YOU GOT MY ATTENTION, KEEP IT GOING PLEASE......
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 05:57 am
Interesting short.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 05:46 am
Hmm interesting. That was probably the shortest actual story I've every read on here. I believe I've read a poem here too. Anyway, I would say continue this for sure. I need a little more depth, meaning some background and of course interraction between the girl and her secret love! They should definitely fight and then have some hot, sweaty se...haha, sorry. Continue :)
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 09/03/10 02:49 am
You know you have to continue this, right? Otherwise I'll never be able touch my boyfriend's Tekken ever again.
p.s. He loves it when I handle his Tekken like a pro... haha
Reviewer: Sweet Lil' Mystery Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 02:32 am