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Title: Chapter 1

Liking it so far. When you mentioned Lamont who wanted to the girls manager all I could see was Eddie Murphy in Raw swinging his microphone around singing 'Could You Be Love'. The girls sound like they've all had rough starts hopefully this will keep them grounded when they succeed. One can only hope so because they sound like they have the drive to make it, despite the trouble some of those men are going to bring their way. Keep on keeping on.

Author's Response: LMAO! Thats funny, I watched that DVD the other day actually! Hhhahahaah! Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 03:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Loved the background on each girl. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 1

Off to a good start.  Bring on the men, please!!!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading! And they will be here soon! They are all fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine arent they?! Yummy!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 10:39 pm

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