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Title: Chapter 11

This was darn good. Funny for me, I could follow this story only because I had recently discovered True Blood on Prime by mistake earlier part of this year. So I totally got who was who except for the aunt, Pam, Terry, and maybe Jessica. Dry cool story. I even like how it ended.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/16 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Oh man. This was exciting.  Wished there was more.  

Reviewer: FatJan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/02/12 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 11

Come on Prisilla plz add more.  I like your story better since they killed Tara, please u have got to write more to this.

Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/11 01:22 am

Title: Chapter 11

ur ending is a disappointment. tara had some of eric's blood he should have been able to find her before a year time and i understand she's a witch and all but i'm a bit disturbed by her having triplets with 3 different guys. tht means that she released three seperate eggs. it's possible but small chance of it happening. you could have also explain or described the magic of the rings and and what was the result of of the wars.

if ur having a part two i can't wait to read it. 

Reviewer: tammer for life Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/11 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Is this the only site you post your fanfiction? This is a great story. I'm a huge Tara/Eric/Alcide lover. Please tell you have more stories posted elsewhere.

Reviewer: Curious Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/11 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 11

Does this mean there's a sequal in the making ? Hope so.

ps: i like the names of the babies. How does she now who the father of each kid ? Just curious.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/11 03:50 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow, triplets!!!  Awesome.  Will there be sequel?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 1

wow can't wait 2 C what's N store 4 Tara & her girls 1yr now that's some hiding out w/detectuon she's good but around the courner can't wait

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 10

this is really good i just don't like how sam is being portrayed(iluvsam)-so i'm a bit biased. who is tara really going to hook up with? plz keep writning

Reviewer: janjan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/11 08:26 am

Title: Chapter 10

Tara's incredibly messed up.  What happened to the fierce woman she used to be?  I know that Franklin terrorized her, but this is outrageous.  It's like she enjoys be the victim, a plaything for whatever man wants her.  I'm not surprised that Sam brought Luna to Tara's reception.  He wanted to make Tara jealous and succeeded.  If she's over him, why does the idea of him being with Luna upset her?  So Tara doesn't want to have vampires running around in the sun, but is going to help them anyway?  She needs to stand up to them.  If they take her out, they won't be able to walk in the sun, so she needs to realize she does have some power.  Sam means well, but he has to wake up and realize the government isn't really on his side.  They will screw him over the first chance they get because he's a supernatural.  What was Luna thinking, having sex with Alcide?  She said she didn't want to be a prostitute, but that's what she did for her job.  Does anyone have any morals here?  Doesn't Alcide want to get rid of Russell and Eric?  He should have worked with Luna, but no.  Alcide should listen to Ruby Jean, they need to find a way to kill Russell and Eric.  He's right, she doesn't know exactly what happens in her visions.  Eric may not be the father of Tara's baby, it could be Alcide or Sam.  One can hope.  Sam was crazy to leave Tara alone with a man who's a deadringer for her rapist.  I know she told him to leave, but he should have insisted on staying.  Then James starts to beat her up.  Where the hell was Sam and why didn't he hear her?  She was calling for him and is going to think he doesn't love her, even though he knew nothing about what was going on.  He needs to walk away from this organization.  I guess it's good that Eric could sense her or she may have been killed.  Tara didn't even try to use her powers, once again just rolling over.  The old Tara would have tried to fight back.  I love how Eric asked her if she could perform the ceremony after she was healed.  He only cares about her when it comes to getting what he wants.  It's good Tara realizes that Sam wouldn't let anything happen to her and doesn't want Eric to hurt him.  Alcide seems stupid, he actually believes Eric when he says he didn't sleep with Tara?  Eric needs to have Alcide on his side right now, he doesn't need another enemy.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/11 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 1

The plot thickens. So many juicy stuff going on, I couldn't stop reading. It had me at the edge of my seat. Every hot male in Bon Temps is vying for Tara is entertaining. Can't wait to find out who's baby it is.

I have a question: Since Tara can be impregnated by vampires, then, could her baby be Franklyn's? I mean, how long after her last encounter with him has it been? Few months? Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: FatJan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/11 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 10

great update

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/11 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 6

nooooo i wanted sam and tara to work!!!

Reviewer: jan_jan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/11 08:31 am

