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Title: Chapter 10

Great story and I loved the ending!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 10

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 9

Thank god Miguel rescued Alesha but I have just about had it with her. For someone so smart she is making so dumb decisions. Also when is her sister going to get hers. Anika is scum! Your story is crazy good!!!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 04:21 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Someone need to shoot Anika and Alesha you are so stupid. You have feeling for that scum.  Wonderful.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 06:26 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Annika is a conniving , low life ho. She deserves every thing that happening to her and more. Simon's ass is crazy, there is no way in hell that Aleesha is going to marry him and ruin her life and career for him.

Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 8

Anika is crazy, she need to be taking care of her child instead of trying to get revenge. And what is up with Adebisi? Trying to get married during a riot? Not a smart move Simon. Can't Wait for another update.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 01:22 am

Title: Chapter 8

Good lord is Anika the worst sister ever?  Alesha owes her no loyality! Alesha needs to get out now and stay out. Keep up the good work on this story. Can wait to find out what's next.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/11 06:37 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Supreb story, Anika is a dirty bitch. These people are a mess. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/04/11 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 7

Things aren't looking good for Anika. Love the update.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 7

This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. Now she wants to talk to her sister! Alesha get the hell out now. Each chapter makes this story more mysterious and everyone seems to have an agenda!

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Date: 15/04/11 10:03 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this story is so good. These people are messy,please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wonderful story, Alesha you are so stupid. I need another update soon.

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Date: 08/04/11 08:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Another interesting turn. You sure know how to keep me interested. Well done!

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Date: 08/04/11 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wonder how Alesha is going to get herself out of this situation. Love the update.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/11 05:52 am

Title: Chapter 5

Excellent story, Alesha are you crazy. Adebisi is a sick freak. You need to run like hell and lied when they come to save you. As for the sister she is messing around with that nazi. She is going to have him kill or people will find out her dealing with that nasty freak. I need a update. Alesha please do not have sex with Adebisi he likes raping men and he did not used a condom, think hiv.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/11 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 5

Alesha has really stepped in it. Who knows when or if she will get out. This isn't going to end well. Good job! Love chapters 4 and 5.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/11 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 4

O Shucks. Alesha's stuck in there while the riot started, but we all know Adebisi will keep her safe. love the update.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 08:00 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I do not know what to say. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 04:29 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow, the shit will eventually hit the fan.

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Date: 03/04/11 04:25 am

Title: Chapter 4

OMG!!!!!!!Thats all i got

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 04:15 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow, this story has really gotten twisted but in a fascinating way. I'm kinda speechless right now. Anika really got herself in a mess. She is so unlike her sister. Can't wait to find out what's nex!
 

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 01:17 am

Title: Chapter 3

Schilinger hooked on the chocolate lol! I wonder how long they'll able to keep this thing going? Can't wait for Alesha to come face to face with Adebisi. Love the update, Can't wait for another.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3

liking the story keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this is an interesting take on the show! I think Alesha should leave it alone. That isn't in her nature. I'm curious to see what she learns. This is well written and very believable.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/11 06:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You just mad my day. I'm so glad you've made a sequel to under cover lover, because I've been re-reading the first one way too much lol! I'm a huge fan of OZ but I could never find any fanfiction of the show other than what you've written, so I hope keep writing them because I will be reading. Love it ! Hope to get an update soon.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/11 04:27 am

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