This is a revised version of the story that i had up here . I'm not sure what to put here. So i'm just going to let you guys see what you think about it. and you can help with it as i go. I have the first two chapeters writen already. SO i'm going to let you guys help me with writing that next few by weighing in on what should happen. Lets see if we can make this story come together. As well as when and if i use your Idea then i will make sure that you get the credit that you desver if i use your idea for that chapter. I think this is going to be a blast... <3