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Title: IV. Permission to Please

The way you write goes down so smooth. Lookingforward to more. Will he start to work out maybe?

 

What is the brother's problem? Does their Dad play one off against the other?

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/08/14 06:08 pm
Title: IV. Permission to Please

The man was a riddle she would never solve.

...but she could spend a lifetime trying couldn't she? lol  Cool statement. I love that kind of man.

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/01/12 03:56 am
Title: II. Poetry in Motion

Me likey again!

Love, love, loved that the ASSumed tables were turned on miss uppity-butt, I was impressed with his residence as well.  Also, Lulu reading the alluring passages of literature was sexy, sensual, I liked it.

I'm digging the intelligence of the characters.  Well, not so much their intellect but the sophistication through which Lulu and Dennison are depicted that captures my attention and thus, keeps me coming back for more.

Very nice!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/01/12 02:41 am
Title: IV. Permission to Please

Yeah, they are a soon to be a couple.  can't wait to read more about this couple.  Thanks for a very enjoyable read.  Loved it. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/11 06:14 am
Title: III. Pounding of Fists and Gnashing of Teeth

The Lord brothers take sibling rilvary to a whole new level.  My goodness for Heath to say what he did to Denny, no wonder Denny punched him.  Heath's wife is something else.  I glad that Lulu still likes Denny. Thanks for a great update.

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Date: 18/12/11 06:13 am
Title: III. Pounding of Fists and Gnashing of Teeth

Heath is an ass! A jealous one at that!! ugh..major turnoff!  And I'm sorry but, did Tahnya just covet her brother-in-law, even in its smallest measure?  I think in spite of it all, Tahnya and Lulu may become...um...something similar to friends - passing acquaintances perhaps. Anyhoo, Dennison needs fresh eyes to educate him on handling his emotions and he could return the favor in reacquainting Lulu to the machinations of the male anatomy. *wink, wink*

Nice chapter Lady!

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/12/11 08:16 pm
Title: I. Parental Words of Wisdom and Wisecracks

Sounds like Dennison has totally misread his father's angst.  Ellis is angry because the son he wanted - his golden-child [Dennison] - didn't follow in his footsteps.  It says a great deal about who Dennison really is instead of what he should have been. 

Love the mothers, they are a mess!

As for the two very interesting, very diverse lovebirds...I hope to see more of them relating as potential couples-for-life - or - not.  LOL

Great start Scribe!

 

 Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/12/11 06:36 pm
Title: II. Poetry in Motion

These two are so cute.  Their friends are hilarious.  I am glad that they are finding things in common like poetry.  Thanks

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Date: 17/12/11 12:26 pm
Title: I. Parental Words of Wisdom and Wisecracks

I love Dennison's mother Susan.  She is funny.  Also, Lulu's mom is funny too.  Thanks for a great update.  I really enjoy hoe two people who are so different are connecting.  I can't wait to read about their second date.  Thanks

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Date: 17/12/11 11:48 am
Title: The Cast

Great cast.  Thanks

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Date: 17/12/11 11:15 am
Title: I. Parental Words of Wisdom and Wisecracks

I'm so glad to see these characters again. I love them and I look forward to reading about their journey.

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Date: 17/12/11 05:04 am
Title: The Cast

Love this story! You need to update again! RIGHT NOW!!!

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Date: 17/12/11 02:16 am
Title: IV. Permission to Please

I love this story and these two totally make sense together. Update like now!

 Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/12/11 11:53 pm
Title: III. Pounding of Fists and Gnashing of Teeth

Ok, Tahnya has her named spelled like that but she has to ask how to spell Lulu?  (eyes rolling around in my head)

Still... with her latter comments and asking for Lulu's number: I won't go far and say maybe 'still waters run deep', but maybe there's more to Tahnya than we realized.

 

That moment in the car when Dennison tries to push her away, woowee, I've been there too many times. Lulu was brave to tell the truth and admit she liked him. I don't think I would have.

 Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/12/11 09:16 pm
Title: The Cast

Have to agree with Brenda1257. Really am enjoying D and L's relationship so far. Please don't make us wait too long for an upate.

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Date: 16/12/11 09:01 pm
Title: I. Parental Words of Wisdom and Wisecracks

Ah, another gem shined up and put out for me to enjoy! 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/11 08:07 pm
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