I absolutely loved this short. It was awesome. Glad he got Taria in the end and they both got their HEA.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/03/11 05:08 am
This was really cute, I have to say I love the way you make sexy and funny go together and neither feels lacking or out of place. LOVED this line:
[Taria found herself taking lamaze-class breaths in order to calm her coochie down, though the shit wasn't working.]
LOLLLLLL
Super cute story and I like that he realised what was wrong without having a 'you knew what we were getting into when we got together' moment.
The flashbacks worked really well although I was hoping to see themoment when she told ol' girl she was fired, lol.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/03/11 04:31 am
"You'd be amazed at what you find out when you eat a woman's pussy right."
WORD. *picking my jaw up from the floor*
ITM, gurl, you got skittles... mad skittles...
DAMN, that was good!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 04:30 am
F@#KING AMAZING!!!! I read this a few times to help get me in the right frame of mind for a good nights rest. I kinda want more of Taria and Jake
Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 04:24 am
oh mymmymy
Reviewer: DivineFindings Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:57 am
This was a great oneshot, IT.
I'm loving that Jake has some sass to him. I knew that Taria wouldn't be able to uphold the agreement for too long. Jake is too fine for that. Gimme visuals, woman!
Also that other chick (whose name I can't spell or pronounce), we'll call her K. Yeah, I don't like her. *hiss*
I'm going to overlook that this is a new story because I enjoyed it so much. Now get back to the others! *pulls out Nene's whip*
Love and huggles!
Val
Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:41 am
This is absolutely great. I loved it!
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:30 am
Love it!!! I need another one shot.. I'm loving Jake and Taria.
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:05 am
Absolutely loved it. Great one-shot. More please.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/03/11 02:03 am
Be creative and add one shots, me likee!!!
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 12:40 am
I loved this story please please please to the infinite power make this a series!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/03/11 12:37 am
Yup, you know how to hit all the right notes for readers like me. Liking me some Jake but I would love to know more about him. You definitely excel in making your characters three dimensional (with all the faults and sexiness one could muster). So, I'm hoping you'll revisit Taria and Jake in the near future.
Also, am I the only one who's picked up on your play on certain characters' names? Krysis? (Fuck that bitch, seriously)
Love the play on names! You have another like that in Farewell too, if I remember correctly. I like the quirk and the fact that you have British spelling tendencies.
Author's Response: thank you! i wasn't sure if anyone would pick up on that name thing. lol but yeah, i kinda like these characters and the chemistry between Taria and Jake so i think i will continue them. not sure if it'll be in a full-on story or just more one-shots. Reviewer: Islengal Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/03/11 12:34 am