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Title: Chapter 1

Dye...please I really need the next update to this story. Don't tell me it ends at this first chapter...at least another one...please. You've got me twisted up on these Tangies. Thanks very much Dye!

Author's Response:

Hi chocolate470, thanks for reading, I'm really glad you liked it. This is a one shot drabble but I'm beginning to realize that the peeps want longer stories and I'll definitely keep that in mind.

Thanks for thr review babe.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/08 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I think I understand the story and if i'm right this is going to be a good one. Can't wait to see where it goes thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Hi wwwefanforlife, it's good to see you here.

I'm glad that you like it, the only issue is that it's written to be a drabble but if anything comes to mind, it will be the first on my list for an update.

Thanks for the stars and the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/08 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh this was great. I love the fact it was different again. The ending was too cute for wors. I echo everybody thoughts about the age gap in this story. It really doesn't matter if they are close in age or not, Todd and Evangeline still rock as always. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response:

Megumi, I glad you enjoy the variety that I try to bring out in these two characters, as for the age different, I strongly believe that as long as that person is legal, age is nothing but a number. Tangie will always be a match made in Chamber heaven.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review.

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

Cute! No matter what kind of setting there is I just love Todd and Evangeline. I wish you made it a longer where he come face to face with her and what she has be doing after this time. Still a great work!



Author's Response:

HI hopieland, thanks for reading, I understand what you mean when you said you wish the story could be longer, I will definitly try and improve on that.

This may sound a little strange to you but when I'm writing, if I happen to have a funny feeling in my throat, I know it's time to stop so as not to lose my focus with the storyline.

I'm glad you love Tangie, they are my favorite couple of all times.

 

Reviewer: hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

She 6 years. She must have wanted to make sure he'd matured! At least she held her ground while he was high school.

Author's Response:

Hi Sweet Pea, good to see you again. I am happy she took the high way instead of ending up in prison like all these female teachers with no self control.

Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 08:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, first off I have to give you props for sheer creativity with these last few one-shots you've posted.  I think each one is better than the last so hats off to you.  You're doing such a great job.

Second, while I've got to tell you, horny teens never do it for me, I can so see a 17 year old Todd Manning torturing his teacher this way.  Of course he'd pick the most inappropriate person to fixate on and make her life hell because he's sexy, funny and way too damn confident for his age.  Six years going by was a good amount of time I think and I really like the ending. It was cute.  All in all I really liked it.  Great job.



Author's Response: Hi Mamba, horny teens don't do it for me either but I just wanted to do something different for a change. Todd was born evil, I had to let everyone see that side of what his reaction would be if he was younger than her. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 04:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This was great, need more.

Author's Response: Hi avis 11611, your wish is my command, I have a little something up my sleeves and i'm hoping you'll like it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: avis11611 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I cant believe that he put her pic in his locker. Lol that was crazy. Need another fix.

Author's Response:

Kelleyli, This is great, I finally met a Tangeline junkie like myself, don't worry baby, a fix is on it's way soon. latest by sunday, hopefully.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 09:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

I loved it! I was laughing at young todd saying to myself that he was going get her arrested. What happened with the phone call? Please continue! It cant end like that. Great story!

Author's Response:

Kelleyli, the sight of young Todd making a pass at his teacher would be a hilarious scenario I would pay to see on tv.

I'm guessing a hook up might have happened after the phone call, who knows? Maybe it was Blair who called him, after all it was a " familiar voice" that answered at the other end [jokes].

Even though this leaves a lot to the imagination, if possible, I'll keep an update at the back of my mind.

Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 09:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

You really put a unique spin on these characters. I've never read a story in which there was a significant age gap between the two. And I never expected a story in which Evangeline was a teacher and Todd a student. You are very imaginative. I thought I might not like it, but I had a smirk on my face while I was reading it. Great Job.

Author's Response: Hello anouk, I'm happy I could make a believer out of you, thanks for reading, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

DAMN IT WAS SHORT AND SWEET. I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU WRITE ABOUT TANGELINE.. FOREVER A FAN.....

Author's Response:

Hershey, you know this is just for you right?

I'm glad you loved it. By the way, I'm cooking up something real special for you babe. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

gosh, you had me choking with laughter at the imagination of Todd singing Mrs. Jones to his teacher in the class room.

I loved it, this is the first time I ever read a story where Todd happens to be the younger one.



Author's Response: Hi sugar, Little Todd had me laughing too. He's very mischevious, I appreciate the review and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

Yay, I finally get my weekly fix from Dye. I had fun reading this, it sounds like something crazy little, young Todd would do.

I like the contrast between their characters, Evangeline was totally uptight while Todd was just the naughty singing Todd. I enjoyed it, the six year later call was suprising, I would have given up already.

By the way, you're right. I had a crush on quite a few teachers during my high school years. 



Author's Response: Hey Kayla, I'm so glad i can feed your Eva addiction, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 02:01 am

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