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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50262
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Charly is going to have to stop being naive, man-up, and do some creative thinking.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 22 2011

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 350]
Summary:

 

Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 140995
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 20: Jyuu kyu (19)

Hmm...even though I know Yuki and Sara are endgame. I'm still not feeling Yuki. He's going to have to do some serious begging or something to get back in my good graces. Their issues still haven't been addressed. I'm just really not feeling them together. Something seems to be lacking...I don't know they aren't really showing me any chemistry right now. Hopefully, that will change with the upcoming chapters.  I will say that I loooooooooove Darren and Percy. Keep them coming. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 430]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 88853
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6

Gosh the updates are sooooo great!!!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 30 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

This is really intriguing to me, I can bet I know what the family business is, and I hope that Ellie has a little more gumption. She seems to be on more of the pushover side.



Author's Response:

Ellie avoids conflict I would say though I think you'll see that in coming chapters that when she finally decides to stand for something she doesnt easily back down which when Nick is involved there arguments can be explosive. 

Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

The argument was well written, and if Ellie was as smart as I think she is...she needs to show him what's up. Cause I have yet gotten the vibe that he really loves her, it's more of a like an f you to his family because he's marrying her.

I think Ellie needs to make him realize that she's his world. Don't know how she will do that, but anyhoo Ellie is growing on me. Nico not so much..yet.

Great update, and please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really struggled with it! I was worried that it came off rushed and forced and didnt move smovely. Seriously you saying that it was well written means so much to me. I think in the coming chapters Nick is going to explain himself, right now he comes off as a total douche and very unlikeable to the audience, but i hope as the story develops and the audience learns more about him they will begin to understand him and how he operates. There is more to come!!! 

I'm gonna try my best to update asap. I already have plans for the next few chapters, now i just have to start typing it up. 

Your support means a lot to me! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 25 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4

Oh yea...you are moving along VERY well with this story. I like how Ellie has a little assumption of what Nick does, it makes her smarter. I loved the family lunch. Nick really stepped up and showed me that he truly does love Ellie.

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Date: May 27 2011

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 149]
Summary:

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Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 47316
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Seek and You Shall Find Him

Soooo....excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next! WTH is Nora up too. I feel for my baby Alcide though, but I know he will be a great ally to Pam and Eric. Please don't be too long with the next update, but we all understand that life happens.



Author's Response:

Hi Brown_mocha:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I know, poor Alcide.  He never seems to get the girl, does he? First Debbie, then Sookie, now Tara.  I must confess that he is one my favorite characters on TB and that's mainly why put him in this story.  Plus, it's always fun to have another alpha-male who can keep Eric on his toes.

Warm regards,

wisedec4u

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Sacrifice

Sooo good. I'm glad there wasa conclusion.

 

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Date: December 09 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Sacrifice

Sooo good. I'm glad there wasa conclusion.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 😊



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 😊

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Date: December 09 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 122]
Summary:

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This is the SECOND edition in the "Unbreakable Bonds" series.


Brandy and Maks decide to leave sunny LA, (and their best friends, the DiCaprio's) behind for the bright lights of New York.

Between Maks' overbearing mother, and the temptations of the sex driven city, their love will be tested in ways they never imagined.



Story Notes: Reviews, like good manners are always appreciated.         
 ~.~.~.~.~Happy Reading~.~.~.~.~

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: Unbreakable Bonds
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 40429
Read Count: 133598
Published: January 29 2012
Updated: May 24 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Signs and Wonders...

I'm so confused..who's Melanie? It's starting to jump around a lot for me. Maybe it's just me though. 



Author's Response:

There are three connecting stories; "Love Reawakened", "Brandy & Maks", and "Facing Your Destiny" in that order. You really have to read them in order to get a full understanding of what's going on, who's who, and what's what.

The majority (if not all) of the characters originally came from "Love Reawakened", so you have to really start there to find out how everyone is connected.

It went from what was supposed to be a simple love story to a multi-volume book with characters bursting out at the seams. LOL!

I hope it makes a little more sense now. =)

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 14 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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P.J. O'Rourke once said that even a band of angels can turn ugly and start looting if enough of them are unemployed and hanging around the Pearly Gates...

A high school sex-ed teacher struggles with a sex addiction while living in a community of dysfunctional Los Angelites as their lives and loves cross paths of temptation and self-revelation all in the city of angels.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 12023
Read Count: 1829
Published: February 29 2012
Updated: March 23 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue pt. 1- Morning Glory

I'm interested. Very curious to see how all these stories will intertwine. My heart aches thinking that Cleo will get hurt in the end. 



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Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 02 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

She wanted her gone.

So she was gone.

He wanted her to be his.

So she did not stay...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 9487
Read Count: 4174
Published: March 07 2012
Updated: March 17 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the twists and turns. I'm glad she gave the Spaniard what for, but where is she going now? 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 18 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 606]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90495
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 2: I need to know how the hell you manage to make it down any fashion runway alive."

Love it! Continue

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 30 2012

Title: Chapter 4: You actually live in this shithole?

