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Title: Do You Remeber?

you. are. brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm blushing, but I love it.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 12:48 am

Title: Do You Remeber?

great story..wish there was to..good job on it

Reviewer: maryanne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/09 03:51 pm

Title: Do You Remeber?

This was such a beautiful story! I’ve become a real fan of your works! I love this song and I thought your version of it was really clever.

 

I love stories about childhood sweethearts. Because they’re so beautiful and it seems like such pure love, to love one since childhood. It just seems like soul mates to me.

 

What is so awesome about your song is how you took actual lines of the song and incorporated it into the story narrative. That was so awesomely clever! And I smiled at the “Suzy” and “Lee” becoming two names, not just one.

 

This was a fantastic story, am already a converted fan, well done!!



Author's Response: I love The White Stripes, and this song has always seemed like a sweet love song to me, so I'm glad you enjoyed my fictionalization of it. Thanks for the response! 

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/09/09 03:42 pm

Title: Do You Remeber?

tooooooooooo cuttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 02:38 am

Title: We're Going To Be Friends by The White Stripes

Thanks for the lyrics to the song.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 12:47 pm

Title: Do You Remeber?

OH this was such a nice one shot story.  I really enjoyed it.  It brought tears to my eyes...love so pure and simple but it really wasn't all that simple...how did they endure their time apart?  Who raised her when her mother died? How did they reconnect?  Are they married now?  Of course I want to know more about this couple but I think that it is better if I just enjoy what you have written and just imagine the rest.  Thanks so much for such a touching story.  Take Care.

Author's Response: I agree: the best part of reading (and even watching films and television) for me is imagining all the little things that the author/creator hasn't provided for the audience. That's probably what the allure of fan fiction is. Sometimes imagining those things is what leads to an original story!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/09 12:46 pm

Title: Do You Remeber?

I enjoyed reading this. Stories like this make me wish I had that sweet relationship that started from childhood. Sadly for me, I had an older brother and a brother one year younger who fought any boy that got to close, including their own friends.

Author's Response: Brothers can be annoying like that. I also enjoy stories that feature childhood friends. There's something so endearing about those types of relationships. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 04:45 pm

Title: Do You Remeber?

That was very nice!! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and responding!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/07/09 05:42 am

Title: Do You Remeber?

Hmm, interesting start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 31/07/09 04:55 am

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