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Title: Chapter Ten

This is your magnum opus of chapters. This is exactly what Todd should have made Evangeline deal with. The bullshit denial. Cause she was equally culpable.

Absolutely BRILLIANT CHAPTER (11) and sexy as hell!

Brava! 

 

 

Reviewer: ElegantPaws Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 07:18 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I really like this version of Evangline, todd, layla and new character alot! Very interesting story!

Reviewer: none Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/10 10:19 am

Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this story. I could barely pry my eyes away. Even at the end I still wanted more. Thanks for the greaat read.

Reviewer: sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/07/10 12:36 am

Title: Epilogue

Loved this story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  It's wonderful to know that you liked it.  And thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 03:44 am

Title: Epilogue

Reese, first of all I'm so happy that you were able to finish UR. And what an ending it was. I love how you brought everything together in the end. I love Todd and Evangeline's wedding. I love Todd's vows to his one and only. My goodness, all those words came from his heart. So beautiful. Evangeline looking and feeling like a princess was just as beautiful. They are so adorable together. I love it when Todd and Evangeline took a long time kissing each other and the minister tease them about it. It was so nice to have so many people at their wedding too. It great to see people supporting Todd and Evangeline so much. Star and Jack were adorable just as Layla was. Wub!

Wow, so much has happen about Mei's death. I'm glad they got everything straignten out and Adam and Layla were save. I love all the great mind working to clean up all the mess that Mei's death had cause. Great detail on that part Reese. I was glad to see almost everybody coming to an conclusion at the wedding. Adam and Layla really didn' t have to worry about RJ interfering with their relationship and I love RJ and Adam talk at the wedding. Todd and Evangeline catching Jarded sneeking out of manison was too funny. Good to see Natatlie and Jared relationship was out in the open to Kevin and things are good for them too.August and Nora too!! Go Nora!!!!


Okay now to the what I been waiting for. The hot loving dear....... Oh Reese, that was one of the steamiest, hottest, sexiest, and beautiful love making scenes around. Wow, you really took it up another notch Reese. Todd was so damn sexy and I love Evangeline's reaction to Todd pleasing her. There was so much love and affection in their love making that you felt it in your bones and other places too. *faints herself*

OMG Reese, you continue to surprise us huh? You gave us TJ!!!! I was so happy for Todd. He had so much heartache about TJ's 'death' that having the boy in his arms was so sweet and deserving to Todd and Evangeline. I'm all piss at John for keeping TJ away from Todd, but maybe it was for good cause. TJ sounds like an angel too. He, the new baby, Jack, and Star are going to have Todd and Evangeline busy in being parents. But happy busy parents.

Wow, Reese this story was an epic. A great epic and I couldn't see it ending any other way than to have Todd and Evangeline happy with their growing family. I'm so happy that you finish it and I believe I'm not as sad as I thought I was going to be with the ending because everybody is actually happy in the end. Hell, Todd even gave John and Chris some slack about things. That's the Todd Manning I know and will always love.

You are a dear for writing this wonderful story for us Reese and I look forward to the rest of your works in the future Reese!!!

Author's Response:

Wow.  What a review.  Where to start.  First, I wasn't going to do a Tangie wedding but in one of the posts a few readers were obviously expecting one and so I played around with a scenario just because of that.  So I do pay attention to readers thoughts in their reviews for my fanfiction.  After all, its for the fans of a couple.  So thanks to those that forced my hand.

Secondly, the fallout from Mei's death impacted many of the characters.  Ti Lao was a crazy badass.  He had to go.  lol  But I wanted RJ to know that Adam while ethical and moral would try with everything that was in him to protect her.  Whether Adam would have been able to truly go through with offing his uncle is up to the individual reader to decide.

The long awaited Tangie love scene.  It had been awhile.  I knew that there was no way I could not write their 'pre-honeymoon' love scene and not be cyber stone to death.  LOL  So I'm hoping it didn't/doesn't disappoint (anybody).  Glad you liked it, Stormy.

And last but not least element. The surprise.  I couldn't let Todd and Evangeline begin their new life together without Thomas Todd Jr.  Not to paint John a bad guy, but someone (logical) had to take the fall for keeping the baby away from Todd.  John fit the bill and truly was the only with the connect to Marcie and Michael who would have the resources to get away with something like that.

