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Title: Maya: Part 1

My first review on the site - yay!:D

The characters are so quirky-funny and I love it.  I loved the walkie talkie bit too . . . and all of it :D  This is gonna be interesting.



Author's Response: Thank you for reading Valaria! Glad to be your first story to review and that you're enjoying it! 

Reviewer: Valaria Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/12/10 12:32 am

Title: Maya: Part 1

very interesting story - looking forward to see where this goee, thanks for the updare!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading Cassius_Noir! I'm glad that you like it :)

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 01:15 pm

Title: Maya: Part 1

Hmm, Kyle's making his move. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading baha_malo! You always review and I think you're amazing for it (just putting it out there). 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 05:01 am

Title: Ellie

Nice, can't wait for the next chapter!  Poor Mars, you would think with his looks, he would be more in-tuned to what women think...he is about to catch holy hell from Ellie.  I hope that Maya works where they work because if Mars is seen giving her the time of day, Ellie is going to bring the pain!!!   I love it and love your choice of character pics!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you like it and Mars is oddly naive for someone with his looks and who's roommate is even a woman. It took me far too long to figure out what to do for character pics and what I wanted but I'm glad that you like them!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/10 04:56 am

Title: Beginning credits and Narration

You had me at Ian and his oh so beautiful blue eyes!!!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you for reading! You can just get lost in Ian's mesmerizing eyes!

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 04:11 am

Title: Ellie

I want more... please!

Author's Response: Haha thank you for reading! Glad that you liked it and I will have more up soon.

Reviewer: Whoppie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/12/10 07:32 pm

Title: Ellie

Please continue this story!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and I will continue this story! :)

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/11/10 11:42 pm

Title: Ellie

I love this already. Mars seems like my kind of guy plus I have an ultimate crush on Ian Somerhalder. His eyes can light up the freakin' night sky and his smile can charm the panties off of any sane woman. LOL, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hahaha you and I share a crush on Ian Somerhalder he's just so delicious. 

Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 05:04 am

Title: Ellie

i agree with his friend  you dump a woman no woman take it that very well and if we do we must be dope up lol.  hopefully she dont get him fried or anything thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hahaha yeah Mars is kinda of naive when it comes to girls.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 03:44 am

Title: Beginning credits and Narration

sounds like a good story and like the pic of the cast.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Glad you like the cast pics I spent too much time thinking about them and everything lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 03:39 am

Title: Beginning credits and Narration

Calling dibs on Mars.. I've loved him since he was on lost.. Love is eyes.. You can get lost in them..

Looking forward to reading his story..



Author's Response: Thank you for reading! And we're going to have to share him because he is too delicious to give up!

Reviewer: Reneek Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 12:01 am

Title: Ellie

Interesting start.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy it :)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/10 12:00 am

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