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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128406
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: The Preacher's Son

You had better post that sequel today! I am so addicted to this story, and to these characters that I barely made it through work. You had me reading on my phone all of lunchtime. Congratulations on a well written, heartwarming Christian story.



Author's Response:

You realize, of course, that I was not that productive at work on Saturday and today.  I have close Wed. so I guess I better get busy!  LOL. Im gong to have to do some work tomorrow....ok maybe I'll sneak a chapter in here or there, we'll see.

I'm going to stort putting it out, but have a little mercy on me.  LOL!!!

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

No! Don't stop there! Great story.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Family

Good Morning,

I would be thrilled if you would consider my book, Amended Hearts. It's published under the name Noelle Vonham Paling as an ebook on Amazon. I've sold a few copies to people who wish to support my efforts, and just received a Facebook plug from a reader, but it is incredibly difficult to get comments on Amazon. I'm sure you know that it's almost impossible to get noticed on Amazon without them, and so the Book Tour would bring me much needed attention.

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Date: March 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25019
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great addition. Waiting impatiently for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Next chapters coming up soon.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90694
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 14: 'How to Land a Rockstar in Thirty Days'

I don't like Celia. My friends don't make decisions for me, and then expect for me to just accept their unsolicited interference. They trust my judgment. Celia was disrespectful about their relationship, in the same way that Shaun's parents were disrespectful. I may not be crazy about my friends' spouses and significant others at all times, but I do respect their right to make a decision. In my mother's words. If they can live with them, I can eat with them, which is all that is required on a rare occasion. My opinions are neither warranted, nor welcome.

I love, love, love this story. You have completely redeemed a seemingly irredeemable Please let us know when you are going to continue. We are all waiting quite desperately for the reunion.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Stereo Published!

Congrats! I am so happy for you, and you are going to kill 'em on Amazon. I bought my copy, and can't wait to leave a glowing review.



Author's Response:

Thank you Noelle, from the bottom of my heart!

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Date: August 31 2014

Title: Chapter 15: "Are hose and garter your normal Friday night get-up?”

So glad to have you back. I have been wishing for an update to this story.

 

Please don't let her get involved in Maxim's world. She's going to destroy herself, or die trying. I desperately want Adam to turn around, instead of leaving her there all alone. He can't just throw the woman he loves to the wolves, when he can see that she will be eaten alive by the people in that room. Once her fifteen minutes are up, then what? All he has to do is tell the world that she wrote that article about him. She'll have more writing jobs than she can handle.

 

I thought that when he acknowledged to himself that they both intended to use each other in the beginning, before their relationship, that he would see sense. I hope that I wasn't entirely wrong on that point. I really hope that he doesn't allow her to land in drugs or get hurt before he changes his mind. Adam is a sophisticated man who is accustomed to the lifestyle. Shaun is just a baby who thinks that she can handle herself. Everyone needs to have people who watch their back. Right now, she has no one. Perhaps his bandmates can talk some sense into him?

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2014

Title: Chapter 16: “If anything happens to her I swear to god I’ll fucking kill you.”

O-M-G! He is such a freaking idiot! He's going to let her leave? I just know she's preggers. She'll be across the country with Baby Adam, and he won't know a thing about it. Hmmm. I smell a sequel.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2014

Title: Chapter 17: “I just want you to be happy Adam.”

I'm going to need an epilogue. That was way too good not to know the final outcome. I will not take no for an answer. Well, I will compromise if you agree to write a sequel, featuring the two of them.



Author's Response:

Perhaps an epilogue is in order.  I will definitely keep it in mind (as well as a sequel)! I appreciate the review, thank you for reading my story!

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2014

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 77979
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 13: {Thirteen}

This is excellent! I love the way that you turn their lovemaking into a triumph over her monsters. It's so passionate, so uninhibited. As a person who has worked with many victims of rape and incest, I love reading the portions of these stories where they take back their sexual power. It's such a beautifully expressive thing between two people who love each other that to do anything else would be such a shame.

Thank you for not making the police officers stupid. My family bleeds blue, and stories where the cops just blindly go in following someone's lies really annoy me. Police officers are generally quite intelligent, and observant people. They have to be, to stay alive. A few bad/stupid ones shouldn't spoil our image of these brave men and women in uniform.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10 2014

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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108469
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I don't want to rush you, but...No. I'm going to stop lying. Yes, I do. I love this story. Are you updating, soon? I feel as though I am going through withdrawal symptoms, waiting for Tamaeya to kick his mother's narrow behind. Pleae, please, please, pretty please with a cherry on top, update as soon as you can.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yes, I'm working on the update as we speak.  It should be out by Sunday, so hold on for a bit longer.  LOL  More is coming!

