“I’m just saying, you know when celeb wear jewelries, they hire bodyguards to protect them, same goes for women. Women are like diamonds, whoever is willing to pay the price gets to wear them. Actually, women are like cars too, the day you stop oiling them is the day they stop working for you.”
I laughed at this Todd comment...this is so him!
baaaaaaa....sniff...sniff...I think C...wanted our Toddikins to get shot in this one but koodos to you Dye for bringing it all out and letting grandpa Todd reunite with his son and grandchildren.
Of course Evangeline would always be in love with our Toddikins....A love that lives on even after death...sigh...
Thank you for this unbelievable story Dye!
Author's Response: Hey choc, thanks for your review, you have been an amazing inspiration to me. Cant wait to read more of your stories too. Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/12/08 03:25 pm
OMG.... I can't believe that it ended that way. What a way to go out. I really hope that John got what was coming to him. I hate that it took 30 years but I am glad that Prize came around. I just hope that Todd has whatever time left with his family. This was just an awesome story.
Author's Response: Hello letitia, At first, I wanted to give them a happy ending but I just felt like there should be consequences this time, it's just sad that someone had to die. Thanks for all your beautiful reviews, well appreciated.
Date: 01/12/08 05:11 am
THAT WAS SAD AND NOT WHAT I EXPECTED.. WOW I AM JUST SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Okay hershey when you say " SPEECHLESS" I'm guessing it's a good one. lol
I just thought a different twist of fortune would be nice to add to this story, thanks for reading, your reviews are always fantastic.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 30/11/08 01:35 pm
OMg I so didnt see that coming linn/eva dies but it was a good twist to this story. I love every word of this story and glad john going to get to know his son. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Hi wwefanforlife, congrats on winning the reader of the month and thaks a mil for reading my story, I'm so glad you loved it. Hopefully there'll be more to come in the furture.
[Report This]Date: 30/11/08 05:23 am
what a way to leave a sister hanging, but yeah our guy won,.......yipee ki yay
Author's Response: Hi Chocolate pink, I just had to do it, couldn't help myself. Thanks for leaving a review.
Date: 05/11/08 09:29 pm
WTH!! One more chapter...say it aint so Dye!!!
You had me going through all these emotional changes...sniff. I really loved the the exchange between Todd and Evangeline...couldn't have written it better myself! (Boy and "Nobody" by Keith Sweat is playing) made me feel it even more. It is possible to love two men...down here its one for the sex and one for the money...LOL!!!
You had my heart in confused anxiety when Todd sent that message and John saw it and then John grabbing a gun...classic...
Then you had to go talking about one more update...bommer!!!
It was still a great read!
Author's Response:
Hey Choc, well what are fanfic sisters for if not to punish each other with their crazy stories?
How much do you like my payback now? lol
Hopefully there will be more fanfic anxieties to come, just remember to breathe, thanks for coming thus far with me, your reviews are always amazing.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 05:19 pm
Great update dyhanna. Lot's of drama in this one. Looking forward to the conclusion.
Author's Response:
Oh stop it Mamba, you are the mother of all dramas, but I'll take it all the same.
Thanks for reading and for the reviews.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 07:54 am
WELL YOU DONT HAVE TO WORRY BECAUSE AMERICA CHOSE HOPE OVER FEAR AND I AM SO PROUD TO BE AN AMERICAN..BARACK OBAMA 08
Author's Response: Yes hershey, they sure did.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/08 07:38 am
So much to happen in one chapter. I just loved the first meeting of TJ and Todd. I really do hope that at some point TJ will find out what really happened. Blair has gotten what she wanted. She wanted them separated but I don't think she wanted it in this fashion. I really do hope that Vange can get to them before John does something stupid. Awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi letitia, glad to have you back.
Just wait and see, you are about to be surprised. Thanks alot for reading, well appreciated.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 05:41 am
I hope van stop john before he kills todd and lose his job and everything else thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hello wwefanforlife, what would life be like if people dont act a fool in fanfics? You have been an amazing reader throughout, thanks for your wonderful reviews.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/08 02:58 am
Let me try this again...
Dye those sage advice at the end of each chapter...LMAO!
I love this line:The tips of his fingers glided up and down the back of her thighs like Arabian silk...I think I love the Arabian silk part...
Blair coming home just in time to greet Evangeline and smelling her huzzie all over her was a real hoot. So I think you'll have her running over to John for a confession sit down and you know what. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
What's up chocolate470, I laugh at myself with those advice too. I love your reviews, so much fun to read, I just enjoy how you try to call me out on my game lol. you think you know what will happen next??? Think again baby.
