Very nice Realstone. Love how you give a scene the depth and gravity the show couldn't seem to manage. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I had a problem meshing the eps dialogue that I felt carried the moments with what I wanted to express.  At times it felt really stiff.  Which I think is a problem when writing for daytime TV.  How do you give the actors the right words to express the right emotions in 45 min.

Realstone.. First, excited to see another story from you. After reading this one, I might have to stalk you for more. LOL

I really enjoyed the story. As a Jovan, of course I would have perferred Evangeline & John to work through their problems and John man-up to be the right man for Evangeline. However, when they broke up, I always believed Evangeline did the right thing by walking away from John when she did. Just as you poined out in your story, self love alwsys wins.

Thanks for sharing your story. I look forward to more stories from you.  Kudos to you Chica!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kudos.  Stalk all you want...gets me through the editing.  I too wanted J&E to make love and make up and make love again but TPTB have shown a serious lack of common sense and ability to please their consumer base.