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Title: Vermillion

I really enjoyed this story. Kudos to you, I will have to read more of your work.

Reviewer: Cynnae Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/14 02:17 pm

Title: Vermillion

This was the best short story I ever read!!! I love the dynamics of their love hate relationship. Did you finish the third installment? 

Reviewer: MissTruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/13 12:56 am

Title: Vermillion

Wow,weird but very interesting...Maximus is one frightening so and so,lmbo

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/07/12 01:43 am

Title: Vermillion

i really enjoyed that one.

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 12:16 am

Title: Vermillion

Very intense.  Your writing style is highly intense and you use your words to really infuse life into your story.  You really show your readers the ambivalence in the relationship between Max and Layla.  A great reading experience.

 

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Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/11 05:17 pm

Title: Vermillion

I just love how this story is so intense and dark.  great job for writing out side the box

i really hope you update very soon. I'll be waiting ;)

thanks for the read

Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 08:46 am

Title: Vermillion

Dude, I so love this story! I don't know what that says about me. lmao

 The part about her being all alone and taking the pills was sad. I can't believe she's having his kid, although I sorta thought you were going there when he looks at her stomach. How in the world can she marry him? I can't see her taking him home to meet the family.

I can't wait to read the next one, I hope it's as long or longer than this one.

 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/05/10 11:35 am

Title: Vermillion

Wow this is really good!! I hope that you find the inspiration to continue this. I'm the type of person who loves dark stories, so i'm probably one of a few who actually wants her to stay with him. It'd be cool if she became a demon herself.

Author's Response: thank you sam for your review...

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/10 04:25 pm

Title: Vermillion

I absolutely loved EVERYTHING about this story! I can't wait until this tale is finished!

Author's Response: Thank you Paris for your review.

Reviewer: Paris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/03/10 10:11 pm

Title: Vermillion

I have to say I really really like this story . There is just something about stories where the woman has little control and the guy has ALL of the control , that I just love. Please keep writing .

Author's Response: Thank you Stacie for your review.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 05:58 pm

Title: Vermillion

This is still an awesome post. I read it when you had his original name be "Lucifer" (thank goodness you changed it lol!) Anywho, still enjoying it and I look forward to reading the next installment....

Author's Response: thank you kit for your review. When i named him Lucifer it was a prospective name, i couldnt find one that fit until i saw the name Maximus...

Reviewer: Kit Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 06:33 pm

Title: Vermillion

I HOPE YOU DO 10 MORE, CAUSE IT'S THAT GOOD OF A STORY. SO PLEASE!!!!! AS MANY MORE THAT YOU CAN STAND, THANKS!

Author's Response: Lol Neki.. Thank you for you enthusiasm... I am honestly going to try and continue this series, because it has alot of room for development, so be on the look out...

Reviewer: neki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 02:11 am

Title: Vermillion

Wow, this is scary, creepy, delicious, hot, and intense all wrapped into one great story. I love it. I don't think poor Layla has a chance of escaping Maximus now. Good job. I like that you write outside the box. Can't wait for the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks Happy2bNappy, I have been in a sort of Dark Fic mode which has lead to alot of my new writings being so morbid and intense. Layla might escape Maximus in the next installment, or she might be bound to Maximus forever. Anyway thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 03:58 am

Title: Vermillion

Ok I feel so bad for her I could cry!! How is ever going to get this demon out of her life. H is slowly killing her. He says he want sto marry her and them to have a family..that would destroy her for sure...she is taking medication when he is leave her ..she cannot do that for life...He is cruel and brutal to her as demons are so how could a humna survive that kind of life. She has to escaoe or destroy him..but how!! I want her free for her own sanity...and God forbid they have a baby..spawn of Satan is the last thing she needs!!'

This so good...I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next story in the series...this is so good and so well written...bravo sweetie..bravo!!



Author's Response: Neneburge, Layla and Maximus have a very intense relationship where the lines of love, lust and hate are blurred. And to me it seems like they both dont know whether they want to escape. But for Layla's sake i hope she finds her happiness whether its with Max or not. Anyway thanks for your review.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/10 02:10 am

Title: Vermillion

Love it!!!

It seems Layla wasn't sure if she wanted Maxiums or not.. I thought Maxiums was lusting after Layla but when she had her apartment blessed and it kept him away he realized that he loved her and wanted to give her want she wanted most. A husband, kids a family..

Looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response: Renee i like how you saw that both characters dont know what they want from the other. thank you for your review.

Reviewer: Renee Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 11:19 pm

Title: Vermillion

I absolutely loved this!!!  I've read Scream but haven't checked out Menagerie yet...I suppose after reading this...I will have to...man, this was intense...found myself not wanting it to end...Maximus is a beast...in more ways than one...and poor Layla...don't know if I should feel sorry for her or jealous of her, haha...this was really great...anxiously anticipating the next installment...

Author's Response: thanks attheritz, I hope i can get the next installment out asap, because i am also curious to know how this tale ends.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 11:13 pm

Title: Vermillion

Wow, that demon lover was intense.....but was it love or lust??? Would she really be able to have a family with him??? Hope Layla can be happy. Interesting short.

Author's Response:

Love or Lust??? that and all of your other question are things that i will leave you to decide until the third installment is posted where all the lose ends shall be tied up. Thank you Baha_malo for your review

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 09:54 pm

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