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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Ethan West has never been one to control his wolf, he let his instincts rule and they never failed him. Until his wolf insisted on marking Mia Kane as his mate. Maybe it wouldn't have been so bad if Mia wasn't a human. Ethan despised humans and taking one as a mate was the last thing he wanted to do.

Mia Kane should be living her best life, her music career took off, she won a Grammy for best new artist and she was selling out arenas all over the world. Life was perfect except for the fact that she tragically lost her family in an accident the night of the awards show. When the whirlwind was over her best friend and manager Elizabeth Jones forces her to take some down time at her parent's bed and breakfast. When Ethan shifts and bites her, her life takes an unexpected turn for the worst.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 28478
Read Count: 66480
Published: January 22 2018
Updated: July 08 2019


Title: Chapter 9: The Chase

Goody for you! LOL, I'm enjoying his discomfort. I was going to be greatly disappointed if she just stayed at her home, but alas wonderful author you did not disappoint. Waiting anxiously for the next update. 

 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 05 2018

Title: Chapter 3: New Reality

Great start! I love supernatural stories!! Waiting impatiently for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 09 2018

Title: Chapter 5: The Next Day

Loooved the update.  I hope our couple has a nice slow burn to love. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 27 2018

Title: Chapter 6: Pack House

Loved this update!! I wonder who the woman was that she was looking at from the window. Ethan will have a long way to go. I hope his secret with the humans will be enough to make up for some of his behavior. Who am I kidding, it probably won't! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 12 2018

Title: Chapter 8: Get Away

She made a break for it!!! Get it girl!!!! I can't wait to read what's next. Great job on keeping me coming back for more! 



Author's Response:

Thanks i am glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 30 2018

Title: Chapter 12: Restless

Very nice to see an update. Hmmm...wondering where Ethan, Shawn and James will land with Mia! Only time will tell. Can’t wait for an update. Oh yeah, if she’s in heat is she likely to get pregnant by James??!!!??

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 20 2019

Title: Chapter 13: The Return

The development of this story is delicious. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 13 2019

Retired
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

The best revenge is living well or as well as you can when you’re a refugee living in the aftermath of a nuclear holocaust and pregnant by your cheating ass of an ex-husband.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Anastasia Dualla
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5283
Read Count: 12841
Published: February 26 2018
Updated: December 27 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dee

Loving this take on their story. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: February 28 2018

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Lee

Get it Dee!!!!!!!!!! I love this. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 12 2018

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Kara

Get it Dee! Gosh I wish this was how her character actually was on the show!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: November 26 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

A werebear/werewolf story



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 18877
Read Count: 8408
Published: April 08 2018
Updated: July 28 2020


Title: Chapter 5: ELEVEN YEARS LATER

Very good update! I'm loving how the children could possibly match up. I few word misusages, but nothing a quick proofread wouldn't fix. I love this story. Do the wolves speak to each other telephathically when in wolf form? I got a little confused that there was no indication of that when Cannon and Tala were talking. When the weres shift back are they nude or do their clothes meld back on or something? Just a few questions I had. Can't wait for the next update! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 04 2018

Title: Chapter 4: EXILE

Getting good! I can't wait for a reunion and some vengeance!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 20 2018

Title: Chapter 7: CLAIMING HIS MATE

Oooooweeee Cannon is going to be in trouble! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: December 24 2018

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Truck never expected to get a visit from Wynne, his  estranged wife of two years. Wynne harbors some secrets of her own. Will they let go of the past, live in the present, and hope for the future? "I came back, I came back for you!" Wynne shouted teeth bared eyes wide.  He didn't move, stood like a mountain before her, his eyes cold and hard. "I never asked you to."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2998
Read Count: 726
Published: May 23 2018
Updated: May 23 2018


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Call me interested! I want to unravel all this mystery. 



Author's Response:

Hi brown_mocha, thank you for your review! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: May 24 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Tradgedy strikes leaving Anthony Romano to be a single father to his twin girls. He may not be single for long when he finds himself falling for the quiet and reserved godmother of his girls Phoebe Jones. Dark secrets come to light things about Phoebe that Anthony never knew. Things they would both have to get through.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14123
Read Count: 5798
Published: November 18 2018
Updated: July 20 2020


Title: Chapter 2: ANTHONY II (REVISED)

SOOOOOOOO....good!! My heart aches for this little family!! I can't wait for the next update! 

