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Reviewer: faye Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/04/13 03:55 am
That story was just beautiful! Sad, but beautiful just the same! I am glad he made up his mind to stop being a schmuck to his family!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/11/12 08:13 am
David is a REAL FATHER! Thanks for speaking up and telling Scott the truth!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/11/12 07:58 am
That is so sad! I hate when something like that happens.....because it kills the love!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/11/12 05:00 am
I really enjoyed reading this. It's so sad that he had to lose his memory. But, I'm glad I had a chance to read about their love story. Really well-written.
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: 06/04/12 09:37 pm
Is this really an original fiction if it's just a Grey's Anatomy fiction turned into a IR fiction?
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: 29/03/12 03:48 pm
I loved this story! Give an epilogue! Or something I don't want it to end!
Reviewer: npatrick Signed [Report This]Date: 13/01/12 02:02 pm
I love that you mentioned Raleigh and Wakefield . I live near Raleigh and my best friend lives in Wakefield. Neat-o.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/01/12 06:14 pm
Please do not tell me this is the end?
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 31/12/11 07:05 am
David is a very wise man, and Scott would do well listening to him right about now. He needs to stop pushing Diedre away and start again by being friends with her.....use this time to get to know her again....ask her out on a date, get to know her and the children, just like any man would do when dating a woman with children. In time he will start to remember what he loved about her in the first place and his memory will return. And if it doesn't they will make new and better memories!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 24/12/11 02:46 pm
fantabulous! although i admit i wanted him to remember everything and for there to be the happily ever after, but this is situation is as ideal as it could get in a realistic situaiton. kudos!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 02:33 pm
I am glad that he man up and went home to TRY.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 01:42 pm
I'm just catching up with this story. This chapter was so sad...as soon as I read that they'd adopted Rachel I dreaded reading what came next. At first I was thinking she met up with a psycho killer on the internet.
It's great that Deidre and Scott are able to give Rachel a good home. Though I wonder why Rachel's father isn't in her life. There was no mention of him and Jessica's relationship at all.
[Report This]Date: 23/12/11 10:54 am
This was a great story!!!
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 09:09 am
I am so glad that Scott is now going to try!!! Thank you for the update and have a Merry CHristmas!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 07:36 am
How did I miss this chapter sns it was so good! I am so glad that the babues were okay. I see the Deidre is still hard headed! I love how calm Scott was throightout her pregnancy. Scott, really Harley and Marley? I am really glad that Deidre didn't allow that! Fabulois!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 03:57 pm
Scott, is going through alot, but why are pushing away your family. Those babies don't deserve that and neither does Deidre. Pick up you lips Scott and man up!!! Children are easy to love!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 06:23 am
No, Please atleast give us devoted and loyal reader/fans 5 more chapters.....PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! I promise if you give us 5 more chapters I will not cry when you end the story! Ppppppppllllllleeeeaaaasssseeeee!!!! You picked some beautiful children or are they really your children? I will give you a 10 just for that reason alone!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 06:22 am
Oh that is soooo sweet Gabrielle Joi and Tessa Grace..Beautiful names. I am not happy about this story getting close to the end but I guess I will have to be happy that you have written such a wonderful story. Thank You for giving it your best!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 06:00 am
Vey cute girls. That was very emotional chapter but he will come around.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 03:29 am
Great update these two are great together.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 14/12/11 03:19 am
Aww, twins how exciting. I'm very happy for those two. However life often throws us surprises and you just have to go with it. Great chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/12/11 04:56 pm
I enjoy reading about Deidre and Scott's family and how little Rachel is adjusting.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/11 04:41 pm
I felt dread when I read that Scott and Deidre adopted Rachel. I was sorry to read about Jessica dying. I'm glad Scott and Deidre did the right thing.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/12/11 04:08 pm