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Title: Chapter 16

I can't take it anymore, you're killing me here ! I shed liters of tears for these two last chap... My heart is too fragile !  it's so sad. I'm gonna miss Abraham and Vernon, Adam was too weak (your life was at stake for god's sake, man up a little!) and Lucas, this prick, being a pawn for the fishes suits him better than being a survivor !

All drama aside, you're an artist, I'm in love with your story, original and really refreshing. I'm glad I've read ! Just one word : RESPECT !

All praise aside, I need my fix of hapiness, let's keep reading !

Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/02/12 05:04 pm

Title: Chapter 11

good chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/10 08:45 am

Title: Chapter 10

Lucas is soo funny lol what a character Ha!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like him!!!!! Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/10 08:34 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh no please say she made it *cries*

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/10 06:59 am

Title: Chapter 8

VERY GOOD!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/10 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 11

I'm enjoying the story but hate to think of what happens next seeing as to how they are on the titanic.

Reviewer: Royaldiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/08/09 01:18 pm

Title: Chapter 11

First of all, Lucus needs to die. Secondly poor Adam, he ain't doing anything and now he sick. I like how you fucked them over by putting them on the Titanic

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25/08/09 10:38 pm

Title: Chapter 5

This is nice, I wonder where your going with this

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wow!! I found this story, started reading, and didn't stop until the end of chapter five. What a great story.

From the beginning, Abe's baby was a miracle, left behind by his beloved wife so that he wouldn't be alone. What a sad, sad life it was too. Salomi has such spirit, smarts, and sass. Sometimes a little too much. Abe is simple and naive in his unsophistication. I fear that it will be his undoing. What a way to make a better living for yourself and your daughter.

This story has a smooth, easy flow in telling the tale of lives lived in such a simple depressing time.

I'm hooked. I don't know where your storytelling is taking us, but I'll be alone for the ride.



Author's Response: I am so touched by your review! Reviews like this are the reason why I like to share my work with the world instead of just keeping it for myself on my hard drive :). Reviews like this also make me wanna update. Thanks again for riding with me!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 04:44 am

Title: Prologue

thank you all for the great reviews! didnt expect to get this great amount of responses! just added the first chapter! hope you all continue reading!

Reviewer: Butterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/08/09 11:38 pm

Title: Prologue

Thanks for a great start to the story.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/09 01:58 am

Title: Prologue

That was true miracle. He's wife fighting spirit obviously went into his little girl.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 03:04 am

Title: Prologue

You definitely have my attention with the start.  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/08/09 02:42 am

Title: Prologue

I AM ALREADY HOOKED. I LOOK FORWARD TO READ MORE.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 12:52 pm

Title: Prologue

WOW, thanks for a great story.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 03:20 am

Title: Prologue

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 01:57 am

Title: Prologue

I look forward to reading this series.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/08/09 12:28 am

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