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Date: December 24 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

After four days of being buried,Philia found purpose in her tolerance and preparing meals. She cooked for Death because she was good at it and she stayed within his iron walls because he needed someone to be there when he came home from work.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6400
Read Count: 878
Published: May 15 2019
Updated: July 01 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Round Moon,Closing Sky

I’m completely lost but I loooooove it! So many thoughts running through my head, so many questions!!!!! I Can’t wait for another chapter. And my goodness they are so wonderfully long chapters at that! Love this story and so original! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 05 2019

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

It's never easy raising a special needs child espically when you have a demanding career and you're a single parent. However when you're sent the perfect woman to help you; you don't turn her away especially when you're falling in love with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4921
Read Count: 1408
Published: December 02 2019
Updated: May 30 2020


Title: Chapter 2: JUST TEMPORARY

Glad to this this story received an update! I'm so intrigued by a heroine in a wheelchair! I absolutely love the concept. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 02 2020

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 187]
Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11478
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7: The New Assistant

Dunn..dunnn.dduuuuuuuuuunnnn!!! And let even more drama be added! Muahahahahahah...I.cannot.wait. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 26 2020

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8: The Showdown

OOOOOOwwwwwweee!!! I'm loving the build up of this drama! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: July 14 2020

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

She would always be his Queen. In this life and in the next. 

 

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 199825
Read Count: 102816
Published: January 10 2020
Updated: December 03 2022


Title: Chapter 10: 아홉

Hmmm...I wonder if the brother is behind this? No telling! I also wonder if Tiye's assault will come into to play once she decides to become intimate with the prince. Hmmm...so many questions and so much more to go! Love this story! 



Author's Response:

Hi brown_mocha love! Thank you for commenting hehe. THANK YOU! I love your commentary! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 25 2020

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239] New!
Summary:

 

West Virginia Hills

 

Wallflower Abby Kensington is ready to start living her best life!  This road trip is the first of many exciting steps she is taking.  However, on her journey she meets a man who has a different plan in store for her...

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 153219
Read Count: 49369
Published: March 24 2020
Updated: March 18 2024


Title: Chapter 11: Abby has a day out...(pt.1)

Don't belittle your work. That's first and foremost. If you're enjoying the writing. I'm enjoying the reading. 

Girl! You dropped a bomb on us with Elias? Unit? Was he military? Is his potential other Jas...Jasmine(?) 

I need more stat!!! LOL! 



Author's Response:

Lol...Thank you so much! I've really appreciated your feed back and am taking it to heart.  Keep reading to find out... *cackles mischeviously*

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: June 04 2020

Title: Chapter 15: Abby wakes up very early...

Damn...I have fallen so hard for this story! The development has been amazing!!!! I really hope and wish for future stories involving the other men of the mountain and the sistahs they encounter. I've already have the women conjured in my mind for Little Walter and Matthias! LOL! Strong and sturdy black women. Hahah



Author's Response:

This made me smile so hard!  I have been working to improve my technique but I thought if I'm going to make this story weird I might as well go full crazy!  I'm tossing back and forth whether to give Walker and Mattias love interests...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Stay safe!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: October 11 2020

Title: Chapter 3: Abby makes her first stop...

Elias makes me smile. He seems so cute. Also, whatever you're transferring your story from to the site...leaves the font so faint it can't be read easily. I'm not sure how you can fix it, but wanted to let you know. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I am still getting used to the uploading process. I have been checking the format from other devices and it looks okay.  I will keep an eye out though.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: March 24 2020

Title: Chapter 9: Abby goes to church...

Ohhhhh....I like Ms. Seraphine! I think her and Abby will get along well and cause all sorts of mischief. She seems like a straight shooter and tell Abby what the hell is going on. Dang it, I do not like the daddy stuff, but to each there own I suppose. Please don't leave us hanging too long with the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yes she definitely will keep an eye out for Abby.  I know the "daddy" stuff isn't for everyone but I felt it would and another layer...  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 20 2020

Title: Chapter 2: Abby heads out...

I'm right there conflicted with Abby. This story drums up some strong emotions tied to all different type of places. I'll continue reading because the story is interesting. I don't know if I should root for the couple and hope something healthy forms, or root for Abby's escape. Confused! LOL! I can't wait for another chapter. Please continue. 



Author's Response:

Yes I am as well...I am trying to stay true to her motivation.  Stay tuned and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
Date: April 12 2020

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.