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Title: Libertad

Please continue this story, this was too good!! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the love! the continuation of this story is here: http://valentchamber.com/viewstory.php?sid=1791&chapter=1. i haven't updated in some time, but plan to go back to it soon. thanks again!

Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/01/14 04:20 am

Title: Libertad

Yes Yes Yes! I definitely want to read the continuation of this fic.  I am loving James and Cipri.  Marta is the bomb to.  Did we ever meet Jaiver father cause his peeps are the bomb diggity

I wish James could have found out what Jaiver really thought of her and why he wanted to marry her,

Thank you more please.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 04:28 am

Title: Day 4: The Wedding

Bravo! Bravo! LOL! She left his cheating conniving mama's boy ass at the alter.  I hope he and that puta Pilar is embarrassed like no one's business

Thank you!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 04:22 am

Title: Night 3: Happy Valentine's Day

Well hot damn Cipri and James did the do and no protection in site. Hmmmm. It was hot hot hot and no holds bar either on both sides.

Thank you!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 04:12 am

Title: Night 2: Despedida

Loving it! Javier needs and ass whipping he so far up his momma ass he can't breath nor think right. No James you don't need to marry his ass.

The stranger in the resturant I wasn't clear on what he looks like so will have to go back and re-read his discription.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 02:35 am

Title: Libertad

loved it as always ...on to the nex one now ...

Reviewer: cynn333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 02:17 am

Title: Libertad

Loved the story. Javier and his parents are a mess.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/09/11 01:24 am

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

I like the start of this story off to complete my reading.

Thank you for sharing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31/08/11 11:36 pm

Title: Libertad

loved it!

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/11 07:35 am

Title: Libertad

More Please!!!!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/11 03:54 am

Title: Day 4: The Wedding

Really enjoyed

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/11 08:50 am

Title: Night 3: Happy Valentine's Day

very good

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/08/11 08:49 am

Title: Libertad

continue continue!!!!!!

Reviewer: BritneyKai Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 11:14 pm

Title: Day 4: The Wedding

This is a truly great strory. I have  to say that I understand why James did whaht she did, and if it where me in the same situation I would probably do the same thing. I would also  love to read a continuation on this story as well if you are planning to write one.

Reviewer: onyxfaerie57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 10:36 pm

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

Girl this story is great would B a shame & crime 2 not continue so we can C how not smart J is & the continuation of C &J + her friends Sophie/Maxine.

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 07:42 pm

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

You know good and well we want to read the rest of this story.. We need to fluff that is James and cipranio.  I love know to know how Javier and his mother took Javier being jilted at the alter.

Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 06:17 pm

Title: Libertad

I would love to read more about James and Cipriano.  Although I wish that James had told Javier to his face that the wedding was off and the reason why.  Great story, so sequel please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 04:15 pm

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

Javier got what he deserved. I like,more please 

Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:53 pm

Title: Libertad

I literally laughed out loud when I read about Herman muching on some fruit and as relaxed as can be while Javier's world was falling apart!

Cipriano and James, definitely would love to read more about them, both as individuals and as a couple.

Really enjoyed it I.T. cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:39 pm

Title: Libertad

What kind of b.s. Chapter End Notes was that?! You damn well know we want the rest of this story! Don't even front!

I swear, you will catch hell if there isn't a new installation soon!

Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:30 pm

Title: Libertad

oooh yeah.. please continue... what a shit that Javier & his mother are... go Cipri & James... and with great friends and his family too lol

Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 03:10 pm

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

more please - I like!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 02:24 pm

Title: Day 1: The Arrival

please continue with this story your storys are so well thought out i am loving anthing that you are writing that you have writen please keep on going you are well worth the wait as all ways thank you for sharing

sinerly yours leahcar.

Reviewer: always a pleasure Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/08/11 10:22 am

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