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Title: Chapter 9

Aww man I can't wait to see what happens next

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 01:48 am
Title: Chapter 8

I like this story, please update again soon!

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 09:17 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I just found your story and I love it. Especially the part where James Scott is the face of Ethan. He is so hot. I can't wait to see how this BBQ turns out.....Btw I get the feeling that Brandi is going to become a problem. Hmm.....More soon please.

 Reviewer: Nicci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 04:07 am
Title: Chapter 8

This is great.  Ethan is a dream and I'm sure her blondie friend will be hating big time.  LOL

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 04:10 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Ethan is such a sweetheart.  Iliked the way that ge won Mama Barrett over.  THe kiss between Ethan and Keisha was scorching.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 02:35 pm
Title: Chapter 8

more, more please...love the update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 06:27 am
Title: Chapter 8

Ethan and Keshia are too cute. 

 Reviewer: LatashaNicole Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:35 am
Title: Chapter 8

I'm liking this story alot and it doesn't hurt that one of my fave daytime characters from DOOL is in it. There's something about a British accent that gets to me. I like the way that Ethan's treating her and that just goes to show he was ready to settle down with a real woman. I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop though because hoes typically don't give up without a fight.

 Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!! Yes!! Go Ethan!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 8

Please don't cut it off there. We were just getting the party started. I cannot wait for your next update.

 Reviewer: No! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 03:07 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

I love this story - I love Keisha & Ethan as a couple. Cant wait until the next update - excellent job!

 Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 03:05 am
Title: Chapter 8

Well I think Ethan will be fine and I like how he called her mom and just standing up with her brother let him know that he will take care of her and he loves her. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 02:55 am
Title: Chapter 8

I love that Ethan called Mama Barrett to see if there was anything that he could do to help with the BBQ.  He also got on Papa Barrett's good side by sending the meat for the BBQ.  Ethan is a keeper!!  Please don't let Brandi act stupid becasue she's jealous that Keisha got a good man.  A good man that ignored her like the worthless ho that she is.  So loving this story, thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 02:05 am
Title: Chapter 8

Awww...Ethan is very smooth...lol!

Wanting to see the family's reaction, and that witch, Brandi! 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 8

Love it! Thank you for the update!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 12:36 am
Title: Chapter 8

Great update, I can't wait to see what Brandi will do/say.

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 11:55 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Glad to see one of my favorite stories back.

 Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 06:51 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update and welcome back.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:20 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Hope Penelope doesn't become a problem for them.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 07:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update.  I liked Keisha's family. Her mother was funny.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 5 - The Date

Wow Ethan is sexy, romantic and he gives back to the community in honor of his friend that was killed.  He is definitely a keeper.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 05:12 am
Title: Chapter 4

Great update.  I like Ethan I think that he will be good for Keisha especiallysince her fiancee was a cheat.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 04:53 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like Ethan and the fact that he put that nasty Brandi in her place. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 7

I'm enjoying this story.  I didn't see it before today.  Please continue.

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Date: August 13 2012 03:00 am


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