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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I hope things are well with you. I having a feeling you will not be returning to the chamber. Eventually this story will be available for purchased on Amazon. Please take care. Thank you Bain

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed
Date: March 13 2019
To Last a Lifetime by intellectual titmouse
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[Reviews - 478]
Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

Gorgeous Banner by Valhalla



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78804
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016

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Title: To Last a Lifetime

IT this chapter is not rusty as fuck. You have not lost the magic touch. I'm glad you have time to update this story.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01 2016
Inconvenient Miracles by Joelle Jax
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

While Riley waits for devastating news of one sort, she receives word of another.  Will she refuse to accept either, or surrender to the inconvenient miracle?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4378
Read Count: 1496
Published: October 07 2013
Updated: October 07 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cannot believed that I miss this gem. Such a lovely story.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2021
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Consequence by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Hello Joelle Jax,

Is this lovely story going to be published soon? Will you be taking down your remaining stories.

Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Hi Bain!

I don't have any immediate plans to take down any additional stories, or to publish Consequence. If that changes, I'll be sure to post an update on my profile and/or the story itself. 

Thanks so much for your continued interest and support!

 

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed
Date: September 05 2022
Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Hello Joelle Jax,

I'm finally able to write a review for your story. Your story has touch me so deeply that I could not sleep at night. The relationship between Anthony and Natalia was breath taking and I felt like a peeping tom, while I read the ups and downs of this couple. It have been over two months since I had read this story and I'm ashamed because I did not leave a review for every chapter. You are amazing writer,their are few authors that are able to write such outstanding literature. Your writing is a thing of beauty. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this AMAZING review, Bain!  Your kind words mean the world to me, especially at this complicated time in my writing life.  And please don't feel bad about not reviewing every chapter.  I truly appreciate you taking the time to share this one.  Again, thank you, and be blessed.

Joelle  

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

Just reading this novel again......and again. I love these characters so much. I do not know if you're going to removed this story, so taking advance of reading this novel again. Such a lovely story and its writer is divine.  Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, Bain!!! I don't have any immediate plans of removing it. If I do, it'll be for publishing, and I'll have a comp copy just for you.

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Date: June 16 2021
The Uninvited by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

When Annalese Evans agrees to serve as medical staff abroad a corporately owned space station, she finds herself involved in an illicit relationship with the chief researcher and leader of their small team, Dr. Jackson Franco.  With the exception of periodic flares in Dr. Franco’s anger and his ego, all is well with their four-man crew—that is until they rescue a stranded cosmonaut who brings to bear the past Annalese thought she’d left behind.  With his arrival, it soon becomes frighteningly clear that not everyone on board is who they claim to be.  

When Annalese is forced to decide which man to trust, will she choose the man with whom she has shared her bed, or the stranger with the face of the man with whom she once shared her heart?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9174
Read Count: 2708
Published: August 04 2014
Updated: September 21 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Missing Signals

This such a damn good story, only four chapters. I read this story as and thinking just wow. I hope one day you will update this story. Thank you Bain

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2021
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Love, Sister: A Short Romance by TheHistorian
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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36913
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017

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Title: Chapter 10: Lovers

This story is brillant. Love the characters interactions.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15 2016
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Love, God & Negotiations by Joelle Jax
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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78661
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021

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Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Rite of Possession

Breathtaking and so real. I'm in love with your usage of the English language. Thank you.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Fallen Angels

Tyler deserved that ass whipping from Brandon. Brandon is one mean bastard and he is ready to protect Diya.  This chapter is cold, yet brillant.



Author's Response:

Thanks blueangel!  Yeah, Tyler really was asking for it, especially when he decided to come for Diya.  

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Date: January 13 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Undone

Brillant to the tenth power!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks blueangel!!!  You got a girl blushin' over here : )

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Date: February 14 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Date Night, First Fight (Revised)

This chapter is rocking hard. I'm in love with Brandon and Diya chaotic courtship. This couple belong together. I did not review every chapter, but you madame are a gifted author. Your writing is a thing of beauty. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the amazing review!!!  "Chaotic courtship" describes Diya and Brandon's relationship perfectly.  I'm too tickled to know you're enjoying it.  Thanks again! 

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Date: January 03 2016
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Cause (Revised)

Excellent, Glad Brandon and Diya finally admit their feeling for each other.



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Thanks blueangel!!!

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Date: January 28 2016
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - [Bran]ded

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Thanks blueangel!!!

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Date: March 05 2016
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Tug of War

Your writing has a language of its own, simple and well place words convey what Brandon and Diya feel about each other. I scream when I saw your update. Beautiful writing and by the by welcome back you have been miss. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Aw, Bain, you are too kind.  Thanks so much for the encouraging words, and for reading and reviewing!!!  All are very much appreciated.