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2013

Title: Regret

You're back! We've missed you. Well, I can only speak for myself, but I have looked for this story daily. I truly cannot wait until the next installment. Excellent chapter. I love that little girl. She is quite a character.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words.  This story has been on my mind, but I had so much going on, I couldn't updte.  Even now things are hectic, but I'm glad I was able to get out a chapter.  More is coming next week (hopefully)

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

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Aaliyah Wyndham is a twenty-seven year old attorney working in the field of Entertainment Law. She has had a crush on her next-door neighbor, C.E.O. Gabriel Cortez, for over a year. Following a break-in, the two share a romantic interlude that seems quite promising, until Aaliyah realizes that Gabriel doesn‘t realize who she is! Aaliyah decides that for his oversight, she wants to make Gabriel pay, and make him pant.

There is only one problem with this plan: Lucas D'Alessandro, her best friend since childhood. He’s been Aaliyah‘s “Big Brother” for so long that she never notices when she begins to feel decidedly unlike his sister. Meanwhile, he is facing the same quandary, struggling to decide whether to pursue a more intimate connection with Aaliyah or to leave the field clear for someone else, namely Gabriel.

Shall Aaliyah rest her case with Gabriel, or shall she make a motion to Amend her Heart with Lucas?

This is a sweet romance story. It has been published, and so this is only an excerpt.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Ingenue
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15142
Read Count: 63461
Published: March 02 2013
Updated: April 19 2014


Title: Amended Hearts (Excerpt Only)

All done! I hope you enjoyed the rest.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed
Date: March 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Nina has just started to live her life. She drops out of school and moves to L.A. At 23 she is essentially having a midlife crisis. So at this point she was not mentally or emotionally prepared for a relationship. Then she meets Alexander, the dark stranger with as many secrets as there were stars.

 

Nina wants a brief affair but Alexander has different plans he has waited years for her to walk into his life and he is not willing to let her walk out of it so easily. Even when shadows from his past reappear he will fight for a future for them. The question is will she fight for a future with him? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7365
Read Count: 6233
Published: April 15 2013
Updated: June 20 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-The Beginning

That was a great start, thought the beginning could use the assistance of an editor's pen.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16835
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5--Feenin'

Surely there must be more to this story. Why did she leave him? Where does she live, now? Will they be able to work things out? Do they have a future together? Will she break his heart again? Come on! This couple is far too interesting to be put out to pasture.



Author's Response:

Wow! that's a lot of questions--I'll write more and hope you like it just as much the beginning.  Thank you for your review.

Peace

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286532
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

Woah. Talk about damaged goods. How can they possibly be good for each other with this many issues?

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014

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[Reviews - 1032]
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196730
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

He was a real jerk, and I didn't think you could redeem him. I was wrong. I am so ready for Sasha to become emotionally whole, and ready for a relationship. Perhaps they should have some transitional counseling, but this relationship is definitely salvageable and believable again. Congrats!

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04 2014

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Nice groveling. It's a little over the top, but so was that scene at the hospital. Please don't let her give in too soon. He has something to prove. Let him.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

My name is Camden, and I'm the ‘other' girl.

 

You know, the girl who was best friends with the popular girl in secondary school.

 

The girl who awkwardly stood there as yet again her friend gets hit on by a guy during fresher’s week.

 

The girl who doesn’t really fit the 'norm'.

 

My friends like to call me crazy.........I guess I would just say I'm 'different'.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9354
Read Count: 10435
Published: August 20 2013
Updated: August 28 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

Lolololol! That was The Best lLaugh of the day! Please continue, soon.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

The Coopers are your normal picture perfect couple. Twin boys successful bussiness, trophy wife and an adulterous husband. Watch as Elizabeth puts her foot down so her husband finally becomes the man she needs and deserves.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3204
Read Count: 2193
Published: August 20 2013
Updated: August 20 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I very much liked the story, and would have absolutely loved it had she made an effort to move on with somene new before letting him back into her life.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55745
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

Loved the story, but something seems to be missing between the last two chaters, and the ending is a bit rushed. Other than that, this was a well told, well thought out story with excellent characterization and pace,

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43887
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Well, I'm not exactly sure what to think, yet. This is enough to intrigue me, but not enough for me to make an informed decision. A meatier followup chapter should tell the tale.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed
Date: September 02 2013

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Eshan's mother is playing a perfect "Old Crone." You know, the literary figure who tries to manipulate and destroy the lives of younger people, because she desires power moreso than love? She seems to get some great payoff from being able to move people around like pieces on a chessboard. I wonder if she realizes that the Old Crone is usually left alone and friendless, if not dead?

