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Real name: Angel

Member Since: 10/06/08

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Summary: General Hospital: This is a one shot fanfic featuring Jason/Keesha/Sonny.

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Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jason/ Keesha (General Hospital)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1097
Read Count: 3085
Published: 27/06/08
Updated: 27/06/08


Title: Chapter 1: Sunset

Oh, you can't just leave us hanging, I need more please. That was really good, and just fueled my Sonny hate that much more. Thanks so much for posting, this was a great start.   Angel

Author's Response: I am working on a continuation.... hoping to post it soon.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
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A fantasy tale set in Llanview.  The world is split in two, the light and the dark, in the light are the humans that walk the earth blissfully unaware that in the darkness creatures of the night wait to strike.  Evangeline Williamson is a retired vampire slayer who all her life has had to straddle the line between the light and the dark.  Living a quiet life in Llanview she thinks she has managed to escape her secret past until she becomes the object of affection for two rivals from different vampire clans.  Drawn to both, she finds herself caught up in old vendettas and hidden agendas.  Now as a clan war threatens to break out jeopardizing all of humanity, Evangeline must make a choice: follow her head and lead a normal life in the light or follow her heart and her soul mate into the dark.  



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live), Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: When Night is Falling
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 38229
Read Count: 7505
Published: 29/06/08
Updated: 28/08/08


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Whoo, this was nice. Loved the Yul scene, so very darkly hot. And LMAO off at this line...

 “Hey you, I was wondering where you’d run off too.“  Todd cringed at the feminine southern drawl as he felt a hand on his shoulder and turned to see Blair look up at him with her best seductress pout.

Damn that was funny. Great job with this one, I love this story...

Angel



Author's Response: Thanks Angel!  I always have way too much fun with Blair, she's just ridiculous sometimes, I think this is my own secret revenge for years of being subjected to the horror that is T&B hahaha.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/08

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Aww, poor Hugh. Guy doesn't know what he's up against. Liked how you established their relationship, and Evangline's feelings about Hugh. And she knows that Yul is powerful, so that should be interesting..

Great chapters Greatodin, looking forward to more!

Angel



Author's Response: I'm glad you like!  Evangeline's been around the block enough times to know the score, it'll be interesting to see how far deep she's going to get involved in figuring out what the vampires have brewing.  And I agree, Hugh most certainly does not know what he's up against, hahaha, but he'll find out soon enough. . .

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Date: 30/06/08

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

So much info in this chapter, so much backstory. Really puts Caleb in a different light. Loved how you wrote Michael, his anger and fear felt really authentic and totally understandable.

Really liked the closing too; I can't say I blame him for being weary of Evangline. Not after everything that's happened to his family.

Wonderful as always GreatO.



Author's Response: Thanks TBG, I love good back story.  Also I'm trying to separate Caleb from John a bit because they're not the same so even though this has Jovan elements it's different from the Jovan we know.  So I'll just call it Cavan hahaha.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/08

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Damn, I don't where to begin. I loved this update, especially all the vampy goodness. I didn't want it to end.

My faves included the Evangeline/Ben scene, I loved that she let him drink from her neck. So hard core.

I liked Todd's jelously, and Yul's amusment of it. Happy that  Esmerelda and Dmitiri are back, they're so damn entertaining.

And Gabriella  screams trouble, wonder what she's got up her sleeve.

GreatO, I waited patiently for an update and you didn't dissapoint. Great job, I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I glad you loved it TBG!  I felt like I really wanted to capture them in their element but also show that even though their vampires they still have the same issues and hangups as humans hahaha.

Yeah Van is pretty hard core and Ben is a cutie.  Funny sidenote, I was inspired by a scene in I think it was sixteen candles where the molly ringwald character hangs out with the nerd and throws him a bone to impress all his geeky friends.  Isn't it crazy where you can draw inspiration from!

Yea it was fun to bring back Esmerelda and Dmitiri they are such evil goodness.  Yul is great, such the observer and Todd well. . .somethings never change I guess. . .

Gabriella, she's a wildcard.  A woman scorned is a dangerous woman indeed and I think she's going to be very conflicted when things come to a head.  Though who can't relate to overinvesting in people and being upset when you get no return.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/07/08

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So I told myself when I saw your update that I would wait until I got home to read, because I get distracted at work. But damn, I missed this story so much and couldn't help taking a peek. And then I read this whole chapter.

This was so great, I mean...amazing. I loved Caleb's backstory and how it brought his character into focus for me. The stuff with his dad was my favorite, and John of course. And by the way, I laughed at loud at the crochet comment, damn that was funny. And you closed with a killer last line, I want to read the next one now, but I know I should wait. Do some actual work for a while..