Thanks for the review you made me smile through the headahce of a day I was having.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/10/08 08:35 pm
it is so going to come out in the worse way. I am surprised that Todd took the news about TJ as well as he did. And he is being mature in how he just wants to meet him. I hope that Vange can see through Blair and her tactics. Just love the chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi letitia, for a father who has been mia for years, he can't just waltz in and make demands, he knows better. As for vange and Blair, she knows that he who plays with fire is bound to get burnt, I wont blame Blair if she goes nuts on Eva because firends are not suppose to sleep with each others husbands.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]Date: 08/10/08 12:47 pm
Wow it great they love each other but she has to tell john the truth so she able to live her life and not be one woman when she with john and be herself when she with todd. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
hi wwefanforlife, you have a point, she becomes a different woman when she's with each of them. There's no fun in making her confess right now because forbidden friuts are the sweetest when eaten in secret. sorry it took a while to get to back to you, I have been under the weather and that makes me kinda grumpy.
Thanks for all the support and the review, it's well appreciated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 08/10/08 06:05 am
Hey dye, this just got a whole lot better, it was a great read, update soon.
And what's with Blair and their little talk? looks like she bought herslf a brain. Cant wait for lil Todd to come back to town, it's going to be so much fun.
as for john, how blind can he be to the obvious?
Author's Response:
Hi sugar, thanks a mil. I think sometimes when you are with someone, you chose not to see their wrong doing because we want to believe in their right sense of judgement.
I think John knows that their relationship is no longer the way it use to be, he just hasnt called her out on it. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/10/08 02:30 pm
Great update. Very hot love scene with Todd and Van. Loving this version of the couple. Great job as always dy.
Author's Response: Yay to BlackMamba for calling my couple hot. thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 07/10/08 05:30 am
Todd is just too much, pulling that stunt at the dinner table. I can just see vange digging a deeper hole for herself with these men.
Loved it, update soon.
Author's Response: hi kayla 22, they are just as bad as each other, the dinner table scene was fun though, Todd was trying to call her out . Obviously, Vange is having too much fun with these men. Thanks for the review babe. Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/09/08 08:23 pm
Dye you are no good...LOL!!!
What I liked most about this chapter...you had me wondering what the hell went on with Evangeline and Todd (if anything went down)...her reaction was classic...it was like huh? and then all was revealed. That was great! Really loved the update...looking forward to more...
Author's Response:
Hey chocolate470,
Dont you just love the way vange pretends as if nothing is going on? I just had to do it, you've been torturing me and holding out on me with "Oh Baby." so I thought it would be fun to pay you back.
Thanks for reading, appreciate the review.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/08 07:51 pm
Finally caught up with this one Dye an you're doing an awesome job. I always love a not squeaky clean Evangeline. Great job.
Author's Response: Hi BlackMamba, life will be sour with an all good n clean Evangeline, thanks for reading, well appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 28/09/08 06:57 pm
Wow my poor john doesn' t know his wife he getting it on with todd. It a hard choice btween todd and john but if she cares she needs to tell him before it get worst. Loving this story girl thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
hello wwefanforlife, it will be too easy if she just wakes up and say " oh baby, guess what? I am screwing Todd."
I"m sure you know how hard it is for a girl to choose between mr sexy and mr mc, glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 28/09/08 06:38 pm
loved it eep it coming please!!!!
Author's Response: Hi hershey_kisses, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 28/09/08 04:29 pm
At first I wanted to say that I can't believe Todd's reaction but frankly I knew this was going to be Todd's reaction...when he wants something he usually goes after it. Anticipating your next update...great Dye!
Author's Response: Hi chocolate470, we all love that about Todd, he goes after what he wants, I'm hoping it doesn't become his downfall because sometimes, he doesn't know how to back up. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 23/09/08 09:34 pm
Todd is always Todd!
Evangeline is a disappoint and John is still the same ass!
Blair is still a whore!
All the elements of a good story in the making! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Hi Hopieland, you re right on the money about all these characters, you know them too well. Thanks for reading, the review is well apreciated. Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/09/08 06:56 pm
Great update
Author's Response: Thanks Ashauna77, glad you liked it.
Date: 22/09/08 03:50 pm
Todd had the audacity to tell John he did not bring her home because she was stressed out. Damn!! The ground is not dry yet and they are already rolling in the mud.
you had me screaming with the last scence where he took her home to John. I wonder how long she can be a good liar for.
Author's Response: Hey sugar n spice, it certainly looks like all her self respect flew out of the window the minute she saw him. As for Todd, it didnt expect any self control from his side. He saw what he wanted and he took it. thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Reviewer: sugar n spice Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/09/08 08:02 am
What the hell going on with van LOl. So she in love with todd but he hurt her so bad that she marry john. I'm loving this story and I hope you coutine with it. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response:
Hello wwefanforlife, so to speak, she was in love with Todd but since he disappeared for years, she had to move on with her life. God knows I dont like being kept waiting either.
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 22/09/08 06:02 am