Summary:
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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?
In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects. She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s. Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.
Will their love cross the finish line?
EDIT: Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't have done this without you.
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Categories: Original Fiction Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: No
Word count: 5758
Read: 214452
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014
Charlene Jacobson, Age 18
Forced to leave her home in Detroit after her brother's shooting, Charlene has built up a tough exterior. She vows not to let anyone get too close, but didn't count on meeting Ryan Quinn, the sexy country boy with the soul searching blue eyes.
Ryan Quinn, Age 18
A small town boy with big city dreams, Ryan is determined to leave his country roots behind for the sunny shores of California so he can become an Olympic gold medalist. Will falling for Charlene, the sassy beauty from Detroit, derail his plans for the future?
James Carter, Age 18
This sexy basketball star is destined for greatness and everyone knows it. James seems to have it all; good looks, popularity, and a promising future, but there's something he wants more and won't give up until Charlene is his to claim.
Christi-Jo McIntire, Age 18
Ryan's former girlfriend and the reigning Queen B of Hanson Lee Adams High School.This Southern belle is used to getting what she wants and refuses to let anything or anyone get in her way.
Netta Mae Jacobson (Nana),Age 65
Charlene's grandmother. She works fulltime as a housekeeper for Mr. Humphrey. Nana is a wise, perceptive woman who tells it like it is and knows the true meaning of love and sacrifice.
Russell Jacobson Jr. (Junior), Age 42
Charlene's estranged father. This former member of the militant civil rights party, the Black Panthers, harbors many demons from his youth growing up in Millersville, GA. Twenty-six years ago, a tragic incident forced him from his hometown. Now the past is catching up with the present when his daughter becomes involved with Ryan Quinn.
Sherriff Quinn, Age 43
Ryan's father and the newly appointed Sherriff of Millersville. He's a strict disciplinarian who hopes to see his eldest son continue their family legacy in law enforcement. Ryan always thought is father was hiding a secret, but doesn't realize how dark that secret is until Charlene comes into his life.
Mrs. Eileen Quinn and Sarah-Lynn (Pumpkin), Ages 41 and 3
Ryan's mother and baby sister.
Joshua Quinn, Age 13
Ryan's annoying younger brother. Josh is always up to mischief and his wisecracks land him in plenty of trouble. It seems the highlight of his day is finding ways to irritate his older brother.
Wesley (Wes), Age 18
Ryan's bestfriend and teammate. Wes has always been there for Ryan as his closest confidant, but will that change when Ryan finds out his bestfriend is keeping a secret that may affect their friendship?
Danny, Age 18
Ryan's childhood friend. He has a racist attitude, a crude sense of humor, and loves a good fight. Despite his short comings, he's loyal to his friends. He stays true to his convictions, no matter how misguided and does what he believes is right.
Chad, Age 16
Ryan's young friend. Chad's always looked up to his older friends, Ryan, Danny and Wes. He wants more than anything to fit in, but when asked to cross the line, will Chad find out the cost of being one of the crowd is way too high?
Karen Wilson, Age 17
Charlene's bestfriend. She is perceived by most as a nerdy bookworm, but Karen has an inner diva waiting to get out. When this wall flower finally starts to bloom, will she go too far to gain the attention of her unrequited crush?
Felicia and Roger, Ages 18
Two of Charlene's closest friends. This crazy couple is great fun to be around. When Felicia and Roger aren't fussing, they're showering each other with affection or sharing jokes. Their relationship has its ups and downs, but it's clear these two are truly in love.
RJ King, Age 63
Ryan's boss and owner of the only all service mechanic shop in town. Lonely and still grieving over the loss of his beloved nephew, RJ has grown to think of Ryan as the son he never had.
Mia, Age 26
Felicia's oldest cousin. She once dreamed of being a R&B singer, but her aspirations of stardom are cut short when her torrid affair with a married man results in her becoming a single mother. Now she works as a waitress at her aunt's soul food restaurant and the local Seven Eleven.
Meeka, Age 2
Mia's two year old daughter.