Did I mention I missed this story?  I really, really did. :)



Author's Response: You know what I missed this story in a way as well, it was really good to have a breakthrough that allowed me to take to the next level.  It WAS really important to bring Caleb into focus for the reader and really separate him from John so I'm glad to read that I made some movement in that direction.  And yes the idea of little John crocheting with mama kind of cracked me up a bit so I'm glad you liked that!  Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/08/08

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

God, there was so much to love in this chapter. The mythology was fabulous, I loved the backstory of Lilitu, it was so lyrical, and beautifully written. And it also gave Caleb even more layers, he's damn complex, something I think Evangeline is starting to realize too.

So these two chapters were awesome. Period. And I'm so glad you updated the story, I'm very much looking forward to what comes next. :)

Oh, and I do miss Yul. No pressure though.



Author's Response:

Thank you, the mythology of Lilitu is based on an actual epic poem from that time period I just put my own story line driven twist on it but I can't take full credit I must admit.  I did truly aim to add many layers to Caleb I knew he wasn't a fan favorite so I really wanted to reveal more of him to the reader.  Evangeline will have some difficult choices to make.

Update will come more quickly I've already gotten a good portion of it written out so it won't be a month span again.  And Yul is lurking around never fear!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/08/08

Rated: Mature Content
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Eureka Fanfiction: Welcome to Eureka.

Sheriff Jack Carter is an average man among a town of geniuses who fumbles though policing the community in a constant state of frustration over it's more eccentric citizens and their pennant for wild inventions and experiments. The town's one saving grace is Allison Blake, the hardnosed head of Eureka's major research facility and the woman who has captured his heart.

But as always in Eureka, things don't go as planned, and Carter soons finds himself trapped in a waking nightmare, fighting to hold on to everything he cherishes most, with nothing to guide him but the strength of his convictions and his belief in the woman he loves.

Oh, and also a little bit of faith.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Allison Blake
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Allison/Carter (Eureka)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33784
Read Count: 59445
Published: 30/06/08
Updated: 25/08/08


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Yay! Faith is back. I missed that cutie.

Loved the cornuts/egg bit, that was pretty damn funny. Liked how Alison ultimately trusted Carter, it would't make sense for him to just make that up.

Great chapter, great writing, and great story I say.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/08

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Another great chapter, I think this gets even better every time you post. The love scene was great, and I really liked the rescue before too. The school blowing up, very Eureka.

And the memory mystery is really interesting, can't wait to see how it pans out.

Great job as always!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  The school explosion was very Eureka, I thought.  Thanks for the stars too!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/08

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

Awww....that was really sweet. Loved how you used the song in both now and then, and the rose petals are so pretty......

Loved Faith as always, and like how everybody doesn't really trust Jo. Still don't like her at all.

It's all tying together, which is geat. I'm very excited about the big reveal, that's gonna be something I think.

Fab update Black!



Author's Response: Wasn't it sweet? I think I was in a romantic mood with this one, plus I kept listening to that song.  Jo is....Jo.  Not so nice in my version, but hey, that's how I see her.  Thanks for reading and thanks for the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/08

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

Awww, Henry's chillin at the spa. Is he gonna save the day I wonder?

Love the Jack/Nathan smack down. Clash of the snarky titans. :)

I really like Allison in this, she's kinda spunky. And the ring thing was very sweet, Jack's adorable.

Great update Black, can't wait to see how this all works out!



Author's Response: Henry is kind of a Superman so it's a good thing he's finally got the message.  Love writing Jack and Nathan.  And Allison is a hard ass in this fic the way I always thought she should be.  And nothing on the planet is more adorable than Jack Carter IMO.  LOL. Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Ooh, I loved this chapter. The love scene was so awesome, and everything before it was just sigh worthy. Honestly, this is so Carter's story, and I'm really rooting for him to get the girl.

And loved the bit about Faith at the end, though I am worried about the head thing. Hope the boy's okay.

Great update, and yes, this is one of my faves as well. Can't wait for the last one!



Author's Response: Thanks Token.  Honestly, this is one of the sweetest love stories I've ever written I think.  It's kind of refreshing.  I'm going to miss it when it's gone *sigh*.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/08/08

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine and Epilogue

Okay, you really need to take a bow. This was such a great story, and I really mean that. You made me look forward to each update of this fic, and fall for Carter and Allison, root for them to make it. I loved the ending, with her watching the memories in his head, that was so touching. And of course, I always loved the stuff with Faith, and them naming their little girl that was a such a great way to end this story.

