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Title: Chapter 41 Disaster

Omg I hope she lives and doesn't died. this man don't get it he tells his daughter that she only got a man because she pays him then still trying to stop the wedding and now val cousin almost died yeah gramps have to pay. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Wow well wonder what George going to say to Emilo and hope they hit off. Mat grandfather need to let it go and let his grand son have some peace. thank for the update.

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Date: 16/08/11 09:35 pm

Title: Chapter 39 Suspicion and Revelation

Wow well I like how she handle Hannah family and standing her ground with them and that her emilio will work out. It so sad that mat grandfather will go so far to break up his grandson with val. thank for the update.

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Date: 16/08/11 09:26 pm

Title: Chapter 38 Coverup and Conflict

omg he wrong for doing that too her lol but something tells me Hannah going to turn him out big time lol. I hope mat find out that his grandfather is doing all this and kick his ass for it. thank for the update.

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Date: 16/08/11 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 37 Education and Compensation

OO Hannah you better get your man and rock his world girl show him a thing or two. glad she went for the guy and now has a boyfriend. I hope mat kick dude butt big time. thank for the update.

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Date: 16/08/11 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 36 Wisdom and Regret

Well glad that they made up and he listen to his father and working things out with val. Now her cousin so shady why in the world would you team up with Mat grandfather? It sad she got raped it realy is but she just dug a huge hole. thank for the update.

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Date: 16/08/11 08:46 pm

Title: Chapter 42 The Eye of the Beholder

That was amazing, that old hiefer Ethel is insane in the membrane!!!!    Now Val can tell Tameka who her people were, and maybe find Tina.  Ethel is pure evil!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 08:22 pm

Title: Chapter 42 The Eye of the Beholder

Ahhhh! That Ethel is one sad, sick, trifling itch and that's saying itnlightly I don'teven want to insult the itches to what Ethel is.

I hope Meka fights and gets better and her and Val get the closeness that they lost back. Ethel is going to grow old and alone.

Thank you.

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 08:12 pm

Title: Chapter 42 The Eye of the Beholder

i was brought to tears by tameka's plight and ethel's confession and the cousins' reuniting.  It was all quite explosive. Thanks!

Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 41 Disaster

Oh, heavens! Can Gramps just keel over wth a massive coronary and go straight to hell??!!

His wie is ill. He should be happy to be alive. Instead he's running around trying to run and/or ruin grown folks' lives.

Tameka had a lot of sass and attitude. How dare she try to take her own life as a way out of this. Plus, her suicide letter does not specifically name William Hendricks. She needs to be saved.

Also, despite all the efforts so far, this wedding will not be ruined! lol

Great story! Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Gramps isn't going to get off that easy by dying with a heart attack.  LOL.  The wrath of Emily is on its way.  More coming real soon.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 41 Disaster

Loved the update eventhough its sort of sad. It was disappointing that Meka decided to try to kill herself instead of fighting back. She always gave the impression of being a tough cookie but she's more fragile than Val. Their grandmom is so hateful, she has alot to answer for, making those girls miserable.

Glad she gave Matheson the letter. His grandfather is a trip!! He's bad news all around. Instead of trying to control everyone, he needs to be happy for them and stop interfering in their lives. He's so wrong on so many levels. He needs a reality check.Can't wait to see the showdown!! Cause I know its coming.

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Baby!  It's coming!  Showdown will be at the dinner and I'm going to take things to a whole nother level.  Emily will not be challenged!!!  Watch out Gramps!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/08/11 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 41 Disaster

did you update a new chapter?? Where is it?

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Date: 16/08/11 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 35 Nightmares and Revelations

That crazy that her cousin got raped no woman should go thu that but I hope they find the guy who did that to her. I hope that Val and Mat can  workout their problems and move foward in their lives. thank for the update.

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Date: 15/08/11 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Matchmaker Matheson

Well I don't think she was going to sleep with that guy but know that she a woman that she getting little scared before her wedding and got to caught up with that guy. Her cousin was wrong for what she did thank for the update.

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Date: 15/08/11 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Hidden Agenda

I love how he handle his grandfather and let him know either you accpect or hit bricks lol. thank for the update.

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Date: 15/08/11 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Piecing Things Together

Well I hope they get the answer they need to finaly put the past behind them and move foward. In there lives and be happy. Now Val other grandmother is crazy hatefull woman and she need to stop acting so cruel to her granddaughter. thank for the update.

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Date: 15/08/11 09:37 pm

Title: Chapter 31 Forbidden Love

Wow I feel for val grandmother all those years she thought this man rape her mother and yes she was young and it wasn't right but it also you can tell they loved each other too. thank for the update.

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Date: 15/08/11 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 30 Confronting the Past

Omg talked about suprise. Emily mother and father was cousins and Val grandma mother wasn't rape wow  talked about crazy. I hope they don't tell Emily about her mother and father. thank for the update.

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Date: 14/08/11 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Update please!!!!!!!!

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Date: 13/08/11 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 29 The Ugly Truth

Well now he knows the truth I wonder what he will say to mavis or is he going to stay quiet about it? Mat and val aree so cute together thank for the update.

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Date: 13/08/11 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

Omg that grandfather is cruel man I bet he had something to do that man coming seeing Mavis and all. thank for the update.

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Date: 13/08/11 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 27 The Best Laid Plans

Well good grandma it cool of her grandson choice and is happy for him. that grandfather need to give it up. OO it seems that miss hannah found her a man oooo. thank for the update.

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Date: 13/08/11 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 26 The Proposition

what happen with your son and your sister in law that they finaly bond together and they are close witch is a very good thing. I like that val grandmother stood up too mat grandfather. Those two love each other and family should be happy. thank for the update.

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Date: 13/08/11 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Wow, Brenda, you've spun quite an intricate tale of the joining together of many families...I love how you've told such a story of how we are sum total of our experiences...I love that you're not introducing characters for drama's sake...but each of the characters have personalities and take this story in so many interesting directions...I feel so spoiled...now it's going to be a killer trying to wait each week for a new update when I was so used to getting them on the regular...but I know life beckons...but I really like to thank you for bringing your story here to The Chamber and I got the pleasure of reading it thusfar...

When I first started reading this I'd thought I'd feel uncomfortable reading the various stereotypes and biases we all possess but you know what...that's what makes this story so realistic...they are coming from an honest place inside of us all...I feel the characters' pains and preconceived notions of all of our differences and I love that you're giving them a chance to work through those issues in a realistic yet entertaining pace...I could go on at great length about each of the characters but I wanted to take this opportunity to tell you how very grateful and inspired I am at this wonderful work of art...thanks again...look forward to future updates...



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Your review means a lot to me.  I don't know why my mind goes in so many directions (Like a soap opera) but it does.  I've had some readers criticize me for that, but I can't help it.  LOL.  I write mainly for stress relief and I was shocked at the response I got here on the Chamber.  I am glad that people like my work and I welcome all reviews good and bad because they help me to grow.  We all have to work through our prejudices and the first step is admitting that we have them, then we can move forward.  Writing interracial stories brings it all to the forefront and we can recognize and laugh at ourselves and grow if we allow ourselves to grow that is.  Thanks again.  I've written chapter 41, but today is my beta's birthday so I don't want to rush her.  Hopefully I will have it out by this weekend!

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Date: 12/08/11 07:10 am

Title: Chapter 25 Back To Reality

Wow billy should had not told his brother and wife about his son setting a date for the wedding that wrong for what he did. Graps need to get over it and face the facts Mat loves Val and they are going to get married. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/11 11:18 pm

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