Really good story. I hope you return to update this soon, would like to see how this all plays out.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/14 02:47 am
please continue this story, it is really goood..I Vincent should tell eden a portion of the truth, not just leave
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[Report This]Date: 01/04/13 08:18 am
love it...I love that you brought the background into play
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/13 08:11 am
wow
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/13 07:50 am
good update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/13 07:40 am
love it
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/13 07:38 am
OMG I can't believe you left your story on a cliff hanger?! Ughhhhh he's breaking her heart cuz of a family thing:(
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/12 08:13 am
I really miss this tale...I really hope Vinny and Eden make it. Looks like they're going down the same route as David and Kersia.
Author's Response:
i miss them, too, to be honest. they popped back up not too long ago and ideas are solidifying so hopefully i'll be able to update soon.
Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/08/12 01:20 am
Update please!
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 08:12 am
Hmmmmm....okay Missy need update, ha, got to, need to, have one. Love this story, keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 10:50 am
I have fallen in love with this series. It's excellent and feels real and not some fantasy story. I hope you finish this soon!
Reviewer: bcsaturdai Signed [Report This]Date: 14/08/11 09:31 pm
you besta finish this greatness and all the other stories i misss from tst! oh and please i need sexy ass david to have his own story
Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/11 11:28 pm
I was confused about a couple things but now I am straight :D I just had to keep reading. LOL! Sometimes that impatient side comes out and I have to beat it down with a stick.
Anywhoo! Great update hope you get to update again soon. Loving it!
Thank you!
Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/11 01:50 pm
So the head of the family know there is something big going on and have sly informed the others. I wonder has David be advised as of yet so that he can tell Kersia or was this shooting range visit apart of tell her cause we all know that he is not about to back off of Kersia again.
Damn! Eden already has issues now Vinny has to back up off her so what are they going to do about the class project and having to meet in regards to that outside of class plus she is suppose 2 be in his production...Damn! Complicated. Then to top it off the nightmare that Vinny had regarding Eden with a gunshot in her belly and a child that looks like him....hmmmm I wonder if he was suppose to represent Eden and Vinny's child. Interesting very interesting.
Thank you!
Happy Writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 01:33 pm
So is Niki related to the Battaglia family? Sal apparently is a double agent so to speak. How can anyone respect and give him the props he thinks he deserve when his ass is lame, digusting and trifling. Apparently knowing that he is a frank-up the boss is watchin Sal watch Vinny and Eden. I hope this threat blows up in Sal and the boss' face whoever he may be.
Is Raphael David's father? Are Teo, Leo, and Raph brothers? So Raph wanted to get rid of Kersia permenantly, huh? Well durn so much for being a good girl.
I wonder if Vinny still feels someone watching them and if his Uncle Teo is watching them doesn't he see Sal cause ole boy aint that easy to miss according to the description of him.
Thank you,
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 12:40 pm
Ahhhh! She apologized and now they are starting over slowly. I wonder if either of them are going to be able to handle that. LOL!
I wonder if that girl that Jarrod was with had the baby and if they are still together. I want to kick his ass.
Thank you.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/11 01:16 pm
That was hott hott hott. I love this couple too. They kind of mirror Eden and Vinny. They have admitted that they love each other so what hurdles do they still have to bare?
Thank you!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/11 10:34 am
DAMN!!! VINNT AINT NO JOKE! Woo he put sista girl to sleep! So does this make it official? :D Eden hooked and so is Vinny but they were already that before this occured.
My mom always said don't let them tast the juice unless you aint trying to get rid of them. Vinny was already possessive that's that Battaglia trait I do beleive.
Anywoo great update as always this one was surely hott to death or sleep which ever comes first. LOL.
Thank you!
Happy Writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 08:55 pm
So it was Kersia that walked away from him and now is in another relationship that she doesn't really want b/c her heart is still with David. Why? She obviously still wants and loves David what caused her to walk away? Now I know you will answer all these question and more as you write I just like to ask out loud so to speak to help with my power of dedcution :D.
I love that couple too and like Mama Sue said I've have seen punks so bad in my life. They need to talk I mean really talk and get it ALL out in the open.
Loving this story.
Thank you.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 10:47 am
Ahhh that was so cute! LOL! They are adorable for sho'.
Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 09:39 am
loving this story but is there anyway you could possibly add a family tree pretty pretty please it would be highly appreciated =)
Author's Response:
i'll see what i can. not too hot in the graphics department. LoL
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 09:05 pm
David and Kersia seem as though they are deeply in love with each other they are just having some issues at this time.
I hope they are able to resolve them and move on with their lives together. I still don't fully understand what has happened between the two but I am sure IT you will fill me in.
Thank you
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 10:49 am
Ahhh! Eden's passion is dance but she has to do as her parents want and study in something that is stable for her future.
I so am loving this story.
Vinny is trying to track down his boo.
Thank you.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 02:16 pm
Ahhhhh! Bravo! Love the start.
Hmmmm!?! I wonder if he sexed that skank Amber.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 11:37 am