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Title: Chapter 47

 

I hate the photos.  They are really cheesy and disruptive.  I have to navigate my eyes  around them just to read the story.  This is supposed to be a story, right?  

Not a slide or picture show.

Sorry for the harshness, but I've been quiet for how many chapters now?

More words, less pics.

 



Author's Response:

Hello Willieriley, in a sea of over 90k words those pictures symbolise for me inspiration which I chose to share with the readers. But I think I will change my bio to reflect my new self-proclaimed title, Junebug66, Queen of Cheese so that others may be warned that We (Note the use of the Royal We) are going to be hard for the lactose intolerant to digest.

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: willieriley Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/12 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 33

I hate the photos.  They are really cheesy and disruptive.  I have to navigate my eyes  around them just to read the story.  This is supposed to be a story, right?  

Not a slide or picture show.

Sorry for the harshness, but I've been quiet for how many chapters now?



Author's Response:

Hello Willieriley I am so sorry to hear that you are lactose intolerant. Well I guess that means more calcium for me to keep my bones from breaking. 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: willieriley Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/12 10:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Loved the Denver chapter and the fact that the fam all got a chance to meet!  Some of the conversation actually made me laugh out loud.  

If only I could find out what happens next...ha ha......;)

 



Author's Response:

Hey O, nothing like a family get together with food to get it started. Yeah, some people are just like uncontrollable, but I think it's the age thing. Hopefully they will behave themselves during Thanksgiving dinner. Working on it.

Thanks for reading, laughing and commenting. As busy as I know you are, I appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/11 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

HEY JUNEBUG66,

I see that I am Late, but I still need to comment on that person that through bad spell and ignorance left a very mean comment. I for one don't get why people are attacking the writer. If you don't like something don't read it, stop being childish about stuff. Are we not grown women, we need to act like it. I know that I have spent good money on things that I have read that were not worth it. Guess what, I didn't buy them anymore.

But you know what we have a greater freedom here because we don't have to PAY FOR ANYTHING. IT"S FREE. YES! FREE! OH MY FREE YOU SAY!  

Why don't we be GROWN ASS WOMEN and stop acting like kids,and be bold enough to stand for WHAT YOU BELIEVE IN!

THEN maybe, we can critize YOU ;0(?

You JUNEBUG66, KEEP WRITTEN. ALL YOU OTHER WRITERS TOO!!



Author's Response:

Hey Cimmy1, I will forgive you for being tardy to the party we all have a life, contrary to what some people think.

You know how I feel about the subject and like I told that person no one is making anyone read anything! And yes this is free so if you don't like it leave it alone! I know because I have done that and not commented.

I'm waiting on you woman. Thanks for reading, and reviewing.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 04:04 am

Title: Chapter 47

Hey, that was very nice. Finally they all get to meet. That grandma has a mouth on her, but you got to love her. NICE PICTURE! They really add life to the story. THANK  YOU. So now everyone know that they want to commit to each other, when will he pop the ?????

NOW UPDATE!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Cimmy1, glad you liked it. Grandma Rae and Grandpa David do it all with love. I like to think that the pics add more life and definitely color to the story, so I'm happy you like them. The question will be asked when the time is right and that's all I'm gonna say.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing. I do appreciate it.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 45

Well, they do say make up sex can be the best sex!!  Slowly working my way to getting up to date and loving the story.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey O, yeah that is what they say so I thought I would put it to the test. I think they could be right. I am glad you caught up that was a lot to work to do and still do what you do. Glad you are enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/01/11 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 46

Fantastic update.

Author's Response:

Hey Janetbd, Glad you enjoyed the aftermath of the hurricane, now time for some giving of thanks.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting. Thank you for your continued support.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 46

Glad to see Rielle and KC are back hot and heavy. Glad KC and her dad had their little "chat." But Rielle still needs to tell dad to chill out.  Seems like the one that needs some lovin is Chris, will there be a spark between him and Dani?? Is she even old enough:) Bring on the future in-laws, this should be a hoot...

