Kevin you and Leah are much too young to thinking about marriage. You are enlisting in the army changing you plan and Leah's plan. I hope that this story has a happy ending.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you. But hey, that's what Kevin wants
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 08:16 am
This is so sweet! MOre please!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying to upload a chapter or two tonight.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/12/11 08:35 pm
great start so far I like your use of flashabacks to tell the story
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 06:01 pm
Dang, girl. That's beast, hon. Nice job, you got me wantin more. I look forward to your writing. You say you're a better editor than writer, but I don't know. You DEF got me wanting to read more. Good job!
Author's Response:
thanks beta.
Reviewer: Noah Signed [Report This]Date: 19/12/11 04:21 am
This was a good start. I pray that he comes home vertical and not horizontal.
Author's Response:
thank you. I wonder what will happen too. Please keep reading and enjoying :)
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/11 08:50 pm
Please tell that Kevin survived and that he comes back home to Leah? I can't wait to read more. You are off to a wonderful beginning so please continue!!
Author's Response:
you were the very first reviewer of my story. I appreciate that. I had a burst of creativity this week, so I hope to finish it before December is over
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 16/12/11 06:39 am