Thanks for a great ride Black, this was nothing but awesomeness, pure and simple.



Author's Response: Hey thanks so much for reading.  I know you're not a "Eureka"file, but I'm happy the story was still a good read.  Thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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This is a re-imagining of the Spanish movie Sex with Lucia but with some major changes and a different ending.  In London, writer Oliver Convery falls into a whirlwind relationship with the vibrant Kylie Winters, a Canadian ex-patriate working as a waitress in Brixton.  After a tragic series of events Kylie finds herself escaping to the small island of Madeira. While there, she’s drawn to Alex, an American surfer and free spirit who seems to represent everything Oliver is not.  She also becomes enchanted by Lalita, an alluring but cynical woman also seeking solace on the beautiful island.  As Kylie seeks to unravel the mysteries surrounding Oliver and the last novel that he was writing, she finds herself learning more and more about the web of secrets and lies that ultimately led to his downward spiral.  Where will the truth lead her: back to man of her dreams or into the arms of the man who has offers her a new reality?



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Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 34851
Read Count: 4931
Published: 30/06/08
Updated: 21/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: The End of the Beginning

Wow, I really like this. So much going on, and only hints at where it might lead. I've never seen this movie, but you make me want to rent it now.  I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Oliver, though he is dead, so I could be wrong.

Excellent chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks Chica.  We are going to see a lot of Oliver in flashbacks, the thing I love about the movie is how the pieces fall into place here and there, every little thing that happens is significant and I wanted to convey that in my story.  I'm happy that so far this seems to be happening.  Thanks for reading!

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Date: 02/07/08

Title: Chapter 2: Under the Stars and Dreaming

Wow, another great chapter. This story is so intriguing, you give a little information here and there, enough to make you wonder where this is headed. Great love scene too, very hot.  Very nice writing, great work all around.

 



Author's Response: Thank you!  Even though I've changed parts of the story I've really tried to maintain the atmosphere of the movie so I'm glad to see that I seem to be conveying that.

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Date: 03/07/08

Title: Chapter 3: Kylie and Oliver

Okay, this just gets better every time I read a chapter. I love how this all played out, so rushed and yet romatic. Loved the last line, very sweet. Great job, my love of this story grows more and more.

Author's Response: That's awesome.  Yeah I love Ollie and Kylie, I think there is story is equal parts beautiful and tragic, I'm glad you like as well.

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Date: 04/07/08

Title: Chapter 4: The Morning After

Another fab chapter, so very hot and sweet at the same time. I loved that last line in particular, it was such a great end to an amazing chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, hot and sweet is always a good combination hahaha.

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Date: 05/07/08

Title: Chapter 7: In Another Space and Time

Okay, so first guess is that the girl is Oliver's. But I've very interested in the mother, wondering what she's gonna bring to the story. This is so interesting, I love the shifts in perspective too.

Author's Response: Hmmmm. . .I wonder LOL.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/08

Title: Chapter 8: Across Town

God, Oliver is so gone, and he knows just the right things to say, doesn't he? The writer in him I bet, he's such a romantic....

I’d rather have sex with you.”

Lord, I practically swooned. This story is so great, I'm loving each chapter more and more.



Author's Response: He's a smooth one isn't he?  A guy that talks like that with the face of Joseph Fiennes could get a girl in serious trouble hahaha.

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Date: 09/07/08

Title: Chapter 10: Between Living and Dreaming

Wow, those were such great chapters. I can see why Kylie would be so taken by Alex and  Lalita, especially after what she's been through. They're like a breath of fresh air.

And Ollie's alive. This just got ten times more interesting...

Excellent update, GreatO!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked those TBG.  I agree they are a breath of fresh air.  I think in a way because of what Kylie's gone through and her relationship with Ollie (which we've only scrapped the first layer of) she was forced to grow up kind of fast.  I think Alex and Lalita are fun loving and laid back and it allows her to get in touch with the less intense side of her.

 

Ollie is indeed alive, I wonder what's going to happen. . . .

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/07/08

Title: Chapter 13: Castles Made of Sand

Okay, I kinda hate Oliver now. You had me yelling at my computer screen during those fights, pretty deep in dickdome that man.

Then Alex shows up, all thoughtful and hot...Lord, I know where my loyalties lie. Too much drama with Oliver I think.

Great chapter as always. :)



Author's Response:

Oliver is an emotional rollercoaster isn't he, definitely has a lot of growing up to do. 