This plan is sooooooooo gonna bite Shaun in the butt!!!!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 30 2012

Title: Chapter 17: I just want you to be happy Adam.

Greeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaat ending!!! When you make this girl do a huge girly sigh at the end..job well done. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2014

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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:


 


Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me Im Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 17166
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013


Title: Chapter 7: No Turning Back...

So I'm really glad I gave this story a chance. Fallan is messed up, but goes to show a guy will say some jacked stuff to get his rocks off. I can't wait for all of this to come to a head!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 16 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 41]
Summary:

When best friends Bonnie Bennett and Greta Martin find themselves betrothed to men named Salvatore and Winchester, respectively, Greta comes up with the idea to switch potential husbands. But Damon Salvatore isn't fooled so easily.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38260
Read Count: 14062
Published: April 30 2012
Updated: July 02 2012


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So I just don't really get Bonnie. I thought she was stronger than this? Is she still wearing the necklace? Even if she is, she was suspicious of it while wearing it..so take the damn thing off. I happen to like Winchesters, but I do like Bonnie with Damon, but not under these circumstances. Bonnie nees a slap to the face clean house with everyone who's wronger her, and go find herself in some distant land..alone. Then maybe come back stronger than ever. As of right now she's acting a lil soft in the head and weak. It's irking me how she's just going along with everything. GEEEEEZ! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 18 2012

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[Reviews - 201]
Summary:

 

Shonti Brown, Chicago socialite and events/party blogger, is stuck in Hohenwald, TN due to her late grandfather’s, a man she barely knew, unusual stipulation of her having to stay two weeks on her newly inherited farm if she wanted to keep the farm in the family or the other partner, Richard Vaughn, would get full ownership of the farm.  Shonti goes through an emotional roller coaster as she tries to cope with living in the shadow of her late grandfather and falling in love, reluctantly, with Richard.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 39734
Read Count: 67622
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: June 25 2018


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well, hot damn.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 04 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Once in your life you find somebody who turns your world completely upside down. You love them just as much as you hate them. You do things you wouldn't normally do but everything you do, you do it like crazy..



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Love Me Im Crazy
Series: Challenges
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11309
Read Count: 19810
Published: June 11 2012
Updated: June 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Like Crazy

Umm...wow? LOL.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 12 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 104]
Summary:

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BOOK I | GENESIS 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Undisclosed Desire Series
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4493
Read Count: 80165
Published: July 13 2012
Updated: January 29 2020


Title: Undisclosed Desire

As with all the Gods and Goddessess stories, when it comes to Hera..I'll always root for her. Zeus has never and nor will ever be...hmm..don't what the word I'm looking for is, maybe redeemable...how can all his faults just go by the way side no clue. He disgusts me. I suppose the only innocent in this story is Pandia, but even so...geezel pete!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 07 2012

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Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 108912
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 6: The world is mine.

Oh..I was hoping for some redemption for Vita, but alas I think he's just going to be..the villain...Oh well..loving this story and waiting patiently for hopefully a longer update!



Author's Response:

Well, don't lose hope for him yet. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 13 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 271]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 80241
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Looking forward to the next update. I feel like Mr. Gringale is going to hit the roof. I would like to have a little bit more insight about him of course. 



Author's Response:

More is coming on Stephan in the next chapter.  LOL He is not going to be happy with Cara.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 07 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

hlh

When aspiring chef Achilles Vanholme returns to his childhood village of Westingshire to restore his grandmother's once renown bakery, he's immediately without means, money, or the much-needed staff to uphold the woman's last wish. But when four tenacious so-called goddesses thrust themselves into his life, all claiming to have more than a trick or two up their sleeves with plans for the bakery, Achilles finds his granny may have left him a bit more than just a "divine" sense of hope!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Female/Female, Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9022
Read Count: 13254
Published: January 05 2013
Updated: March 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Introduction to the Cast

Glad to see you back! I'm still waiting on my girl Vesta!!!  I have a feeling that he's seen her tattoos and just can't remember. Does it still matter who gets the baby first? 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for staying tuned! Oh yes, Vesta's arrival's sure to put everyone in their place straight. Yes, he has seen those tattoos before and he'll be reminded why shortly. To their knowledge yes, whomever pops one out first is still the only to be released from the contract. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 12 2013

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

From Sunport toWindenburg

In an attempt to move forward with his life; widower, father, and Keeper, Joshua, makes the decision to take his daughter to Windenburg. With the support of best friend and fellow monster slayer, Adrian, the two person family boards the train and head for their new home.

Although the ride from Sunport to Windenburg is a short journey, the trip will prove to be interesting when the train comes to a sudden stop and buried feelings begin to surface.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5895
Read Count: 2397
Published: March 11 2013
Updated: March 11 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

THIS.MUST.BE.CONTINUED!!!! Soooo romantic!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 11 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 82]
Summary:

It is a tedious thing...to love someone with every molecule of your being, yet keep them blissfully unaware. How long before the act begins to fray at the seams?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Crackfic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2189
Read Count: 11408
Published: March 21 2013
Updated: June 03 2015


Title: Platonic Facade

Please continue!!!! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 18 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.