So to all my Jovan/Tangie readers, don't take it to heart.  John doesn't care about Todd, but he does care about Evangeline.  That's why he turned TJ over.  Because of Van.  And Van will always have a small part of her that cares for him, and he for her (no matter what the doofus's on OLTL try to spin).

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the ending of UR.  Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 01:44 am

Title: Epilogue

wow that great his son is back with him and that  van and him finaly have the family they wanted. i'm glad adam handle his uncle and was able to be with layla and started a life with him.  love the story and thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

I was really trying to mind my Ps and Qs and remember each loose end that needed tying up.    So I'm really glad that I succeeded and that you found the ending satisfying.  I appreciate you hanging in there with this story.

And thanks for the review. 

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/10 11:27 pm

Title: Epilogue

I sorry to see this story end. I love characters so much. Thanks for writing a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thanks you.  I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.  It was a labor of love for the greatest couple that never was.

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/10 09:30 pm

Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Yay to the update Reese. You know how to keep a girl on her toes for most of the ending of this story. I would never thought of August as a FBI agent. Dang, August had more surprises than the jack of trades laugh.gif I hate he got shoot thought, but I'm glad he was okay after he and RJ confronted Mei.

Talk about a man who needed to go down any means necassary. He was such a evil and controling man. He got what he deserve in the end, though I hate that Agent Khan had lost his life as well. I'm so glad Adam and Layla is safe now and they had Vicki to thank!! Now, that is how you suppose to write a woman of Vicki's status on a show, not that crap that is written for her on the show. I love the fact the Vicki was involved with all the heavy stuff. I like action Vicki!!! RJ was smooth and great as he always was. I love his exchange with Adam and him calling Lisa a cow. laughing.gif He's a trip and so is Lisa. She's needs to sit her ass down with being so uppity with all the skeletons in her closet.

And I have to say I love Natalie and Jared little misunderstand and make-up. They are so cute together. I love that fact that Jared wanted to be with Natalie because he's in love with her. wub.gif And you actually wrote a um likeable Christian in the story.. That is all. I love this update so much Reese, but I missed my main couple off on their honeymoon I guess. I'm sure we will see more of them in the next chapter. Thanks for updating Reese and answering some question and gave us some more surprises too!!!

Reviewer: Megumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/09 08:53 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

wow his uncle and RJ mess with the wrong guy. adam not going to take that lyling down messing with him and his woman. glad he going to handle business thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/09 05:30 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

This is one crazy chapter. Please update.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/09 02:10 am

Title: Chapter One

Okay this is a must read! I only got to where Todd called his niece Carrot Top. I'll be back to read this!

Author's Response:

LOL.  Well, you know Todd's penchant for provoking Natalie.  Glad you liked that bit of exchange between the two and hope that you do come back and read the rest of the story.  

It's coming to a conclusion with one more chapter which I'm hopeful to have posted by either Thursday or Sunday at the latest and then an epilogue.

Hope you join the rollercoaster ride.  It's been a labor of love and thanks for posting.   

 

Reviewer: Writing Vixen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/09 01:42 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I know I haven't really commented on this story, but I have been an avid reader. I love the relationship between Evangeline and Todd. I am also impress by your character development of Layla. I never felt on the show they really new what to do with her character. 



Author's Response:

Well, thanks a lot, Juno.  I'm really happy that you've been enjoying the story.  Todd and Van are a special couple.  And I share your assessment of Layla:  She was never developed and so is a wonderful character to add layers to.  After all, she is Van's sister.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/09 08:02 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

omg so his unlce is his father dam. that what you called a mess up family. glad that van said yes to todd she should know that he wasn't going to take no for the answer thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Yes, the Mei's are a 'typical' Llanview family.  They are as messed up as the best, or depending on how you look at it, the worst of them. 

Oh, you know Van wasn't going to go gently.  Not our Van.  That's why she and Todd are such a great match.  Two strong willed people who truly care about each other and who put each other first.  That's the reason they were so mesmerizing on the small screen.   *sighs*

Anyway, thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 04:40 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

omg layla is RJ daughter how could he do that to his own daughter hurt her make her feel pain. ihope someone rips RJ balls off for that. she going to need adam and van more then ever. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

Can you believe it?  Both Clifford Williamson and Lisa had children by other people.  And RJ being Layla's father is such an unlikely source considering how upright Lisa is.  But then again, she was young once too. 

