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Title: Chapter 5

hurry man and kiss the girl

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 5

These two...argh...frustrating. I can't wait for them to get together.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/10/10 07:15 pm

Title: Cast Pics

You have the foundation for a great story here. Why are you dragging it out? You have give the depth, to each person in the story and we all now know who they are. Please move on with the story. You a have been given a wonderful gift of writing. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/10 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Simone should be ashamed of herself and I am glad that she did apologize.  Why is she so afraid of a relationship developing between her and Charlie?  They both have feeling for each other.  Thank you for the update, I love this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/10/10 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Cute story. More please...

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 04:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm, interesting...looks like they have the hots for each other. Yay!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 09:02 am

Title: Chapter 4

Why can't Simone and Charlie be honest with each other?  I mean they are friends right and friends can tell each other anything.  I am pulling for them.  Thanks for the update, you rock!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 03:40 pm

Title: Cast Pics

When does Charlie plan on telling Simone he has a job? I hope he doesn't wait until she starts complaining about him going partying instead of finding work.. I'm sure that will lead to a major fall out then some major making up.. ;-)

Reviewer: Reneek Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 01:21 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.  Hopefully soo they will realize that they are both attracted to each other.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 12:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

It would be cool if they became more than friends.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/10 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 09:00 am

Title: Chapter 3

Really nice update . I like Simone and Charlie. Hopefully she can lead him in the right direction.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/10 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great story!! I can't wait for the next chapter.. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/10 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Excellent update.  When is Charlie going to bust a move?

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/09/10 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

imo if i were simone, my would be attraction would increase if a certain someone would help pay the rent...lol

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/09/10 09:55 pm

Title: Cast Pics

That was a nice start.  I'm very interested into seeing how this plays out.  Thanks.

Reviewer: BesoBeso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/09/10 04:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2

SO which guy is Simone going to fall for, Charlie or Adam? She is not quite desperate enough to date Adam yet. I am not sure that I like Adam myself, but I don't entirely like Charlie right now.  He is using Simone and she's allowing it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/09/10 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/10 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 2

I like the start to the story.  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/10 02:54 am

Title: Cast Pics

Great cast...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/09/10 02:46 am

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