Title: Chapter 9

Too bad Tara was in such a panic that she wasn't watching where she was going and got hit by a car.  Eric, keep your story straight.  First Tara's your wife, then your fiancee.  I guess when you can glamour people it doesn't matter.  Tara thinks she's Blair Waldorf?  Very funny.  What Sookie said is true, Eric wants to have a baby with Tara, but doesn't know very much about her.  He could take the time to ask her some things about herself, but he won't because he doesn't care.  Wow, Pam likes Gossip Girl too?!  I love the little twist on why Tara knows Swedish.  Wouldn't Tara think that Sookie is Serena?  Sookie's her best friend afterall.  I love that Tara thought that Pam was Dorota.  Hilarious.  Sookie thinks the Blair from the TV show isn't worthy of love and compassion?  Blair's not that bad.  Also, some would say Sookie doesn't deserve all the love that's sent her way considering how selfish and manipulating (especially when it comes to men) she is.  Whatever.  The exchange between Eric and Sam should have tipped Tara off that something wasn't right.  Blair could use a dog?  Really Sam?  He's right though, Eric will be trying to have sex with Tara every chance he gets.  Why would Tara marry Eric in such a run down place if she's supposed to be Blair?  Also, he would need a ring.  I'm happy that even though Lafayette seems to have given up, he still wants to protect Tara.  He's right Eric shouldn' t have sex with Tara when she isn't herself.  Then we find out that Tara was pretending all along.  Fantastic.  I makes sense now, since the whole Blair thing seemed a bit foolish.  It's cool she's discovering new powers.  Tara shouldn't be worried about Alcide, just getting the hell out of there.  She can clearly take care of herself.  Then she lets Eric talk to her?  I don't see why she would look at him while he was talking, that makes no sense.  She went though all that, only to be glamoured.  Eric's disgusting.  This is basically rape.  Tara didn't consent and will have no recollection of what happened.  Russell wanted to join them?  Now he wants to have sex with his stepson.  Eww.  Are we supposed to feel bad for Eric because he liked the dreams and he would like her to remember what just happened?  I don't.  I don't think he can be redeemed at this point.  Tara has been screwing so much lately, she should know she just had sex with Eric.  Alcide even smells Eric on her.  Put two and two together guys.  How can she marry Alcide when she already married Eric?  Maybe vampire and human marriages aren't legal in Louisiana.  Thank goodness Ruby Jean is back.  Just because she had a vision doesn't mean that Tara's having Eric's baby.  She may have seen them having sex.  I do fear the worst though.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/08/11 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 8

All that death and destruction and then Tara goes shopping for a wedding dress.  Unbelievable, I would think she would be running for the hills right about now.  I wish that Tara would get back to her sassy, take no prisoners attitude.  It's like she's given up and decided that she will be a pawn in the supernaturals game.  Sam was crazy to think that Sookie would help him spy on Tara.  Sookie's considered a supernatural and so he was going against her, not to mention the fact that Bill will be able to see her in the day.  I still think that Sam's under the impression that he's the only one that truly cares for Tara and doesn't just want to use her to breed.  I think he right.  The fact that Tara's thinking about Sam while she's getting ready to marry another man, shows that she's not over him.  Yes he lied to her, but he isn't using her body like it's his own personal property.  When he made love to her (and I put it that way because I think he loves her) he wasn't doing it with the intent of impregnating her.  It was about the two of them, not avoiding some apocalypse.  That was a dirty trick that Sam played by spraying Tara and her dress when he turned into a skunk.  Alcide should have just dealt with Sam himself, instead of relying on Eric and Russell for help.  Although, Sam wasn't listening to a word he said.  Ruby Jean warned Alcide and he ran straight to Tara.  Tara's right to be terrified of the idea of Eric wanting her, he's not to be trusted.  Good job Eric, threaten Alcide and Sam's lives and Tara will do whatever you want.  He's outrageous.  Tara needs to stay far away from him.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 07:40 pm

Title: Chapter 8

All that death and destruction and then Tara goes shopping for a wedding dress.  Unbelievable, I would think she would be running for the hills right about now.  I wish that Tara would get back to her sassy, take no prisoners attitude.  It's like she's given up and decided that she will be a pawn in the supernaturals game.  Sam was crazy to think that Sookie would help him spy on Tara.  Sookie's considered a supernatural and so he was going against her, not to mention the fact that Bill will be able to see her in the day.  I still think that Sam's under the impression that he's the only one that truly cares for Tara and doesn't just want to use her to breed.  I think he right.  The fact that Tara's thinking about Sam while she's getting ready to marry another man, shows that she's not over him.  Yes he lied to her, but he isn't using her body like it's his own personal property.  When he made love to her (and I put it that way because I think he loves her) he wasn't doing it with the intent of impregnating her.  It was about the two of them, not avoiding some apocalypse.  That was a dirty trick that Sam played by spraying Tara and her dress when he turned into a skunk.  Alcide should have just dealt with Sam himself, instead of relying on Eric and Russell for help.  Although, Sam wasn't listening to a word he said.  Ruby Jean warned Alcide and he ran straight to Tara.  Tara's right to be terrified of the idea of Eric wanting her, he's not to be trusted.  Good job Eric, threaten Alcide and Sam's lives and Tara will do whatever you want.  He's outrageous.  Tara needs to stay far away from him.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Eric boo-boo you don't know that as of yet.  It could be Alcides or do they have to do it 3 more times if so Eric may be right his swimmers did make it to the golden egg.

Thank you for the update can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 8

Poor Tara. Wonder who she'll end up with??

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/11 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 8

Well lookie lookie here.

