap the ex there he has some guts coming to that party. I have a feeling that hoe of a friend of hers invited that ex to that party just to make Keisha cry that my gut feeling. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 04:44 am
I love this story!!! Please update again soon, I can't wait to read what happens!
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 03:27 am
I love this story. Please do not make Brandi an issue were she breaks them up. Maybe have Keshia call Brandi on her ways.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 02:56 am
Yes it is getting good, I am glad that Ethan is standing up to her brother. I love how Ethan sent food and other things to her parents. I hope Ethan beats up the ex-fiancee and we find out what the scumbag did. I am ready for some Ethan and Keisha private time.
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 02:32 am
Let it go down pleas....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 02:28 am
Who invited that fool to the party? Ex-finace ain't family and that ahole should have had enough sense not show his ass. Why is Keisha crying, she now has Ethan who is more of a man than Darrin will ever be. Ethan would his ass!!! Did that ho Brandi have anything to do with his being at the party? Beat her too!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 01:58 am