And Alex is thoughtful. . .and hot!

Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/08

Title: Chapter 14: Running up that Hill

Oh, this was so gut wrenching. Just horrible. And now he's away. Lord.

I'm still rooting for her to get away from Ollie, he's got too many issues to drag her into, the last thing either of them needs.

Oh, I can't wait until the last chapters..



Author's Response:

Yeah things just got a lot more complicated eh?  We'll see how Kylie deals with everything.  Final chapters will be up by the end of the weekend.  Thanks for the review, stars and love!

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Date: 01/08/08

Title: Chapter 15: Stranger than Fiction

Okay, I feel so slow right now, I did not make the connection between Lalita and Maya, it just didn't compute for some reason. Though now that I think back to the story, I can see it was right there in front of me.

Awesome chapter. I'm so glad I'm reading this without seeing the movie first, I'm so enjoying the journey of this story. I honestly have no idea how it will end, which is great.

 



Author's Response: I was actually hoping that to a certain extent.  In the movie it's pretty clear because you can see all the actors and actresses but I kind of wanted to play around with that a bit with this story so I'm glad someone was still surprised.  It has been fun doing this story for an audience that haven't seen the movie because it really gave me a bit a freedom while forcing me not to make assumptions about what people understood or get lazy on some of the details.  Anyways thanks for reading, the reviews and stars they definitely helped me get on the ball with this one!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/08

Title: Chapter 17: Down the Rabbit Hole

Okay, first off, this was such a great story. You did such a wonderful job unfolding the storyline, creating the charactes, and I loved every moment. So my hats off to you, because this story will be missed.

I am glad Ollie and Kylie went their seperate ways. It was the definately the right thing for him to do, he was bad for her, and it seemed like he finally realized that. Her not telling him she was a writer was a clear example of how being with him affected her, and it seemed like she grew out of the relationship a bit, needed something different in her life.

I'm okay with her being with Alex, though it doesn't really feel very permanent  to me. Just something she needs to help her heal. But that may just be my take on the story, I think it really comes down to what's best for her in the end.

So yeah, a lovely end for a fantastic story. Thanks for sharing with us greatodin, you bring perfection as always.



Author's Response:

Thank you TBG, it feels wonderful to read that!  I'm back and forth over whether I do a sequel but there is this part of me that can imagine where they all would be in five years.  You're absolutely right Kylie needed to grow, they both did and it wasn't the right time for them to be together.

And you also make a great point about Alex, he is helping her to heal.  But long term who knows, I think Kylie is happy to focus a lot on embracing who she is and become a fully realized woman.  I see Kylie as someone who never really dreamed before she just kind of moved through life making spontaneous decisions and just living day by day I think she's ready to tap into that part of herself that wants to follow her dreams and not be tied down.  How Alex fits into that for the moment is up to the reader.  But I didn't just want for it to be that after everything she went through with Ollie, now she's head over heels in love with Alex and they all live happily ever after, it didn't feel true to the story or the characters.

Again thank you for all the awesome comments and reviews and sticking with me through this story!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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The Young and the Restless Fic: Drucilla Winters has always put her family first, striving to be a faithful wife to her husband Neil and an attentive mother to her daughter Lily.  

But while her charmed life is the envy of many in Genoa City, Dru is haunted by the devastating loss of her first love, ruthless coporate raider Jack Abbott. Though desperate to save her strained marriage, she finds herself increasingly unable to stay away from the man that continues to haunt her dreams and whose heart she destroyed so completely.  

With one reckless choice, another web of secrets will be born and Drucilla will be forced to face the truth about her marriage, the real story of her past, and how she never truly recovered from the pain of losing Jack. 

The Sequel to Loving Dru.



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Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Lily "Little Dru" Winters, Olivia Barber
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Drucilla/Neil (The Young and the Restless)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: The Love Stories
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33168
Read Count: 9787
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 24/09/08


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yeah, Jack's kind of an asshole. He loves her, I really think he does, but still...asshole.

Who are you calling," Olivia asked.

"Michael Baldwin," Dru replied

*Token does the happy dance*

Great chapter Black, you got me all worked up again. Can't wait for the next one....

Oh and btw...

Ashley's a bitch.



Author's Response:

Ah, but he's my asshole. LOL.  See, that's what I've always loved and found fascinating about Jack.  He can be so giving and loving one minute and a controlling manipulative jackass the next.  *sigh* God bless him. 

I lurve me some Michael so you know I couldnt' resist.

And yes--Ashley is a bitch. Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/08