Tara was truly not focusing or thinking.  She could have invited Eric in then resended her invitation making it where Eric had no choice but to leave. Then while he was being resended she could have focused like she did to become invisible and put some puppies in a very uncomfortable state but then how would she have helped Sam though I am rooting for Alcide and Tara to be together I don't think I want a misguided Sam to die either.

Sam is special ed that is if he thinks that the gov't or the humans just want to control the supernatural without doing them harm they are basically doing what human nature has always done try to destroy and enslave someone or thing that they don't understand or fear.

I was wondering also with Tara's dreams of Eric with her or him knowing that she is having dreams of him and all that sexing they have been doing couldn't she get pregnant via those dreams just a hmmmmm question.

Thank you for the great update.,...more please

Happy writing?

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/11 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 8

My word...this is good stuff. Keep it coming!!

Reviewer: FatJan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/11 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 6

What? This story has too many storylines in such a short amount of time. And Tara, who I loved for her stubborness and hard manner, is becoming another version of Sookie. How did she give into Alcide so easily, who is she to blame Sam when she slept with Alcide and then slept with Sam within the same day? I just don't know about this anymore. The powers were cool though.

Reviewer: kendrat199 Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 09:39 am

Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Wow, Eric is too sneaky.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 7

Tara needs to curb the anger.  So, Sam's bad because he has been working for the Feds.  Okay, but don't your feelings for him matter?  What about how he feels for her?  She's normally a hot head, but not stupid.  So far, it appears that Alcide, Eric and company want to use her to breed.  Shouldn't they be the enemy?  At least with Sam, she loves him.  Lafayette's out of control.  I'm surprised he was willing to kill Jesus just to get information out of him.  Torture is one thing, killing is another.  This is all new to Lafayette and Tara, so I would think killing would be difficult.  On the other hand, Lafayette may be desensitized since he's been training by hurting vampires.  Tara should realize that Sam wasn't going to kill her.  He was trying to work a new deal, that Jesus probably didn't know about.  Sam said he wants to marry Tara and protect her from all this mess.  Is Jesus a witch as well in this?  How would he know that Tara can create life from the dead?  Which obviously means that Tara and Eric can conceive a child.  Eric thinks he's now entitled to breeding rights.  What the hell is wrong with these supernaturals.  Slavery days are over.  Why should any of them be able to breed with her and expect her to comply.  They act like they have a right to her body and that she should willingly bear their offspring.  We all knew Mason and Jules weren't going to last and I'm not sorry to see them go.  Tara did go to Alcide like her Aunt requested, but she didn't want to listen at first.  I don't think Alcide is the answer either.  I never heard anything about having sex in front of two werewolves if you cannot consummate in water.  It was water, metal and wood, right?  Debbie and Coot watching is more than a little creepy.  Stop being lazy and find a body of water or just use the damn tub.  Why is Tara allowing herself to be treated like a piece of property?  It's like her legs fall open whenever a guy looks at her.  I guess it will be that way when it's Eric's turn.  Then there will be three men who could have fathered her child, should she find herself pregnant.  It's like Eric is projecting dreams to Tara or it may be a side affect of his blood in her system.  I'm curious to see what's going to happen next.  You wrote Lost a Bamon story and planned to write a sequel.  Are you still thinking of writing Lost the Other Side Of The Island?  I hope so, the first story was awesome. 

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 6

Sam, the betrayer!!! What's a girl to do?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/07/11 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 6

Has Tara lost her mind, wanting to actually make a baby with Alcide to save him from ridicule?  This is outrageous.  Jules and Mason are fools.  Going to the mainstream media about what Alcide is up to is stupid.  It will make the human even more convinced that they need to get rid of supernaturals, including them.  Idiots.  I knew Eric was up to something by giving Tara his blood.  I knew she would have sexual dreams about him, but I didn't know that he would see her dreams as well.  What's his deal, is he trying to get into her panties too?  I imagine he wants her to be at his beck and call.  The first step would be to seduce her and then make sure she is properly trained.  Tara just came out and told Sam she spent the night with Alcide like it was nothing.  What's wrong with her.  For Sam's part, he didn't act surprised at all.  Sam's right, Tara should have just asked him if he was a shifter, not try to trick him.  So Tara said she'd love Sam if he was a turtle.  You need to start acting like it.  Wow, Tara's using her powers and doesn't even know it.  Sam told her the truth about working for the Feds, so I guess that's something.  Something tells me, Eric doesn't mind spending more time with Tara at all.  How does he know she doesn't hate him?  That sex dream was the result of her ingesting his blood.  How dare Eric ask Sam if he ever really loved Tara.  Sam loves and wants to be with Tara or else he wouldn't have made a deal to marry her to save her from the mess the other supernaturals will befall.  Also, he isn't interested in using her gifts.  Eric's a user and will try to benefit from Tara's hurt over Sam's deception.  She just needs to remember she knows nothing about Eric and Alcide.  She wouldn't be so hurt if she didn't love Sam.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/11 06:11 pm

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