That was great! Short and sweet ~ LOVED it!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/13 08:39 pm
This story is wonderful.
Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 30/04/13 10:53 pm
So this is how they meet, they are so cute. I see that Taria has some issues and her first issue is Krysis. Taria that ho is not your friend!!!!! On to the next story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/12 03:27 pm
Well crafted and HOT! what more can i ask for? Oh, more stories, and I see there are several more. Thank You.
Reviewer: insight spinner Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/11 12:51 pm
Nice shot, definitely great gound work for another. The characers are interesting enough to leave me wanting to know how's that working for them. Don't stop now.
~avrgblkgl
Reviewer: avrgblkgrl Signed [Report This]Date: 26/05/11 11:25 pm
loved it! it was quirky, funny and sexy as always - thank you! off to read part 2 :)
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/11 04:27 pm
Boring, try harder.
Author's Response:
sure, after i see your efforts.
Reviewer: Mary Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/04/11 05:15 am
I like! But what ever happened to Kyrsis or Kaprie or whatever her name was? Did she get fired?
Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed [Report This]Date: 15/04/11 01:38 am
I should be working right now but I just found this series and I'm committed to reading it all and commenting on the expert wonder that came from your imagination. I love this IT.
Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 02:57 pm
LOVED THIS story. Their interaction was so believeable. Please continue to write this story. Jake and Taria are sweet together.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/11 05:58 am
Love this one-shot(er). You writing is amazing. Keep them coming. Everyday please :)
Reviewer: BlueLunaDC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/03/11 05:27 pm
Great story. What ever happened to her not so friend. I would like to read more about this couple. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 07:29 pm
That was a great story, well written. I love when a writer can take a few thousand lines and tell an entire story. The flashbacks were so well done. I wasn't lost or wondering who was talking. Brava! If you continue these shorts I'm sure they will be great.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 11:14 pm
This is a really beautiful short story. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 03:36 pm
Sorry but I was curious about what happened to Kyrsis. Did Taria end up firing her?
Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 01:09 am
I loved it. Just what I needed to cheer me up from my horrible day.
Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 01:07 am
I absolutely love this. The progession of their relationship was fun to read. Sexy couple right from the start. Perfect!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 08:22 pm
That was cute. I think it was nice.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 08:12 pm
oh my gosh that was AWESOMENESS!!!!! so light and playful but incredibly HAWT too!!!! i love taria and jake!!! can you do a baby fic with them???? please huh please!!!!!!!!???!?!???!???!?
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:00 pm
dang didnt want thnat to end
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 11:41 am
dang didnt want thnat to end
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 11:40 am
great story i enjoyed reading it
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 11:16 am
This was good, I really liked it and I'm usually not a fan of short stories.
Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 06:34 am