Chapter 4: Chapter 2
The argument was well written, and if Ellie was as smart as I think she is...she needs to show him what's up. Cause I have yet gotten the vibe that he really loves her, it's more of a like an f you to his family because he's marrying her.
I think Ellie needs to make him realize that she's his world. Don't know how she will do that, but anyhoo Ellie is growing on me. Nico not so much..yet.
Great update, and please update soon.
Thank you. I really struggled with it! I was worried that it came off rushed and forced and didnt move smovely. Seriously you saying that it was well written means so much to me. I think in the coming chapters Nick is going to explain himself, right now he comes off as a total douche and very unlikeable to the audience, but i hope as the story develops and the audience learns more about him they will begin to understand him and how he operates. There is more to come!!!
I'm gonna try my best to update asap. I already have plans for the next few chapters, now i just have to start typing it up.
Your support means a lot to me! Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 25 2011