Author's Response:

Hello VAL1, nothing like make-up nookie. You know Rielle is gonna have a few words for Pops but K.C. came through like a champ. Chris and Danni hmmmm (Yeah she's old enough.) Thanksgiving in Denver will be fun.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 46

GOOOO Bryon !!! GOOD to see everyone getting along again. Thanksgivin  can't eait to see what will happen there.

Author's Response:

Cimmy, Cimmy Cimmy1, Bryan was the first to man up and it will be interesting to see who picks up the gauntlet. Thanksgiving a time of family, food, football and fun maybe not in that order for some.

Thanks for your continued support, it is really appreciated.

 

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Whoo, almost caught up!  Love it!

 



Author's Response: Hey O glad you have taken the time to visit St. Sebastian. Thank you and I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/01/11 02:22 pm

Title: Chapter 22

Rielle showed her brother, LOL! Kissing K.C. like that in front of Chris was bold and I love that! But I think Chris is just overprotective of his sister, that's all. :) Just wants to make sure that she is safe and cared for by the right man. Also, I loved hearing a little bit about K.C.'s past. 

Through his descriptions of the States, you can really tell he misses them even if he does consider St. Sebastian to be home. I know I would be a little homesick myself! 



Author's Response:

Hey MJ, when you've got an older brother you always have to be keeping him out of your business cause he'll want to treat you like a kid. They are a close family and K.C. knows what that is like so he gets how Chris feels. He doesn't consider St. Sebastian home yet but it is beginning to feel like it could be a very important place to him. You'll see what I mean.

Thanks for reading and reviewing woman.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 02:38 pm

Title: Chapter 45

Glad to see Rielle and KC back together again. I wonder if that special project involves an engagement ring. I enjoy each chapter and look forward to read the next one. Keep writing and let the haters do what they do best,which is nothing but take up space.



Author's Response:

Hey Jai_03, Happy you are happy. My lips are gonna be sealed for a little longer on that project. Sorry, you'll find out soon enough though. Thank you for your encouragement I appreciate it. Thank you also for reading and reviewing I appreciate it.

Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 45

Damn!

That was HOT. VERY HOT. Did I meantion it was HOT lol.

Glad that Rielle and KC got their HOT reunion; they are gonna wear each other out!

Fantastic as always and can't wait for the next installment!

Chel



Author's Response:

Hey Chel, after all of the drama with the break up and not seeing each other for six weeks they have a lot to work out (in and out of bed). Things are back on track for Gabrielle and K.C. and they have lots to be thankful for. I think you'll like it.

Thanks for reading, enjoying and giving me your support from the very beginning. I truly appreciate it.

Reviewer: miquerida Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 14

I am having such a good time reading this!  



Author's Response: Hello O, I am happy you like it and have taken the time away from you and yours to say. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/11 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 31

Those were the perfect pics for this post. Really loved the fireworks show at the end. lol.

Just stopping by to show you some luv. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Hey Supreme One, I'm glad you appreciated the pics usually I have to edit how many pics and my enthusiasm can get the better of me.

I thank you for your support and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/11 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 45

Hot Dam!!!

Great update.

I think that Chris should meet that special woman, who will drive him crazy.

maybe your next story.



Author's Response:

Hey Janetbd, glad you enjoyed it. I can't wait for Chris to meet his special woman either. We'll see how he does when the shoe is squeezing his toes as the old folks say.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate all of your comments.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 12:37 pm

Title: Chapter 45

I'm so glad you are back with regular updates. I love that K.C. and Gaby are back together again. The love making was the bomb once again. Those two have great chemistry.

I think K.C. wants his mom to help with a surprise ring and proposal for Gaby. (HINT)

I was reading your comments and realized that you had a hater. I say don't worry about what people say. You are doing a awesome job with this story. A lot of people love this story so that is all that matters. Stop reading if you don't like it. DUH.



Author's Response:

Hey Tam14611, happy to know you are enjoying the reunion of Rielle and K.C. with all that it entailed (wink, wink).

