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Title: Chapter 1

This hit too close to home...:(

Reviewer: BJ Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/11 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is really beautiful. It's a sad thing, the difference between being content in love and being truly in love. Many people spend their lives with an aching heart because they let go of true love, or they settled for pleasing the mind rather than the heart.

He is wise though to realize he did set Angela free to fly. 

 

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/04/10 10:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

If this is the end, this is very sad! :(

Good read.

Reviewer: Butterfly Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/04/10 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Excellent start . I hope there will be more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 04:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/04/10 03:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

One shot? No, Charles you didn't let her go to fly her pretty wings around. The fact that she didn't follow you around and beg you to change her mind allowed her to fly away from you with those pretty wings. You will never be happy, you got all you wanted the wife they wanted you with and all your riches. Yet you still an't stop thinking about her.

I would love to have heard her take on it as well. Loved it

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was sad, to have been blessed with true love and to have thrown it is just sad.  Is it a one shot story or will there be more?  I want to see if Charles runs into Angela agian.  I hope that she allowed herself to try to love again and had children.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very nice.

At first, I wanted to know Angela's side, find out that she'd moved, gotten over him and found true love, was living a richer, more honest life. Then I realized that it didn't matter.

Yes, Charles did the right thing. If Angela wasn't worth fighting for; she deserved much better than ole Charles. Let Charles spend his days pining for her, believing that he really did her a favor setting her free. Let his wife, Carol, watch and know, and believe that she won. How sad.

Great story. I enjoyed reading it!

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 06:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

This was beautifully written with only slight errors that were hardly noticeable...that's my little constructive criticism...

Now the story...I think I hate both Charles and his wife with a passion...two more loathesome creatures there couldn't be...Charles doesn't have the right to think about his 'lost' love...ever again...he broke someone...does he not understand that when someone loves you like that you become a part of them...he scarred her...it's of no consequence if she found the man 'he' thought she deserved...Angela chose his trifling, fickle butt...and yet he broke her...hearing him wax poetic about their 'love' did not endear that cretin to me...he chose money, power, and prestige over something far more value and priceless...the true love a good woman...set her free to spread her wings...yeah, Angela had a lucky escape...but why did her heart have to be destroyed in the process...I hope he gets his one day...but I wish I had a memory zapper I could use on that fool's feeble brain to erase any trace of Angela...he doesn't even deserve his memories of her...

And that addle-brain idiot of a wife of his...she's as pathetic as he...she thinks she's got a 'prize'...but having to accept that your 'man' will always have a piece of his 'heart' trapped in the past with another woman...how sad...but she walked into that marriage with eyes wide open...so if she has to share her 'man' with another woman's memory...eh, she gets what she gets...

I lied...more constructive criticism...but no, not really, just wanted to also say that your writing is very emotive (I hope that's right word) and affective...just one quick one-shot and I'm hot and mad for a character that only existed in fictional character's memory...in other words...you did good, girl...great one-shot...I really enjoyed it...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 01:17 am

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