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Title: Epilogue

I hate to see this story end, it was so wonderful.



Author's Response:

Awwwww...this comment was another one that touched my heart. I'm sad to see this tale end as well, Pmgayles. Glad you enjoyed it so much!

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Date: 26/04/11 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 37

Gutter-brain, SuBree, gutter-brain! Get your head in the game, as Chad would say. Focus, on Avalon's genius and not Caesar's everything else.

Goodness me, it is 4:58AM and I am trying to gather my wits and comment. Impossible.

I loved this chapter, and the aforementioned recipe sounds delicious. If you actually have it, I want it. Lol. Every time Avalon and Subrina grow closer, it puts a smile on my face. I like their friendship.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, I lost (misplaced?) that recipe in my recent move. I truly don't know WHERE it is. :( If I ever come across it again, I'll pass it on to you.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/11 11:00 am

Title: Chapter 36

Seriously, Mercedes, you could come no better than that? After he was feeling on her booty, as R. Kelly would say, you came at him with that and a scowl on your face, to boot! You might have had a chance at being attractive if you stopped showing how ugly your insides truly are. Little, big head girl!

Caesar and Bree, caking in the hallway! They are fooling no one. They are going to be a worst kept secret now that Mercedes has seen and verified with her own two eyes. Though maybe her seeing red will help in that department, I doubt it though.

Blaine has had a difficult life, but it seems like he never dealt with it right. Or at all.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Little Big Head Girl? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! I haven't heard that in a minute.

Thanks for the comment and the laugh, TRaberah! lol

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/04/11 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 35.3

For real, what now???

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Read on. You'll see...

:)

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 35.2

Wow, again Blaine shows how much of an ass-hole he can be. Keeping the girls big is more important than keeping him healthy? Can they not be both? I have seen it before and it could be done again!

Goodness, I really do not like anything about this guy. He just makes me sick, keeping these girls in mental, physical and emotional bondage the way he does. All the while laying the charm on so thick some of them can't see two feet in front of their faces! His wife included.

Someone please kill him already. He's due.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

I've seen it before as well. Blaine sucks!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 35.1

Victoria, I really like you, but you are being really dumb. Maybe an arrest will make you see the light of day.

Don’t give me that look, I know you were thinking it, too!

I laugh out loud at Caesar's ramnblings often, he's an amusing guy. Even when he isn't trying. Great.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Vickie gonna see the light alright. It's gonna be GLARING in her face.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 34.2

I will definitely have to give that video a look-see. It seems like something that could happen and, damn it, Caesar was right about Bree.

*side-eye* I am the all knowing, I should have been spot-on a chapter ago, lol. Oh, well, even Oz was wrong once in a while. We cannot win them all.

That was really cute, though. All of it, really, from Caesar and Bree's frisky talk over by the fruit to the boys and their watchful Grandma. It was just super cute.

-Peace.



Author's Response:

*Big Grin* I'm glad you liked this super cute scene so much. You got me cheesing wide.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 34.1

Lol!!! Caesar is a trip! She'd looking for you in the produce, really, dude? She doesn't need fruid and veg, oh, no, just a little bit (or big, whatever) of Caesar. This guy, man. He kills me.

When he rolled up to the P-Ranch, I thought that, too, was hilarious.

Love it.

-Peace.



Author's Response:

C is really a funny dude. I had fun writing about him.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 10:12 pm

Title: Main Cast

LOL!!! I just love these little chats we have when I review. It does my heart good. :D

Author's Response:

I luvs them too, Thundakat! :)

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/04/11 04:38 am

Title: Main Cast

He almost missed it with that little truma of his but I am glad you brought him back to reality just in time in fact he was the fault of the event happening much sooner then expected with all that excitement Subrina was going thru....(Trying to type in code for those that have not finished reading yet) ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for typing in code. lol. And you'r so right about him setting her off.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 07:39 am

Title: Main Cast

Yes, it's all good all good indeed.

Thank you for sharing



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading along with us!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 07:37 am

Title: Main Cast

Yes, that was a lesson she needed to learn there is a difference btwn arrogance and pride in self and confidence.

Author's Response:

Another true statement. You're on a roll today, lady!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 07:34 am

Title: Main Cast

Yeah it was about time but too bad it was too late.

Author's Response:

This is true.

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Date: 20/04/11 07:31 am

Title: Main Cast

Well actually I question that so call love he had for Ricky I think it was if at all only there because Ricky was young and could mold him and as he got older he had things that he could keep him in check about plus he enable Ricky so again he could keep him under his thumb.  Like you said Blaine has no love for anyone

Author's Response:

Yeah, Blaine was just too far gone. He didn't WANT to change. There was hope for him when he was a child, but somebody messed THAT up.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 07:29 am

Title: Main Cast

AHHHHH! I feel so special thank you for leaving it up 1 more week and not leaving me hanging but u do know I would have been stalking asking where the story was @ rite....LOL!!!

Happy Writing!



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!! I can so see you doing that - stalking the story. LOL!!!