That is an interesting concept you have there (broad wink, wink, wink), we'll just have to wait to see what develops.

When I started posting on Valent Chamber I said constructive criticism is appreciated and I still stand by that. I wouldn't have minded if the anonymous commentor could point out what exactly they didn't like about the story to back up what they said but they didn't. I agree if you don't like something don't read it. There are some things on here that I won't read and I won't leave a review either. Everything isn't for everybody and if you don't like it write your own I say.

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This is garbage!You are a terriable writer who needs to use spell, grammer and life check. Take leassons form mizcaramelsmotee



Author's Response:

Hello ANONYMOUS,

You not only need spell check but apparently you are the one that needs a life as well. I am so sorry that you have nothing better to do than read my FREE STORY and criticize me ANONYMOUSLY. You are apparently a child who CANNOT put your NAME to your WORDS like I have done and has made Miss_Carmel_Smootee your shield.

I for one am not going to let you, a small minded little person come to my party and harsh my buzz. Let me know when you grow up and then we can talk about life. Until then you can go read Miss_Carmel_Smootee's stories and I will continue to do what I do because this is a FREE COUNTRY and NO ONE is forcing you to read my work.

I have to say though you remind me of the people who come to a party with their Tupperware dishes, eat up all of the food and then says that it was no good while filling their Tupperware dish to take home!

When you are ADULT enough to be on this site you might better appreciate it. This is for adults who appreciate STORIES. I tell you what why don't you write your own so that we can CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICIZE it.

THANK YOU AND MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 11

GET IT BOI!!! GO K.C. GO K.C. GO GO GO!!! *dancing*

Author's Response:

Hello DirtyDiva, K.C. isn't shy about what he wants and he is setting his eyes on Gabrielle. He won't get it yet but he will persist and be rewarded.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 8

WOWWWWW!!! Why are your chapters so SHORT and CLIFFHANGERISH?! LOL 

Author's Response:

Hi DirtyDiva, glad you like it and the chapters will get longer, I promise, but they will remain rather cliffhangerish.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 03:14 am

Title: Cast of Characters

Your pic of Rielle...NO HOMO...but...DAYUM!!!

Author's Response: Hello DirtyDiva, she is a very beautiful young lady. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/10 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 44

LOVE it as usual!

I'm glad that KC and Rielle resolved a few things.  I'm also glad that KC apolgized and she accepted.

Between however is at the door and the upcoming huricane, I got a feeling something is going to hit the fan lol

Can't wait for the next installment!

Chel 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Chel, Glad you approve. I'm glad all that mess is out of the way and the apologies were sincere on both sides. Something is going to hit the fan and hopefully one or both will be full of hot air.

Thanks for your continued support. You know how much I appreciate you.

Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 44

Great update!!

I'm glad that she accepted K.C.'s apology, and own up to her short comings as well.

I just hope that the hurricane won't do too much damage.



Author's Response:

Hello Janetbd,

Thanks for the kind words. Rielle had to acknowledge that she wasn't perfect in this situation either and you would have to be a stone not to feel K.C.'s sincerity. High winds and a good bit of rain should produce only some downed tree limbs, power lines and maybe a roof or two lost.

Thank you for reading and appreciating because I appreciate you too.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 44

I'm at the edge of my seat, June! Excellent chapter. I can't wait for more! 

Author's Response: Hey MJ don't fall off girl not sure how high your chair is and I want you safe, sound and writing. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 10:36 am

Title: Chapter 44

Reunited and it feels so good. I'm so glad that they are back together. They love each other so much.  I wonder who is at the door interrupting some make up nookie???

I'm loving this story so much. Keep them coming. I can't wait until your next update 



Author's Response:

Hello Tam14611

I like that song and you know I actually had a song in my head while I was writing this chapter. 'You' by the wonderful Jesse Powel. You know somebody is always lurking about the place. They need a love life of their own to keep them out of other people's business.

Anyway thank you for reading, reviewing and enjoying and I appreciate you support .

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 05:40 am

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