I like the direction of this story and eager for more!!!
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: 07/10/12 01:08 am
You need to continue with this story, it's so good.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: 25/11/11 11:31 am
i really love this story i think it is moving along fine
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/11 09:06 am
Well Nahla's instincts are getting stronger.
I guess Gavyn has figured out that Nahla is the one they are looking for or some what suspects.
Great update hope to get more soon don't be a stranger :D
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/11 05:52 am
I like this story! :)
Keep the updates coming I think Gavyn is on to something here I'm getting excitied!
Reviewer: UnderRestrains Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/05/11 01:33 am
Is Nay a vampire hybrid? Me likey this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/11 01:07 am
cliff hanger !!!!
Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/05/11 12:34 am
Lovely, asolutely love Jared Leto. 30STM is amazing and, as an actor, the guy is a genius.
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 10:19 pm
I am loving this story please update again soon.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 05:58 pm
Nahla is the child huh!!! oh dang!!
Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed [Report This]Date: 07/01/11 02:27 am
i am sooo happy u have updated =) i love this story and i cannot wait to see what will happen next plz dont leave me hanging =)
Reviewer: kell369 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/01/11 05:36 pm
Loving this story.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 06/01/11 09:51 am
Please, please, please continue it.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/11 04:19 pm
you hit it out of the ballfield with this one. very good beginning. i love it.
Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/01/11 03:04 pm
i'm so so sooooo happy to see an update from you! i love vampires stories and look forward to more - keep it coming! thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/11 02:36 pm
Nahla is a pretty name, so if some taste her thhey will find out she is what. no one thinks its strange you can not glamour her?
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: 04/01/11 12:14 pm
i love this story! please keep it going. it has me on the edge of my chair over here! seriously, i am so bookmarking this! =)
Reviewer: branded_beauty Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 12:03 am
More more more, pleeease! It's been a while since I read a vampire story and I'm itching for simply more, lol!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 02:45 pm
OK, never really been into vampire stories before but this one is very intriguing. Please update soon. Thanks for sharing
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/10 04:20 am
Beautiful cast pictures.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/10 03:58 am
OMG. A update!!! Me so happy
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/10/10 03:23 am