I think RJ was very insensitive for claiming Layla like she was some kind of possession.  And he's also a fine one to throw stones at Adam as Todd pointed out.  Yes, he needs a butt kicking and soon.  Let's see if he has any usefulness.  If not, I say off with his head.  lol 

You're so right.  Layla is truly going to need someone to lean on while all of this stuff with Ti Lao and RJ and her mother is going on. 

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 04:34 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

I hope she tell adam what went down what her uncle did to her. i can't wait to he get out of that family so him and lalya can have a happy life. dam the phone sex was hot first thought adam was in the room with her lol.

Author's Response:

Adam is the gem of that pitiful family.  Perhaps Jazz can do something to redeem herself.  I'm not going to hold my breath because she's really a selfish person but maybe...just maybe she really loves her brother.  Hmmmm.

LOL.  No, Adam was in Philly at his clinic, and not with Layla.  Just in spirit, I guess.  lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 04:07 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

wait to todd and van find out they going to be mom and dad. I can't wait to he ask her to marry him. it good starr finaly told her mom how she felt and that she not going to help her any more.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 03:59 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-One Part II

Well glad that starr is coming around and relize that her parents are not good together they make each other un happy. jack to cute with the cookies in his mouth. is van going to have todd babies hint the word babies i wanted twins for these two lol. i know lisa love her daughters but mom need to ease up.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 03:36 am

Title: Chapter Twenty-One

that the worst thing you about to get freaked on with your man and bam mom comes to visted lol. it like they don't wanted you to have sex lol. i like adam is so much in love with layla and she feels the same way. layla better watch out his sister coming after you.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 03:29 am

Title: Chapter Twenty Part II

Well i must say layla do your thing girl lol. she had that doctor speaking toung lol . He should ask todd when the sister wanted sex they get it so no point of fighting it lol. i'm glad that he bought a house for them but realy good van going to wait to he not married to ms nut case.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 03:10 am

Title: Chapter Twenty

so that wha vincet the jackass is holding over her. I hope she tells van so she can do something about him. It seems adam realy cares about her i was wrong about him. lol todd singing yeah he loves van alot a whole lot lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 02:52 am

Title: Chapter Nineteen Part II

what is vincent holding over layla she need to tell van so she can help her out the problem. ooo rj heard something tells me he about to do something bad very bad.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 02:42 am

Title: Chapter Nineteen

What is todd going to do next. Cris should leave the club before he give up what is layla keeping. is she doing shady business . i like the bond btween van and jack nice.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/09 02:39 am

Title: Chapter Eighteen

What does starr have plan for van. Does she wanted cole to steal some fiels or something from her office. todd need to make sure he tell van the truth and the whole truth. thanks for the updated.

Author's Response:

All I can say is that Starr is her father's daughter. Whatever she has planned for Van will be Toddian-like.  Yeah, if Todd knew what was good for him, he'd tell Van first about remarrying Blair.  But we know that won't happen.  lol

Thanks for reviewing.  And I know I responded to several other of your comments and Stormy's.  Wonder what happened to them.  LOL   Hmmm.  An unrelated story mystery!

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter Seventeen

What secret is adam keeping from everyone? glad that she told that s.o.b off . Blair better wake up todd doesnt' wanted you and starr i know she 16 but she not to old to get her ass kick lol. your dad love van that it let it go.  thanks for the updated

Author's Response:

What secret is Adam hiding?  Well, everyone in this story seems long on secrets.  LOL  I mean everyone seems to have one or two.  Blair is delusional as usual and unfortunately Starr is sharing in her delusions.  She's sixteen but acting like she's six.  Will see how long it takes her to come around...if she ever does.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 08:49 pm

Title: Chapter Sixteen Part II

well glad that van going to give her man a second change to work things out. LIke todd said unlce doens't know who he messing with. When you touch todd family and friends you wake up a beast.

Author's Response:

Didn't you just know that Van wasn't going to be able to resist Todd long.  When you're sprung...you're sprung!  You hear me, Van?  LOL

" LIke todd said unlce doens't know who he messing with. When you touch todd family and friends you wake up a beast."

Exactly!

Thanks for reviewing.

 

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 08:37 pm

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