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Title: You Oughta Know

Wow, Nicholas is a sh*thead!!! He's been cheating on her all along and making her fell like the bad guy. I hope his relationship with Brenda sucks and he realises he let go a good thing. By then hopefully Aiyana will be in a loving relationship and preggers. 

Brenda also has some nerve too. Like Aiyana said, "who's the slut now" as she was sleeping with another woman's husband. She's definitely fallen off her high pedestal of morality. Please let payback be a bitch for them!!!Especially the dirty dog after all he played all those mind games on Aiyana making her feel small when all the while having his slut on the side. Great update!!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hopefully good things will come for Aiyana. Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/10 07:03 am

Title: You Oughta Know

Wow, I didn't see Brenda reappearing in the story.  To being dating a married man and she is very proud of herself.  As for Nicholas Aiyana is better off without that loser. 

Go Christopher throw her shit out the window and egg Javier's car.  What a fool that Raven is to have her lover drop her off and she didn't her current boyfriend would find out...WTF?

Man these people are a mess.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Im proud of that twist that I put in there lol :)
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/05/10 03:31 am

Title: You Oughta Know

Great update. Please let her be done with that poor excuse for a man. Brenda wants to play stupid, she knew he was married. I loved what Christopher did to his now ex and new man. Will they find happiness with each other, I can't wait to see.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/05/10 09:41 pm

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