Please update....this is really good!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/06/14 05:48 pm
This is really a great story. Will you continue this story soon. Please....
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: 01/02/13 02:25 pm
I really appreciate your writing style and your sense of humor. i wish you would continue writting the story. Has sooo much potential.
Reviewer: amlaamar Signed [Report This]Date: 31/01/13 06:52 am
Please update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 30/06/11 08:22 am
This is a very tough subject – one that most cannot express and yet, unfortunately, these tragedies happen every day. I applaud your bravery in writing the harsh realities of life. My hope is that somewhere, somehow, Demetrius is human.
It’s been so long since you’ve updated that I had to reacquaint myself with the story. I'm curious as to how all the players will meet on the same playing field. Until then, you’ve captured my attention to see it through.
Update soon.
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/03/11 08:24 am
CREEPY....someone comes in rattling off your personal info? CREEPY....
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/11 07:59 am
Oh man, WTH??? Human trafficking??? Wonder what's the connection??? Demetrius is a cold sucker. Hmm, this plot thickens.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/11 04:25 am
I enough this chapter because of Reese and Marcus' relationship. I am looking forward to Riley and Troy meeting each other. I find Demetrius very interesting even though he is a bad guy. But there is something about a bad guy that you just have to like.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/11 12:11 am
So is Riley going to fall for Donovan because he's hawt!!! I think that I'm in lust. I need to fan myself.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/02/11 09:40 pm
VERY good...that's what I think! The pace was excellent, the dialogue was light and interesting, details of Riley's credentials were presented in an effective and clever manner, new charcters were introduced smoothly...the entire chapter read perfectly. Job well done.
The F.B.I. hunh? How intriguing!
Date: 08/02/11 07:09 pm
whoa! That was intense, scary! My heart was thumping just as heavily as Riley's was!!
Great start!
Date: 08/02/11 06:45 pm
aww you chose david beckham as the lead male? i not found of him but the story is great
Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/01/11 09:41 pm
Interesting update. Can't wait until they all meet in Jamaica!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/11 06:42 am
This was a great chapter. But I am looking forward to Riley and Troy meeting up. But at least I get to see how they come to meeting, through Reese. Cassidy is hilarious especially when it comes to Troy and Miranda. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/01/11 11:58 pm
Nice beginning. Was this posted before?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 03:17 am
oh crap what did the FBI wanted with her? is she in trouble or is her boyfriend? thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 01:21 am
where did she go and who is she running from?
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 01:19 am
nic pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 01:18 am
I absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next update. Thank you....
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 12:02 am
Me likey! More please!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/11 11:51 pm