So this is a one shot short story. I hope that you will write more about the couple. Thanks
Author's Response:
I have written more but I have to upload it :p I'm bad at finding time to edit my own stories. But never fear! It will be up as soon as possible. I'll write a note to myself. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/12 09:16 pm
That was so funny, but I really do hope that he brushed his teeth.
Author's Response:
Yeppers, it would be bad with him kissing her with his nasty teeth ^^ Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/02/11 05:15 am
sweet and short - enjoyed it! thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. (^^)/
Date: 13/01/11 01:45 pm
That was very sweet. John is so nervous that he throws up on dad, hilarious.
Good story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Reviewer: bookacholic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/01/11 10:47 pm
well hope john work it out with his girlfriend dad but let face it no father think any man good enough for their girls lol.
Author's Response: Amen! Thank you for reading.
Date: 12/01/11 03:45 pm
Great short!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Date: 12/01/11 07:34 am
Great short!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/01/11 07:33 am