I don't blame Joss for wishing to end things. How long can love endure, under these circumstances? They would have to move away, or at least stay away from her influence in the community. This would deny Eshan the love, respect and approval of the surrounding community that he has worked so diligently to obtain.

It's interesting that Eshan's mother thinks that she is saving her family from Joss. What if Yaghoub decides to exercise his right to divorce her, instead? He obviously loves his children, and his grandchildren, enough to wish them happy, and he must realize by now that she does not share those values. In addition, how could she shame her entire family this way, before the community, and expect for him to continue to support her actions?

Eshan's sisters have husbands, and if I were them, I would forbid that poisonous woman any contact with my family, including my children. After her threats and actions, she would never again enter my home.

Finally, by denying Eshan his "gift," she has cut off any relationship she hoped to continue to have with him. She may have also done the unthinkable: caused him to question his relationship with Allah. Humans are prone to wonder whether God is real, and whether He is concerned about our suffering, when these types of circumstances arise. Also, the officiant's refusal to perform the ceremony seems to have been a final straw for Joss. Wouldn't it be ironic if Eshan decided to turn from religion and from tradition because that harpy was trying to "save" him from Joss, a woman who was perfectly willing to honor both?

I doubt if the elder Mrs. Kourosh will have a crisis of conscience, but I do encourage you to have her experience Eshan in a crisis of faith, due to her actions. She is trying diligently to preserve the Eshan she knows and approves of, and does not realize that if he loses Joss, that Eshan will be gone forever. He will ever wonder, "Where is the reward for the faithful?" Even if he marries the woman of whom she approves, he will be a shadow of his former self, and have no real joy in her, as she is not his desired wife.

I do hope she realizes the consequences of her actions before it is too late, but in real life, she would probably be too drunk on power to bother with logic.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary: Can best friends Carlos Vega and Jasmine Clark remain in co-parenting heaven raising their six year old daughter. Will tension arise when a new man comes into Jasmine's life? Are they only meant to be just friends or will Carlos fight to be the head of his 'ready made family' when his feelings for Jasmine hit him like a ton of bricks!

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Family
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 281
Read Count: 1150
Published: February 08 2014
Updated: February 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Background

Sorry Carlos. I know this story hasn't started yet, but we've all seen this one before. This lady has been waiting for him to wake up and smell the hot chocolate for twelve years. He's a grown man, and I'm sure that by now he knows what he likes. She's been selling herself short, letting him take up all of her time and suck up her emotional energy, while her own needs go unfulfilled. (Can we say cobwebs?) Why does a beautiful, successful, well educated and desirable woman who is a good mother have to wait for anybody to realize her worth? Oh! That's right. She doesn't. If it took another man sniffing around her skirts and offering to take care of those cobwebs for old boy to wake up, then it strikes me as possessiveness and a sense of entitlement. Maybe his character wants us to think that he never realized his true feelings, but one of my favorite quotes is, "There are none so blind as those who will not see." He took it for granted that when he was done playing in the streets, she'd be his soft place to land, complete with loving child. All he had to do was monopolize her, and make sure that she didn't form an emotional connection with another man. That might have worked when she was younger, but when you hit thirty, hopefully you stop being stuck on stupid, take a good look at what you want and go after it. As you can tell, I'm already into this. I can't wait to see what you do with it.



Author's Response: Wow thanks so much for your review! I loved reading it! You are so right on so many points....but don't right Carlos off just yet. In my mind he is written like an onion, you'll have to read and watch to see the layers peel back. :)

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed
Date: February 08 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Sometimes the best things in life aren't real



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5912
Read Count: 8509
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: March 11 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Resolutions

I absolutely love this story! I hope you receive a fantastic grade, because you deserve it.

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.