This is nice, I wonder where your going with this
Date: 23/08/09 08:31 pm
Wow!! I found this story, started reading, and didn't stop until the end of chapter five. What a great story.
From the beginning, Abe's baby was a miracle, left behind by his beloved wife so that he wouldn't be alone. What a sad, sad life it was too. Salomi has such spirit, smarts, and sass. Sometimes a little too much. Abe is simple and naive in his unsophistication. I fear that it will be his undoing. What a way to make a better living for yourself and your daughter.
This story has a smooth, easy flow in telling the tale of lives lived in such a simple depressing time.
I'm hooked. I don't know where your storytelling is taking us, but I'll be alone for the ride.
Author's Response: I am so touched by your review! Reviews like this are the reason why I like to share my work with the world instead of just keeping it for myself on my hard drive :). Reviews like this also make me wanna update. Thanks again for riding with me!!!!!!! Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/08/09 04:44 am