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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Leiya Tate was a woman on the run from the life she thought she wanted and the man she once loved. When she learns that her ex-husband plans to take sole custody of her son, she hatches a plan for the both of them to disappear forever. So how does the ex-wife of one of the most prominent and powerful businessmen in the country disappear? That was the question Leiya asked herself until she comes across a photo she'd tucked away of her mother and the aunt she never knew. Adele Waters was the light at end of a tunnel filled with darkness; her way out of Adrien's grasp. It didn't hurt that she resided in a town so small that someone like Adrien Tate would never take notice. Here, Leiya is able to breath again....to live again, if she dares. Just as she decides to let go, she finds herself facing the devil in a fight for everything she has.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 22230
Read Count: 12866
Published: September 10 2014
Updated: September 25 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Man, I understand Leiya has a hard go of it, but dang if her personality didn't grate on my nerves this chapter. I'm ready to see how Leiya evolves. Great start. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 16 2015

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215305
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

Very sad, but good update! Can't wait until this is revealed to Camille. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 16 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Sooooo good!!! Sooo sweet. Please keep these updates coming. I'm enjoying the slow build between Hiram and Camille! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 18 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Great update!!!!!!! Ohhhh the feels! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 24 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

Loved the update....that kiss was fiyah! I love love love the slow burn between these two. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 08 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

I hope Debs gets her ass whooped. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 10 2014

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

It's crazy how much I love this story!!!! I would love to see a semi-sequel involving little Stevie if that's possible. My heart wrenches for that little boy! So good. Please keep up the good work! 

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Date: December 14 2014

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36

This update was very surreal. It kind of seems out of character for both of them just to let Debbie fall to her death. I mean Hiram prying her fingers off of Camille? Hmm...I don't know. I'll be waiting for the next update. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

Squueee!!!! Love it! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: August 22 2015

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 44

Ohh....wow. Definitely boohooed at the end of this update. Poor Camille all that pain...smh. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 13 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

My submission for the grindhouse challenge. Jessa has been living for a year in the Masion inherited to her by her now dead parents whom she never met. Finding her new gated community disturbing at first, it has grown to become her home. Jessa is about to discover how and why, herself and the two handsome brothers that live across the street, Ren and Garrett are bonded to each other. With their help, she will learn her true calling.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5380
Read Count: 8232
Published: October 15 2014
Updated: November 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Members of the Triquetra

I'm totally digging what you have with this story. I can't wait to see what you have in for store for these characters and us, the readers. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm loving the imaginative freedom I can have with it. Thanks for reading brown_mocha.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 18 2014

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[Reviews - 286]
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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40805
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Gooooo Dominic!!!! I hope this reveal from Dina is what he needed for him to move on. I'm loving the development of Adaline!!! I can't wait to see what her night out will reveal about herself. She comes with some baggage like most do, but she's strong and can overcome. Her family is awful to her, but I get some twisted joy out of seeing them interact with her. I cannot wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 06 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Her family is a mess! I can't wait to go on this journey/rollercoaster ride. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 24 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Soooooo damn good! I am loving the character development with these too. It's going to make me sad to see Murphy hurt in the end, but le sigh...things will work out for the best. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

You came back with a bang! I love it! Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next update missy. However, if that does happen we will still forgive you. LOL.

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Date: November 15 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I love how you are setting up Adaline and Dominic's relationship....le sigh!!! I'm anxious to see what happens next! Especially when Evilyn aka Carla comes into town. Adaline is coming into her own and I feel that Dominic and Carla with her potential scheming will come to some home truths about themselves. 

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Date: November 21 2015

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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40496
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

This is such an interesting story!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really loving every character because they are all mulitdimensional. Please don't keep us waiting for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading!  More is coming

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 08 2014

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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16593
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Secrets Out

Joshua is cute! Man...Tobias talking dirty is always a surprise for me. Hahahaha...

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 15 2015

Title: Chapter 11: In two's

So glad to see this story being updated!!! That was a fiyah chapter. I just love Tobias's patience and Joss is literally opening up more and more. I wonder if it will get a little angsty in the future. I'm a sucker for strife. 

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Date: May 06 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Swim Test

Daaaaaaaaamn...Tobias about to lay it down!



Author's Response:

lmao the boy making plans that for sure.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 03 2014

Title: Chapter 7: First Things First

Ohhh la la!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 31 2014

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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

SCRUBALICIOUS: one day her prince will come (The Scrub Series Book 2) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15061
Read Count: 2917
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 26 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So, I know I'm supposed to sympathize with Erin, but I really don't like her right now. I hate drunk driving. I know it's just the first update and we don't know that much about her. However, she's a fracking doctor. Throwing her whole career away over a man. I mean I don't get it. Obviously she worked her ass off to get where she is. Hmm...I could only pity her during the argument betwen her and Murari. I was just yelling at her to keep it together and let his shisty ass walk away. Which fairy tale is this story based off of? I can't figure it out unless you haven't revealed that aspect to us yet. I will be looking to see what happens next with the next update. 



Author's Response:

Erin is an achiever.  She has excelled at everything she's put her mind to.  This is the first time she has faced real rejection-- no excuse  (I know) but she is distraught and bad things are going to happen.  The parallel between this story and a fairy tale is the foreign prince, Murari. I hope you wii continue to read.  Thanks.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 28 2014

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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18107
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Shut Up and Metal

Oh..yes, yes, yes! Please continue. I'm assuming the other women are for the other guys!!!! Can't waiiiiiit! This story is right up my alley. 



Author's Response:

There are going to be some different roles for everyone, but that's an interesting idea. We'll see how the chemistry flows. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 30 2014

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Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10871
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The curve ball

Hahaha..I'm loving the development of this story! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 02 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The argument

Soooo glad this has been updated!!!!! Loved it and I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 28 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.