Happy reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/11 07:20 am

Title: Epilogue

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Wonderful story. I am glad that I started back reading when I did finding out that yesterday was the due day to take it down.

I love the ending.  You had me surprised yet again with Ms Vickie I no where saw it coming. :D

I know you have to rest for a bit but can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Happy Writings!!!!

Thank You for sharing.



Author's Response:

When I saw you and one other faithful reader still tryna finish the story, I decided to leave it up for another week. I couldn't leave y'all hanging.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and many animated comments!

Happy Reading!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/04/11 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 94.1

Actully I was yelling...."SUBRINA, PICK UP THE DAMN PHONE!" but close enough.

Glad Ceasar has gotten his head out of his ass even though he took his everloving time about it.



Author's Response:

tee-hee. It was fun writing that scene. Ceasar's stubbornness was starting to get over my nerves too. I had to let him do SOMETHING to redeem himself.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 11:44 pm

Title: Chapter 93

TWINS!!!!! Now I wish Leesha could have kept her twin boys. :( oh well.

Great update.



Author's Response:

Yes, their kids could have gotten married had they all lived. It's all good though. At least Leesha was able to keep one child.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 92.3

YEAHHHHHH!! Leesha got her memory and all of her faclities back.

She was hiding she just needed 2 hear Ricky's apology.

Great update.



Author's Response:

Yep. Leesha was hiding all right. She ain't hiding no more though. Yayyyy!!!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 92.1

That scene was a bit like xmas carol.  You know with the past, present, future all rolled into one.  LOL!

No dying for Blaine he has to spend out the rest of his old life suffering, the only good thing I can say for him is that killed that pedofile that molested Ricky so ruthlessly.

Great update.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!! I see your point about that scene being like the Christmas Carol. lol.

Thanks for the laugh AND the comment!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 11:07 pm

Title: Chapter 91.2

Yes, finally Leesha and Bree reunited.

In the last jibber I entered I forgot to mention Mercedes it is sad that she got burned so badly but again it is her own fault I wonder will this humble her a bit.

Damn Ms. Vicky had to be the causality out all this mess though I did not want Blaine to die cause I want his trifling ass to suffer why Ms Vicky she just found herself and was divorcing that trifling ass man.  She just found her mother and was bonding with her which I wish she to was at the mall shopping when all this went down I know this not the right time to think of this but I hope Blaine was not in the will to get anything but a swift kick in the nades.

Damn Ms Vicky dead.



Author's Response:

Yes, that was sad about Mercedes. But that was one lesson she needed to learn. No worries about Vickie. All is well. Trust me.

Thanks for commenting!

 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 91.1

Damn Ricky why couldn't you be a good guy and a victim of Blaine like everyone else.

I hate that he die he won't see his son and he want be able to apologize to Leesha.

I hope Ms. Vickie survives the stroke with minium paralyses.

Good Lauren and Avalon where not there and that Blaine did not try and blow up the S-Ranch I am curious still though about the van parked in the front where the other girls back early.

I hope that Binky is safe and will testify against Blaine.

I know feels betrayed but I need him to get over it sooner then later Subrina is the same person I wonder if he is going to cut his mom off too cause she was the one that started this investigation by sending Leesha's book to her.

Speaking of Leesha sounds like she has an admire and protector in her doctor hmmmmm. I hope Leesha also makes a full recovery

This story is so wonderful I am starting to hate to see it finished. Well enough of my jibberish back to the story.



Author's Response:

C is postiioning himself to dig in even deeper with his grudges. Sigh.

Thanks for commenting!

P.S. I hate to see it end as well.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 79.3

Damn Ricky is trying to straighten up and fly right.

But now we really know who the real villian is in all of this Blaine cause I don't think wil looking back that Ricky would have been all that bad without the influence of Blaine except for the treatment of Leesha that was all him and his temper.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Ricky is turning over a new leaf. It's about time, don't you think?

Blaine has been REAL villian all along. Ricky was just another pawn...spawn? lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 01:37 pm

Title: Chapter 79.2

Bree Bree aint no joke I loved how she put that woman (I use that term light) in check.  I was laughing my ass off when she said she admired how quickly Bree changed her tone after putting her behind in check going so far to wonder if she ws bipolar LOL!!!

Great update.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!! I liked that scene too. tee-hee

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 18/04/11 01:30 pm

Title: Chapter 77.1

Blaine was being down right vendictive right there instead of leaving like a man should when a woman asks him to he had to throw dirt.  If he was thinking his normal nut job self he would have known to let her cool down and try to worm his way back in.

Plus it was not Ricky's fault all the way to expose that Binky girl to the virus she was in with her grandfather trying to pin him to a pregnancey that was not his doing. Plus he did not know until Rae boasted about her having it and him having it too and he had stopped having sex by then.

Blaine knows Vicky's health is not all good he did that on purpose asshole.



Author's Response:

Blaine don't care about nobody but himself now. The little love he had for Ricky is gone too.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/11 12:56 pm

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