What happens next. I really need to now. Please update.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: 01/03/12 08:48 pm
great update! very enlightening seeing brey and kali with their parents. their mom breaks my heart. brey shouldnt be so petulant. her father seemed weary-worn and its probably mostly due to having to look after their mother. trent and brey together is love. im continuing to warm towards those two. he read her book and couldnt guess it was about them? such a guy. lol. i've a feeling things will begin to click as the story progresses. help, trent's in town because?.... i cant remember. suppose i'll have to go back and read again. *wink* enjoyed! cant wait for more!
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/11 01:01 am
Trent is such numb nuts!! There is not way that they can truly be friends again, after she is still in love with him. This is going to turn out bad, I just get the feeling. I want a happily ever after please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 08:09 pm
She needs to tell him about his daughter whether Natalie is found or not. Why did Natalie run away?? Sounds like their mom was suffering from depression.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 05:05 am
Interesting story so far.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 04:40 am
That was a sweet chapter. I wish she would get up the nerve to tell him. Maybe soon.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/11 08:32 pm
sweet! but i feel this "getting to know you (again)" wont last long as there is the secret she's keeping from him. curious about natalie. i feel like she's going to crash trent/brey's reunion. at any rate cant wait to see how all unfolds. great description restaurant/alleyway. i like them together. nice touch with his boxers showing---all i can think about: his drawers lol thanks!!!
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 11:14 pm
That was good, so now he realizes just how much he loved Aubrey, so why did he really choose Natalie?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 10:43 pm
This is good can't wait for an update
Author's Response:
Thanks Love!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/11 01:43 am
okay. loved the past two updates. gorgeous flow in both. the scene with the mother and the daughters broke my heart. interested in the re-kindling (or not) of aubrey/trent. this forthcoming conversation is long overdue as is the truth to trent about his child. cant wait for natalie to resurface as well. good stuff. thnx!
Author's Response:
Thanks for loving the drama as much as i do! LOL
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 09:04 pm
Thanks for the update.. and it seems we are just starting to get to the real issues between Aubery and Trent, and why he married Natalie instead of Bree who he was really in love with... Oh and Trent is going to find out that Amarie is his daughter.
And I wonder if Natalie suffers from the same form of depression that her mother does.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much honey!
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 01:01 am
So Trent has feelings for Aubrey? Trent, Trent , Trent, you are such an ass!! You broke two womens heart because you couldn't admit how you felt. Natalie has to know that how you felt about Aubrey and how Aubrey felt about him. So I don't feel to bad for her especially since she abandoned her child. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes trent needs a good finger wagging!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 02:51 am
VERY, VERY GOOD!!!
Reviewer: SANDRA Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/08/11 03:40 am
nice development, but be sure to demonstrate your possessives (i.e. Tye's mother, Amarie's birthday). it can distracting, especially since your grammar is pretty spot on through and through.
either way, good job and i'm excited for more.
i don't envy Aubrey's position at all. that's a difficult choice to make, especially when her sister has backed her into such a shitty corner. it can be easy for most to say that without a doubt, Trent should know, but what if there's a much bigger reason (other than default parental-rights) for him not knowing. we don't know the nuances of that relationship, though it's pretty apparent that Natalie's immature. either way, i commend Aubrey for stepping up in that little life.
if only everything was so simple. LoL well done. excellent tension and personification of genuine conflict, not roused up, pretend drama.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 11:57 pm
What a mess. It's always worse when a baby is involved. The truth needs to come out. The longer they don't say anything the worse it is going to blow up. Really interested in what happens next!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 09:19 pm
absoutley love this story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 07:02 pm
I'm really getting into this story .Good start .
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 05:28 pm
I'm intrigued can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you SOOO much hun!
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 10:17 am
well...I like theat there is some implications thatb aren't explained leaving the reader to form their own opinion. I think this might become a favorite. Keep writing!
Author's Response:
They will be explained soon promise! thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 06:06 am
keep it coming !
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 05:42 am
great update! thom doesnt know about his child and nat has no prob leaving the baby with her sis. thanks for the insight. cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Some more secrets will be reveled and explained
Reviewer: madame z Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 05:12 am
I like this story so far, I like the characters, and I can't wait to see how it develops.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you fall in love with them!
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 03:31 am
Wow loving your story ! It flows so smoothly , i thought it would be confusing from your introduction about layers, but not so . I can't wait for the next chapter , I'm a sucker for the angst of thier situation ! DRAMA ! I love it !
Author's Response:
Oh Drama owns me girl! LOL Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 03:25 am
this. is. awesome.
very well-written, well-rounded out characters already within the frist two chapters. i'm tracking this suckah!
good writing, woman. excited for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It is so much appreciated!
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 03:21 am
Is Aubrey Amarie's mother? Why did Thomas kiss Aubrey if he was marry her sister Natalie? It seems as Aubrey has loved Thomas for a long time. IS Aubrey's feelings for Thomas the reason that it didn't work with Tay? Great story!!! Please continue this story.
Author's Response:
The next two chapters should answer your question I promise!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 03:10 am