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Title: Chapter 1

So this is a one shot short story.  I hope that you will write more about the couple.  Thanks



Author's Response:

I have written more but I have to upload it :p I'm bad at finding time to edit my own stories. But never fear! It will be up as soon as possible. I'll write a note to myself. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/12 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was so funny, but I really do hope that he brushed his teeth.

Author's Response:

Yeppers, it would be bad with him kissing her with his nasty teeth ^^ Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/02/11 05:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

sweet and short - enjoyed it! thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. (^^)/

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/01/11 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That was very sweet. John is so nervous that he throws up on dad, hilarious.

Good story.



Author's Response: Thank you! 

Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

well hope john work it out with his girlfriend dad but let face it no father think any man good enough for their girls lol.

Author's Response: Amen! Thank you for reading. 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great short!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 07:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great short!

Author's Response: Thank you :) 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 07:33 am

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