Penname: choconilla89 [Contact]

Real name: Jen Harrison

Member Since: July 22 2011

Membership status: Member

Bio:

22 year old college student. Love to read and write, most especially about interracial relationships.




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Reviews by choconilla89


Dashenka: Half-Breed by Quills
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 163]
Summary:

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31953
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow!!! i don't know how you do it. you created your own world and through your writing you brought us into it. i hate to tell you this because i love reading this for free but you should really pursue getting your stories published. This story is just so amazing and i definitely can't wait to read more, published or nonpublished. Keep doing what you're doing because it is a joy to read and be a part of.

 Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed
Date: October 12 2011
Fame: The Story of Janice Farner by ButterflyBabe97
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary: Fame: The Story of Janice Farner, is about a small town girl with big dreams. She wants to be a big name musician like all the great before her. Follow her through her journey love, life, and struggles of being a rising star.

Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4929
Read Count: 15831
Published: May 05 2012
Updated: May 11 2012

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3:Singing In The Shower and A Kiss

Loving the Story!!! Great writing. Just one question is this story taking place in the 80's or did you move the characters into modern day?



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Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed
Date: May 08 2012
Pleasure Principal by Neighbor Lady
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

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(In response to the "Chains & Whips" challenge.)

A high school guidance counselor working at her alma mater discovers that the principal's office is still the place she goes to get punished.

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1860
Read Count: 2444
Published: May 25 2012
Updated: May 25 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you should continue this story. explore their relationship. Man what a great start!



Author's Response:

Thanks for feedback. Will see what I can do.

 Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed
Date: May 25 2012
Retired
IZZY'S CRAYON BOX by marchpisces92
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 85]
Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: ELEPHANT TRUNK

Your story timeline doesn't make sense. Why would a father send his daughter back after he found out she was being molested.... You need to start over again. 



Author's Response:

The the thrid chapter is a flashback I put in the chapter notes one month earlier. The first two chapters were present 

time and Luc has not sent Izzy back since  first few visits with her therapist who informed him that she was being

molested. So actually you need to read it over again and pay attention to the chapter notes.

 Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed
Date: February 13 2016
Euphoria by BlackOrchid
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Whoever said smalltown living was boring has never lived in this one. Welcome to Euphoria, Mississippi, where the population is small but the drama is big. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1803
Read Count: 647
Published: August 04 2020
Updated: August 04 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol, great start! 

 Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed
Date: August 04 2020

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