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Date: September 26 2018
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Angles

Marisol is a nasty little troll, Brandon is starting to see her ugly ways. Diya needs to draw a line in the sand, those brats will have to be upset! I hope Brandon will sit Marisol sorry bottom down and give hammer her with the words " Stay the hell out of my private life" As always this story is brillant. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Brandon should definitely create some boundaries for Marisol, but isn't likely to, despite the frustration he clearly feels toward her.  Not so long as he has the little ones playing on his sympathies.  What that'll cost him is the questions.  Thanks, Bain!!!

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05 2018
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - In the Beginning (The Last Supper Part I)

Brillant to the tenth power!! That damn family of Diya need to stay out of her business, Brandon was so calm dealing with their rotten mannners. Diya needs to run from that toxic brand of family. Because if I was grab by my father, hell would break lose. That was not cool. Diya father is lucky his daughter was callm because Brandon would have been all over his ass. Joelle Jax you have made my evening. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Yeah, William and his crew were all the way out of order.  And it only gets worse.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Bain!!!

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 15 2018
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the End (The Last Supper Part II)

Brandon needs to come clean and tell Diya everything. Marisol and her brats need to find another hero. Diya must distance herself from her family, and find another job immediately. Maybe both need time to figure out what must be done in order for them to move forward toward the future. They are in love but too many secrets are tearing them apart. I need Brandon and Diya to have a happy ending. Brillant writing as usual!! Thank you Bain

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20 2018
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

Can Diya and Brandon catch a break. Diya damn family and Brandon trying to save Marisol sorry butt. Those bad apple are toxic. Brillant story as always, I'm glad you are well and please take care. Thank you Bain

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Date: March 06 2019
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Dark Days Ahead...

Okay I did a re-read, I want Diya and Brandon to go away for a few days and talk. Diya needs to find another job away from that bastard of a father. Matter fact leave that family alone and Brandon need to decided that Marisol and her brats come last to Diya. Rafe is Marisol brother he can deal with the ex-husband. I so want Diya and Brandon to come together and set boundaries with family and so called friends (Marisol). Something is not right about Diya parents, father is a controlling ass and mother is a harpy. Once brillant and emotional story, Love your body of work. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Time away and some clearly defined boundaries are definitely in order, but hard to come by for two people who are so invested in the their family and friends.  And then there's the matter of the bombs William dropped at Sunday dinner and the effect of Diya's reaction to them.  More on that to come.

Thanks so much for the read, reviews, and well-wishes, Bain! Be abundantly, exceedingly blessed, as well.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06 2019
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

So Marisol the eternal victim is Brandon first love! What the hades and this will hurt or break Diya and Brandon apart. If Diya and Brandon are going to be together Marisol and the brats need to go, as for Diya family they also need to go. I truly believe Brandon love Diya but he allow his-self to be friend with this toxic person( Marisol), and Marisol is using her children to keep Brandon in the loop. Brandon never has a chance to move onl with his life because of being nice and instead of giving Marisol the finger. Brillant writing and thank you. Bain



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and your incredibly kind words, Bain!!!

Yeah, Marisol is a non-starter if Brandon hopes to preserve what he has with Diya.  But it's gonna be super difficult for him to cut off Marisol AND the girls.  Dare I say impossible?

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2019
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Date Redux

I did a re-read of this story, Diya needs to walk away from Brandon. He is trouble with a capital "T". If he is truly in love with Diya he would run not walk away from Marisol and the brats. The brats are young and they could get over this. They have a father and other males in their lives. Diya needs a re-do on eveyone right now, get another job and move out of town. Do not leave a forwarding address. Brillant story. Thank you Bain



Author's Response:

Thanks Bain!!!  Things do look pretty bleak, at the moment.  Marisol has a hold on Brandon strengthened by the girls.  For her sanity, Diya might not have any choice but to walk away.  

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Date: March 13 2019
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

WoW!! What the hell, Brandon is unstable and Marisol is a bitch. Do not like those two right now. Diya run. Excellent chapter.

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 17 2019
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Truth Be Told

Joelle Jax, Simple and beautiful writing. Brandon is ruin goods and Diya should not have to deal with Marisol interruptions into her life. I truly believed Brandon and Diya are deeply in love, but Marisol and the brats should not be part of there lives if Diya allowed Brandon back into her heart. Outstanding literature. Thank you Bain

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Date: October 05 2019
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - More Than Words

Brillant update, Please stay the course on this story. I'm patient and when you are ready to present a new chapter for our pleasure..... in months or longer so be it. I love your writing. Now lets talk about Brandon unwilliness to cut off the trouble maker/ brats. May be it time for Diya to part ways with Brandon. Brandon should have chose Diya period!!

 Reviewer: blueangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2020

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